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deepa

@deeswarna

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#181

the temperature in my room has just increased considerably after reading this update! it wasso hot hot and hot but still with a dash of romantism!

it was perfect in every sense of the word. was simply mind blowing

lol poor nk, its high time he knows that only arnav can carry khushi's packets and that too to her room!

loved the way arnav responded to khushi insecurities and the way he said he wants to make their first time memorable, just took me in a dreamland! i understand that but plz farah just hoping its not that far the day they become one:)

arnav should realise very soon that what he feels for khushi is not a mere attraction but something deep that can be experienced once in a lifetime and that only with one's soulmate. i dunt him to repent or to regret on that afterwards!

OMG wat a precap! khushi is being bold! super duper like that!

very excited for the next one:)

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harsha

@harsha..

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#182

Loved it 👍🏼

Don't worry you are not dragging the story.Infact it is awesome.The pace is perfect neither fast nor slow.I just love this story to the core.

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pixiegirl

@pixiegirl

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#183

Nooo... You CANNOT wrap up this story please... This is one story I am totally addicted to, you cannot stop writing Farah. Pretty please.

Please, please keep this hidden romance going, like Arnav, I am absolutely LOVING these stolen moments too. 😳 There's so much more fun when they meet clandestinely & steal or snatch these sweet moments to themselves you cannot imagine. Please keep this going, no rush at all.

About the update, Arnav is so naughty, torturing Khushi with his playfulness, it was adorable. To see his smirk & Khushi getting all riled up. She wanted to smack the tray over his gorgeous hair?? LOL

I was right, in guessing, Buaji, never saw their hands, it was her manners she was screaming at. LOL. Arnav would never put Khushi in trouble at all. ❤️

So Arnav tweaked the designs for Khushi's outfits much to Anjali's consternation. LOL, of course, nobody but HIM gets to dress his doll up. 😳 I hope they are not all RED!!!! 😉

Poor NK, has no clue how territorial Arnav is. Back off NK while the going is good. Khushi is taken & he had better realize it soon for his own benefit. LOL I would be sorry to see his cute face beaten into a pulp.

So, naive Khushi is having serious doubts over Arnav's interest in her??? Nothing can be further from the truth. The precap was scaldingly haawwttt. Do NOT tone it down by any means, if anything, please turn it up. I want to see the searingly hot passion.

Please let them find such long hidden moments to themselves throughout the weddings & we will be super happy. Please keep NK at bay from these two lovebirds.

Needless to great update Farah, & thanks for the PM.

Edited by pixiegirl - 12 years ago

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henamani

@henamani

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#184

amazingly hot yet naive update

she has no idea what she is doing to him

she is so embroiled in the handhold that she doesnt realise that her back is doing the trick. way to go farah

i say bring the heat on

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akshu.ray27

@akshu.ray27

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#185

Yet another mind blocking update from you! I could not have asked for a better start on a Sunday. I did not except that the little encounter between arnav & khushi would turn out this passionate. Can't wait for Tuesday to know whats gonna happen next. I hope nobody would barge into them while they are riding high on passion ;) Thank you for blocking out my mind Farah :))

Oh btw, if this is the fruit of you being impatient, I personally don't mind finding a trigger to get you more and more impatient.

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sushna

@sushna

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#186

Wow awesme precap is awesme thankx 4 pm

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J P

@TwilightStar_JP

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#187

Ayla!! If the first traces of their passion is this high n intense n not to forget HAWT!! I wonder what the actual thing would be? Ten folds hotter! Phew! Next update def cooling agent required! I mean when u write the hot stuff! No Arshi romance like this acceptable! Its very rare from ny of u guys :p

Now to the update! I was right! She was oly yelled for not letting him in n keeping him waiting at the door!!

N heheh again wanting to hit him with the tray! And I def see maami planning to patch up nk n khushi!! I see all probabilities there!? Nk n arnav coming to help her proves that!

I was expecting nk to help her but Arnav was a surprise I knw weird but maamis plan strongly made mee feel nk would come!!

Then the shameless comment :of obviously what else lol! That was so ASR! Heheh

And the room! Phew a start to something huge n big!! She fears he lost interest in her? Like seriously? Gosh khushi bachhi only! Reli cute man! But weird stuff!!

And no comments for the rest! Heheh!

Cheers

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srmirji

@srmirji

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#188

wow...what an update.this is getting better by the day. Trust me lady don't keep it low...its magical.

what I loved about this chapter is Arnav's words towards the end where he says he doesn't want things rushed not in the car etc...that was really sensitive n sweet of him. I loved this bit...hit my nerve

thx

sri.

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Anu

@anushri

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#189

Story will be wrapped up soon?,that's bad😭. Coming to the update, it was quite sizzling😉 khushi's query about their impending physical exploration was an invite to arnav by herself, poor fellow was thinking to take it slow and steady but our lady opted for a dress at a wrong time, that too a backless one😉. Loved A and NK's little tiff😉