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Posted: 12 years ago
No clue at all...
Everyone so concerned for Aisha...
Some other target now..
WHO..??
Continue Soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
a big thanks for all those who have liked my story till now
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Posted: 12 years ago

Chapter 6B

He emptied his glass, took his packet and left the discotheque. He returned back to his motel, and opened the packet. He was dying with impatience to know who will be his next target. He emptied the packet on his bed, and it contained a lot of money, a sim card and the picture of a beautiful girl.

He put the sim in his mobile, and wanted for his client to phone him, all the while admiring the girl in the picture.

"Hmmm, yeh mein kya kar raha hoon? Yeh hamesha mujhe khoobsurat ladkiyons ko marne ka contract kyun deta hein!" he gave a kiss on the picture, "but unfortunately darling, work is work, i cant do any preferences!"

Just then his mobile started ringing, he picked up the phone and listened.

"She'll be your next target! But this time be careful and more well prepared cause she's not like your previous targets! She's good, very good!..."

He listened to all the information he was being told, his smile also increased as he digested all the information.

"hmmm finally i'll have a target which will be a pleasure to kill, someone worthy of being killed by my hands! I think i'll have fun this time!" he said back.

"Don't underestimate her, dont forget who she is!" the other person said and cut the call.

He threw the mobile on his bed, and lied down on the floor looking at her picture. After a very long time, he took out his lighter and burnt the image, afterall he had saved her face in his mind, and it wasn't his style to keep any proofs. He got up from the floor, and went to sleep for some time. Tomorrow he'll have to return back to the city, and then finally he'd make his plan of his attack. He liked to take all his time before killing his prey.

The next day

He got up very early, and took his small bag, he never carried too many things and clothes with him, paid his bill and went away for his train. After some hours he finally got out of the train and was back in the city...

At the ETF Office

"What the hell is happening? It's been more than one month now! And till now we have no clue absolutely about Reena's murderer!" Rathore was shouting at everyone in the morning.

Shree, Chotu and even Arjun lowered their head, because they couldn't find anything. Thankfully Aisha and Riya hadn't arrived yet, and didnt get to listen to Rathore's outburst. This was the common routine nowadays, they would come to the office one hour earlier, and try to work on Reena's case before Aisha and Riya reached the office.

After some minutes, both Riya and Aisha entered the office. They looked at the gloomy faces of the guys, and they both wanted to smile seeing them like that. Though Riya knew why they looked so gloomy, Aisha never guessed till now that they were working on her sister's case without informing her. Aisha said hi to everyone and went in her and Riya's cabin.

She sat down on her chair, and looked at the photo frame on her desk. She took it in her hand, and said, "Reena, i still miss you so much! Forgive me Reena! Till now i haven't been able to catch your murderer! I have tried and tried but nothing!" A lone tear fell from her eyes, which she wiped quickly before Riya entered into their office.

It had taken her a few days to get over the loss of her sister, and till now she couldn't even say that she had or will ever got over the loss of her sister. However after her sister's funeral, though she had been working with the ETF to find the murderer, after work, everyday she would return back to her old hangouts, and talked with all her contacts to find anything about Reena's murder. Afterall someone must have heard something. And finally last night she had got some information, which maybe could be useful or not. One of her contacts had given her a name of a man who had been in city during that time her sister was murdered. She pondered about informing her team about it or not, but then decided against it, because it may not lead to anything. She knew her team felt guilty for not being able to help her, and she did understand that they were doing their best. Tonight, after work she'll go to investigate further on that guy. When she had enough proofs, she would tell everyone about him, but for the time being she'll have to manage alone.

Soon the ETF got a new case. An old lady was found murdered in her home. She had been dead since a few days now, but it was only today that her body had been discovered by her neighbour due to the bad smell. Everyone got ready and went to the crime scene. Arjun, Riya and Shree went in one SUV, while Aisha, Rathore and Chotu took the other SUV.

While at the same time somewhere

He had been drinking chai and eating gol gappes since more than one hour now, waiting outside the building to get a glimpse of his next target. And finally he got to see her. He always liked to admire beauty, and this girl was far more beautiful in real than in a picture. He saw her getting in a vehicle and going away. He paid for the chai and food and went away.


so how was it?

sorry for any spelling mistakes😳

and i'll PM everyone later😳

Edited by haruhi26 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG Tina

amazing chapter read 6A n 6B together

aisha upset n unhappy

dey r not able to find a single

n wat s dis abt dis man who called d contract killer??? is it about a insane n obsessive mind who is killing girls for no reason???

Whoever it is ..wish him to b caught soon

continue soon😊
Edited by tani23 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb update...!!!
omg they are still not able to find anything about reena's murder...!!!!
aisha feeling bad for not being able to bring justice to her sis yet...!!! feeling bad for her...!!!
omg whose the next target?😲 and whose the person doing all these and why?
continue soon...!!!
cant wait for the next update...!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing update Tina... dat killer s behind Aisha or Riya dats for sure??? but who nd why??? Hope nuthn happens nd ETF catches him b4 sumthn unwanted happens... update soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
great post
wishing to know who is behind all these..
waiting my dear!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
nyc di
loved it
aww dey unable to find culpriT
riya or aisha ?-
feeling bad fr aisha
yay my 1900 coment di
Edited by Payal_156 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update

who is that killer?? kiske contract lekhe chal raha hai? Aisha ya Riya yeh kya??
OMG, what happens next??
cont soon!
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update
etf is not able to find anything abt reena's killer😲
feel bad for ayesha
who is the next targret?
hope it's not riya😲
i think ayesha wld be the last target
coz it's a revenge on her, right?
she better not go after that guy alone
otherwise she ll be in danger
w8ing 4 next part
cont soon

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