Chasing Dreams Thd2- CHP18 PG129 Thd 3 link pg 148 - Page 90

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Posted: 12 years ago
Love the way you are handling this delicate phase between Arnav and Khushi.
The way he put out his feelings for her was wonderful,, simply stated but not cheeky in any way.Straight from the heart !
To begin with Payal and Khushi's conversation really served as an eye opener for her , she already knew what she wanted but listening to some one else voice the same helps to re assert the issue.
Anjali seems to be one smart cookie here rather than her usual mother hen avatar !!
Then of course the break up ,,,, that was very much needed and frankly break ups are never good how much ever you try to keep it indistinct a break up always hurts. But then both Nk and Khushi reacted in the manner which anyone in their position would albe it in character.
Also the fact that Arnav immediately realised his incorrect behaviour towards khushi due to Nkays presence speaks of his maturity in terms of relationships.And Khushi though inexperienced on that front is still not far behind in dissecting these new found emotions.
What followed after this whole dramatic sequence was the oh so sensual with butterflies in my stomach wala kiss!!!
Here i guess both acted a bit out of character forgetting where they are just lost in each other !!Usually they both are very composed but this insane attraction is driving them both crazy !
I am thinking the person to have caught them is Nkay but then considering the way you write it would be too cliched to think of that person as Nkay since you always come up with a surprise !!

Edited by _disha_ - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Cliffhanger??? CLIFFHANGER????????
How could you??? That was plain cruel...
Well i am glad khusi made herself clear to NKay though the time wasnt the best!!
Oh i m loving what Khusi nArnav have for eachother!!!
Great update!!
And was that Payal who caught them red handed????
Cant wait ...
Update soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved the update...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
yeeeh ^^
finally the break up,.
Now arnav and khushi can be together 😉
hihihih 😊
ohh who saw them o.O??!!
waiting waiting waiting..
Edited by Krish209 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hmm that was something now!

i liked the Come-To-The-Point funda here..

no beating around the bush ... both in arnav - khushi convo in the beginning and the same with Khushi - NKay convo ...

wow that was one passionate kiss ... *blush*

now what? hows it all gonna turn out?
hell... all the while i am only trying to connect to the prologue!!

Thanks for the update ...


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Posted: 12 years ago
Evil!
How could you stop here?

Wonderful update.
Saima-Syed thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved it...loved it...totally loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
I knew it wen dey were kising so passiinately dat somethinwill go wrng!!!!! I knew it.. I was getting a feeling in my heart.. Nd u proved it rite bybeingin in Nk on d crime scene...;)
Man wat happened wid Nk is still wrng i guess!!!! Let c wat happns nxt...??
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Posted: 12 years ago
Oh oh..don't tell me NK came back !!!!! Great update!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
u ended this update too with a question not fair 😃

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