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anusha.nush

@anusha.nush

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

thats a wonderful update!!!👏

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applesauce.

@applesauce.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Congrats on New thread!:D

Once again a beautiful update.The conflict of thoughts along with memories that Arnav was going through was beautifully written.This chapter had to be on first page.😃Fab!

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uno1234

@uno1234

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Awesome. u r truly talented writer

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Mints23

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

WOW!! Simply superb... emotions and thoughts going through Arnav's mind...

It was beautiful to read through the chaos in Arnav's head... him trying to decipher her words...

trying to grasp the meaning in anger and hatred... really beautifully fleshed out!!

Awaiting the next update... to just see how he will earn her forgiveness!! 😊

Edited by mints23 - 12 years ago

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duzee

@duzee

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

You've done it again! I love the play put of emotions though arnav mind. And i love how you've shown his thought and feelings. I love the way khushis words kept coming back to him. He genuinely feels for her no matter how he tries to deny it. I can't wait until he stops being mean to her and actually gets love dove towards her.
Hes a lost soul completely. I wonder what he will do now to earn her forgiveness. Can't wait for the next part. Thankyou for a good read once again!

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JerryTheMouse

@JerryTheMouse

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Res. reading.

Edited.

Congratulations on the new thread!

Update :

Oh finally! Loving it that we got to read more about Arnav' s thoughts and feelings. And so eloquently!

Thank you!

So he has realized that he needs to make amends, how is the big question. Does he accept it's his fault?

Very nicely done Krani!

Thank you!

Edited by JerryTheMouse - 12 years ago

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polly_mk

@polly_mk

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Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Lovely update. HIs introspection was written beautifully. So he starts with..."ASR doesnt need to earn anyone's forgiveness"...and ends up with the..."How do I earn her forgiveness?"...beautiful!!

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Priya

@LoveYouChutki..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#18

It was just superb update...

U described every emotions beautifully...

U r fab girl... :)

Edited by Priya641 - 12 years ago

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gracefultulika

@gracefultulika

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Posted: 12 years ago

#19

you know u r the best.

what magical feelings that u r writing

amaaazing

no words...

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annab

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Posted: 12 years ago

#20

A fabulous treat again ...A man whose life is revolved around deals and money and wt not, doesn't hv a bloody clue hw to earn forgiveness from his own wife...brilliant...I feel pity for him to ruin this god given life ,so he can prove tht his male ego is bigger than everything...