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Sultan_Of_Swing

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Posted: 12 years ago

#881

Chapter 18 updated on Pg 129

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meera30

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Posted: 12 years ago

#882

Going all out on the cliffhangers, aren't we? :)

I love how mature and adult you are keeping things between these two (though, it is going to get a lot more adult soon, I know ;P)

The conversation with NKay was in the offing and written very real - people don't dramatically "understand" when their partner wants to break things up.; people are upset when things hit them out of the blue but unforeseen things happen all the time.

Great progress and of course, now waiting to see who the interruptor is!

Cheers

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nnhk

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Posted: 12 years ago

#883

i am still calculating the months to the present ... and we still have some more months for it to get sizzling hot between the two...

Nkay poor thing ... abhi kya kya dekhay ga aur

and she gives us another cliffhanger!!!!!!!!!!!!

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rakhee12

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Posted: 12 years ago

#884

Wonderful update. Looking forward to the next chapter 😊

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ssyahoo

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Posted: 12 years ago

#885

I'm loving these frequent updates! Glad that Khushi broke up with NKay and he was kind of harsh with her. In the beginning he knew that she thought of him as a friend yet he encouraged her to give it a try. Granted he's been under stress.

Anjali is quite perceptive eh? Glad that Arnav came to comfort and check on Khushi. What a cliffhanger! Guess it's NKay or Akash

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shr3291

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Posted: 12 years ago

#886

Nyc update al2gether ... Thumbs UP!!

But the end is one helluva cliffhanger..

Describing each1's feeling ,opinions has been unique...

Payal is one strong character...holding the torchlight for Khushi..

Eagerly w8in for the nxt update...

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1chilly

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Posted: 12 years ago

#887

Why do you do this to us? Got done with one cliffhanger and now this. Now you have to promise to update the next one soon.

The confrontation between Nkay and Khushi was very well written. I can't understand how right after a breakup people say that they are still good friends. How can they forget everything immediately and remain friends. Nkay was expecting to marry her and is obviously upset.

Anjali has made her entry and I have a feeling it is she who caught them in the garden.

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smilesilently

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Posted: 12 years ago

#888

simply amazing...love👏d it

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Seeta

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Posted: 12 years ago

#889

Wow what an update, I love the pace of the story, moving along with out missing important details. Nk is upset but Khushi had said from the beginning to move slow within their platonic realtionship.. Naturally he is upset and perhaps he was the one screaming at the end, after taking time to reflect.

Payal is a good friend and I loved her advice to Khushi, I hope Anajli continues to notice Arnav and Khushi's dynamics.. esp as we know a pregnancy will be coming up...

Edited by srat - 12 years ago

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opsyellow

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Posted: 12 years ago

#890

Who the hell was that, disturbing them like that? Hope is not Nk!
Ok I think NK over reacted a little bit. He did tell her that they will take things slow and they can end the relationship if any one of them didn't feel that this can go further. NK should have asked Khushi before talking to his parents, but again maybe we should try to understand his situation too. But how come NK never notice about Khushi feelings towards him?
As much as I want Arnav and Khushi to explore the feeling they have for each other, a part me want Khushi to stay away from Arnav because something tells me that he will end up hurting her and then she will feel the same like NK just did and maybe more.