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Posted: 12 years ago
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Congrats for the new threadn
Edited by shanon - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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THE CLEANSER



the rust and it's origin is known to us...

we now know what happens when there is a RUST inRELATIONS

but what happens when someone cleanses thatRUST???

and to clean RUST is not an easy job to do...

when there is RUST in objects we either soak it in chemicals or scrape it with hard and coarse materials like steel wool...cause different objects can't be treated same way alike

But how to remove RUST from RELATIONS ??

cause CHEMICAL or STEEL WOOL won't work here...then???

Yes chemical here too will work..but the CHEMICALthat is needed here is not some acidic liquid it isLOVE...romantic love and a sweet-natured personwould serve the purpose

and but all kinds of RUST can't be removed by the same technique

every RUST won't get removed by soaking inLOVE..romance..and...sweetness

then???

some RUST needs a hard coarse object to scrape away the RUST gently..but firmly..
but in RELATIONS would STEEL WOOL do the same work??

in RELATIONS..here we will call the STEEL WOOL..as LOVE again..but..this LOVE is fiery..passionate and only a strong and bold person can do it..

so...do you like it...???

want to go for the read...

stay tuned...

and those who had missed the first part..please check the index above

for future updates please send a buddy request😊
Edited by Fleur_de_Lis - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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chapter eleven:

part A

2 weeks after the engagement.

Aradhana: bhaiyya you had to come..tomorrow is my inauguration ceremony of my art exhibition and you are declining?? No way..Di and every one is coming.

Arnav: uff..I will come.. but not at 2 p.m'I will come by 9-9.30 p.m. when there will be less people. Happy dear??

Aradhana: Why?? Come at 12..midnight..when there will be only the security guards and you'

Arnav: what do you want??? That I will visit at least or not at all..

Aradhana: ok'but it closes at 8.30p.m.

Arnav: ok..I will try to reach by 8p.m..happy??

Aradhana: yippee'yeah..

****

Arnav walked towards the hall..seeing Khushi admiring a painting.

Arnav's POV

I think..no..right now I am feeling..strange enough for me to feel after such a conversation. As if she was not really that harsh as she showed herself. May be too weak and fragile...so she tries to use her caustic tongue to keep men at bay..a secure technique..but yeah..interesting..some one has at least the power to fight against me regarding my professional as well as personal life...she still had not lost her innocence and as there is no one here now she is giving space to her real self. Should I test her?? If I don't I won't know..what made her poke her nose.

Khushi turned around as she felt someone is standing just behind her.

Khushi: hello..Mr. Raizada..you here..huh??

ASR: just like that..after all it is my sister's works that you are admiring soo much..

Khushi: why? What do you expect me to admire?? You??

ASR: that wouldn't be no less good choice than this.

Khushi: I thought that day was enough for you..

ASR: yeah..I really enjoyed you..

Khushi: what??

Edited by Fleur_de_Lis - 12 years ago
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part B

ASR: yeah..I really enjoyed you..

Khushi: what??

ASR: you as a personality..what did you think??

Khushi: I thought you were recalling my words of that day..

ASR: which day?

Khushi: I had heard a lot that you have a sharp memory and strong ego..or you had it once??

ASR: I had met you not once..

Khushi: so..hope you enjoyed the meeting the last day?

Arnav neared her..Khushi was stiffening slowly..but tried to remain confident and unaffected.

Arnav keeps his hands and blocks Khushi as she tries to move out.

Khushi: well..do you be...behave with a..all your cli..cli..clients like this??

Arnav: not with those who doesn't stammer and doesn't get nervous but

Arnav inhales her smell and looks at her eyes..she has started breathing at a faster rate..but is trying to normalise at any count..

Khushi: bu..bu..bu..but??

Arnav: with them those who pretends..like you..

Khushi: I..I..am..no..no.not..stam..mm..mm

Arnav: mm..mering..stammering..I can see..

Arnav leans on her almost and their bodies though doesn't touch..yet the heat can be felt by Khushi. Her cheeks were flushed..her nose were red..her eyes were tinkling as it was growing watery..

Khushi: wha..what..?? what can you see??

Arnav: your interest towards art and other's life..

Arnav then stepped back..seeing Khushi's condition..she had reached her last level and her actual self was getting prominent..and she would burst in tears..he had no wish to take out her weak form.

Khushi was back to her actual self..she pushed Arnav suddenly.

Khushi: so I was right..Mr. Raizada..you are..so..disgusting..you don't know how to treat a woman. I mustn't have say something like that..

Arnav: so you are repenting..

Khushi: haven't finished yet..I think I should have said you more..it was not enough for you..after all you are ASR..

Khushi almost ran away from there..

Arnav's POV

Khushi is really not what she shows..a girl like Khushi will get ruined by someone like Lavanya..for a revenge..why will she be a medium?? But if I tell her the truth she won't believe me and would react somewhat worse than this and let Lavanya know about it and then Lavanya might change her plans..I must let it flow in its way..unless and until she is in a real mess..I will not sort out..after all who is she to me?? Why do I be her so called saviour??

I thought she was pretty nave and innocent..but she herself doesn't admit it..then why should I make her realise..let herself realise..that everybody is not like her..and everybody is not so good..she doesn't know what that Lavanya is..the day she will realise Lavanya and her husband..it might be too late..

****


What happens next?????


what do you think Khushi will do????


Is Arnav right in judging Khushi???


stay tuned for the next chapter...


a SLAP is coming !!!


and yes... a new character...


ok..no... no hints...


for future pms for updates please send me a buddy request...

Edited by Fleur_de_Lis - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#25
me firstyyy

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oyii...Anna...convinced..arnie to cme around at 8pm...

omg..kushi..in exhibition...(will fire sparks possible..)

arnie thinking to test her...(not bad...)

ha ha ha..lols..( i really enjoyed u...tat was cool;..)

poor kushi shocked...
Edited by Nichuss - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#26
loved d update ... update it soon dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice update.

And they met again.
Kushi is really admirable,nothing wrong in arnav admiring her rather than art.lol.

Waiting for part B



Thnx for the pm.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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superb updt

luv it

updt soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#29
Wooow super bt plzzz longer wud be he best

Cant wait for mooore
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Posted: 12 years ago
#30
Nice update loved it
Thanks for pm me

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