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loved it.. awesome

Originally posted by: rulama

That was good Zara!

Why has your narration changed!

It had been tight so far and now I find a difference!

I don't know! But I felt it and wrote! urm do you mean the spelling mistakes i have made? 😆 or do you mean the pace of the story? As i have explained before this story is very different from my previous works as I always try to do something new from a writing angle. So maybe it's that? 😳 Thank for saying.

Coming to the story,

Arnav getting pulled down by Payal!

Wow! enjoyed it!

Akash bitten by smitten bug? definitely😆

Payal and Khushi give Arnav a Royal snub and Khushi is a minx!

A cute Minx.

Glad to see that Aman is intimidated by Payal!!!Hohoho!!! All the guys are...😆

What a sight!

Infact it is bechara Arna. His foot into the mouth syndrome got him into trouble unnecessarily!

Wish it was Aman that Payal had licked! don't worry..he's already got his in the past. 😆

Looking forward to the next update! Be it this or the OS Most welcome!! thanks for reading and commenting😳

Originally posted by: chandana.s

Wow Part 3!! Going to read now

*****

Awesome part..Lovely title 😛 yay! thanks sis😳

Wow,Payal is such a tough nut,Tomeboy type wit full of attitude but later on she was so nice with others.. * Y she got so much anger hearing Arnav's Pov abt Women? 😕 * everyone's got their own back story. each will be revealed as chapters progress.😊

Omg cant belive she gave such a tough compitation to boys & nearly Arnav had gotten a nice taste of her punch if Khushi dint intrrupted ... 😛 😆 Loved itArnav will take it as a little teaser of what Khushi can do. But next will be a confrontation between khushi and Arnav. Be prepared😉

Lol Akash was already drooling over Payal & he even told Arnav not to hurt her 😳 😆 If Khushi dint intrruped he would alos have gotten a punch Khushi's a right saver here😆 For akash it was a good save. Of course khushi would give him a thumbs up as he was very respectful about women and boxing in the first chappy if you remember. thats why payal takes a liking to him.

Aman again flirting with Khushi 🥱 but moved away seeing Payal 😆,seems like every boys there is scared of her... 🤢 lol. Payal has made her mark not to be messed with.😆

Poor Arnav,Khushi is not gonna make it easy for him,He was thinking of having a talk with her..dundundahhh. the next chapter will be interesting😉

Akash's looks & intrest towards dint go unnoticed by Khushi.. 😃

Loved it.Very well written 👏 awww yay thank sis :')

Waiting for next part...Update soon

( Ur exam over ?? ) nope. Got another coming in 3 weeks and then another one soon after that. I'm so scared.😭Need to get cracking from 2moro.

Love U 🤗 love you tooo sis😳

Originally posted by: crizal

I can't understand one thing why Khushi is tolerating tat Aman??

Originally posted by: adithyan

akash---payal...i really miss them from serial...so excited to see a srtong payal...thanks zara...

arnie,khushi is not that bad..okay...😆

par tumne mere aman ko kyun villan banadiya??😭