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vidya.sanjay

@vidya.sanjay

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#221

Nice update.
It would be interesting to see how Arnav proves himself.

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kaira101

@kaira101

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#222

wonder what arnav will say

payal's and arnav's fight was awesome

akash and payal already seem to be friends cum soon-to-be-lovers

khushi and arnav have a long way to go

continue soon

thanx for the pm

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Nisha

@Nichuss

Elite

+ 33

Posted: 12 years ago

#223

lols...payal in tigress form...

akhi u r so cutiee...he s admiring payal..n forgot his arnie...

arnie...lost 2 times...payal backoff wen kushi cald...

really enjoyed tat parts...

wht kushi doing with aman... :-o

aman is afraid of payal...wow...

akhi dropped my arnie...lols...

nk came with a helping hand...

waiting for next part

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HaRul-lover

@HaRul-lover

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#224

Already payal and akaash :O they will b quick while arnav and kushi seema to be far away from them X(
bt i love the fact that kushi creates him problems XD XD XD thats hilarious and then throw him dismisive looks she is a badass
cant wait to read more :-D:-D:-D:-D the story is unfolding very well

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preethi28

@preethi28

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#225

khushi is really cheeky putting arnav in a fix like that
akash is smitten by payal.
well good for him.
aman's being a snob.
thanks for the pm.

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Chandana

@chandana.s

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#226

Wow Part 3!! Going to read now

*****

Awesome part..Lovely title 😛

Wow,Payal is such a tough nut,Tomeboy type wit full of attitude but later on she was so nice with others.. * Y she got so much anger hearing Arnav's Pov abt Women? 😕 *

Omg cant belive she gave such a tough compitation to boys & nearly Arnav had gotten a nice taste of her punch if Khushi dint intrrupted ... 😛 😆 Loved it

Lol Akash was already drooling over Payal & he even told Arnav not to hurt her 😳 😆 If Khushi dint intrruped he would alos have gotten a punch

Aman again flirting with Khushi 🥱 but moved away seeing Payal 😆,seems like every boys there is scared of her... 🤢

Poor Arnav,Khushi is not gonna make it easy for him,He was thinking of having a talk with her..

Akash's looks & intrest towards dint go unnoticed by Khushi.. 😃

Loved it.Very well written 👏

Waiting for next part...Update soon

( Ur exam over ?? )

Love U 🤗

Edited by chandana.s - 12 years ago

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Monasha

@monasha

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#227

ah huh!!!

Arnav got beating from Payal...

very bad for his reputation...

god... khushi is going make his life miserable...

update soon

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AneesahJabeen

@AneesahJabeen

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#228

Hahahaha im loving this payal
Soo amans a flirt eh
Cnt wait to c how this pans out

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YaSha0512

@YaSha0512

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#229

short but very sweet 👍🏼

luvd how Arnav underestimated Payal like a typical guy

Khushi stopping Payal show though at least she not want him to get hurt😳

and Arnav already starting to turn green when he saw Aman flirting with Khushi 😉

so he's gonna talk to Khushi how they alone hope they sort it out cause i wanna see Arnav flirting with Khushi too

forgot to say also luved Payal n Akash's interaction ☺️

anyways thanks for PM pls keep em comin n PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update soon

can't wait

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applesauce.

@applesauce.

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#230

Nice Update :)

Arnav better talk to Khushi before she cooks up new thing to trouble him.I LOVE arnav,Ok!So yea IDK,bt I am pissed at Payal😆
Its difficult for me to digest her smartness.And Akash,well the boy is in his element.I liked the way you have tweaked the story and its characters.Its all the more exciting.=P
Thankuu for the PM.