Originally posted by: cutiepie2244
Hey shilpa deary how r u???? sorry 4 late commenting... this is the comment of both chapter 8 n 9... back 2 the update it was superb dear... really amazing... loved it...
The way VIRAT said to ayesha ( as u say angel) i was like awww he is really a true friend... felt bad 4 CHARLES maanvi misunderstood her... but its not at all her fault... c0z sometimes we believe what our eyes says us to...
hawww charles cried... felt bad after imaginning her state... ayesha's plan was really interesting n waooo it worked maanvi blurt out the truth... that was the best part of ur update... hawww virat heard all the convo n hahahhaha he is thinking its CHARLES... (bechara charles har waqt phans jata hai ahhahaha)... virat beats charles,, he is not at all at fault ( bechara again phans gya)...
It was awesome u r really a sweetheart... really loved it...
Chapter 9 was really damn hot... i read ur update 4 hours ago but i m still blushing... really... hawww virat now knows every thing... waooaoo waooo waooo m jumping THANK GOD that he found out... hahahahha virat pinches himself to believe that he isn't dreaming... loved this update sooo muccchhh...
FLASHBACK was really 2 goody good... that was litterally the best part of ur update... ROUND OF APPLAUSE 2 U SWEETY...
LOVED UR UPDATE 2 THE CORE...
THANXXX 4 THE PM...
Looking forward 2 the next update... make it ASAP...
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