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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing update !! You write really well... Congrats for new thread..
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Posted: 12 years ago
A fabulous update once again. :D I always love reading Arnav POV, his emotions his thoughts you penned his feelings his confusion soo beautifully. You describe the scene so well that i can visualize. Arnav is soo damn confused. he don't knw how to earn her forgiveness, and he said her that he doesn't need her forgiveness. He and his so-called ego. loved the last para.I just love to read, the way Arnav notice her every action. he is attracted to her but don't want to accept it..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Congrtz on d new thread n thnq soo mch rr d qik update... guess arnav is on d path of atleast a little bit of realusation though he still hv to go a long way... nd earning bk her trust doesnt seem any easy now espcly wen he doesnt hv had to deal wid emotons till now! Wonderfull chapter..
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Posted: 12 years ago
When u said u would post next chapter soon i never thought it would be this soon.no that i'm complaining.congratz!.u reached another deserving thread.
Now coming to update.it felt like i was there in that beach observing both of them,mainly arnav.i could very well visualise each and every one of arnav's expression.fantastic update.
I really hope arnav soon will figure it out what should be done to earn khushi's forgiveness.
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Posted: 12 years ago
beautiful update!!
I really like how Arnav has gotten to see another side of Khushi because of NK - seeing her smile and laugh, and admire her from far :)

loved how Khushi told him that he cannot buy forgiveness, but needs to earn it!

his monolgue and confusion was shown beautifully! loved the entire scene on the beach - the way he would stare at her, and how he is trying to figure out a way to make up for what wrongs he has done 😊

love how Arnav is changing in baby steps 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
congrats on new thread
will read the chapter later
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Posted: 12 years ago
Congratulations on the new thread!!!

Loved the update, Arnav is contemplating on his behavior and he is giving thought on how to "earn it"
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Posted: 12 years ago
Congratulations on the 6th Thread😊!
That was a fabulous update👏. I loved the update,.. would be such an understatement because I seem to be running short of adjectives to praise this great piece!
Your writing is so,so visually rich and vivid-this is one of the many reasons why I love your writing.You surely have a way with words. You have this infinitely huge powerhouse of literary talent within you,that I'm in awe,everytime I read your work!
I take it that you are a diehard Janeite,right? It was amazing to find that the quote which you used happens to be one of my favourite Quotes of Jane Austen!
A lot of things are perhaps changing in the dark recesses of Arnav's mind.
He is completely obsessed with Khushi,though unknowingly. At first,it was his humongous effort to fight off the physical attraction and now his desperate need to seek her forgiveness. His mind seems to be in a riot-Khushi's words,her interaction with NK,the smallest details of Khushi's facial features and obviously figuring out why his usual ways were not working on Khushi..are playing havoc in his mind, blocking all other thoughts. His constant playing with the sand which seemed to slip away figuratively suggests his way of trying to hold onto his self-made views-compared with the sand,that is slipping away,because of the stubborn wind i.e. his deeply buried conviction that he might be wrong,right?
The green monster never fails to raise up its head whenever Khushi is with NK!
I wonder, if Arnav is so observant about Khushi now,then what would he become when he falls in love, hook line and sinker!
P.s 1- You never fail to surprise,do you?! I never thought you would be so quick to update Ch 32.
P.s 2- Would you believe if I say that I made an IF Account so that I can read this amazingly addictive story?!
... And then comes the cliched line-Update soon!
Edited by greenMoss - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
personally, i found this to be the best chapter yet...👏
fantastic job-loved it
congrats on the new thread 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
Congrats

Loved it
He is think abt it.
Thinking to earn her forgiveness.

Loved it
Do continue soon plzzz

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