Chasing Dreams Thd2- CHP18 PG129 Thd 3 link pg 148

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Sultan_Of_Swing

@Sultan_Of_Swing

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#701

Originally posted by: Kalyaani

Ok, I have to say that is not an accurate measure of your story, at times the like button does not work. There are more people liking this story than that number, girl get a reality check, this goes beyond 200. If all the people who read the story hit the like button the number would be roughly thrice that figure.

K 🤗

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gurukhush

@gurukhush

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#702

Naach_Basanti,

That update was awesome...😊😃😊 My first comments on your beautiful story, something I dare say you have really put your soul and HEART into👏👏!! And the rendition of that 'First Kiss', every lover's dream... just WOW😃😉😛... Chetan Bhagat, who is he!!!???😳😳 Your narration of their first kiss was so beautiful... WOW again..👏👏 Just keep rolling out those updates quickly.. sorry to be so pushy!!! This indeed is turning out to be one of my favorite stories😃😆 Thanx...

Edited by gurukhush - 12 years ago

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VYGA

@VYGA89

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#703

Awesome update.
Aww!!!Arnav looking at khushi.
Loved every word in this part.
Just loved ur style of writing.
Can't wait to read more.
Thanks for the pm.

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312787

Suspended

Posted: 12 years ago

#704

That was an awesome update NB 😳

everything was so perfect, from khushi giving arnav the gift to their first kiss...i'm going to read this chapter all over again!😃

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Aanchal_

@Aanchal_

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#705

NB !

This is mind blowing Chapter, Only arnav Khushi n both were lost in each other.

"He moved a strand of hair to behind her ears and said, "Khushi what are you doing to me... you are driving me ..." Before he could complete his sentence he felt khushi's lips on his " So what was this Just attraction or love . Finally love is in air n they are little bit accepting it so I just wish later they wont regret.

Excuse me miss.. the Kiss kiss...

The kiss was so beautifully written but why it ended soon

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GirlOfFire

@GirlOfFire

Voyager

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#706

Beautiful chapter - the pace is slow. But its meant to be, and that's what makes this chapter such a good read. You're lost in the slow, smooth ride to passion. Loved the kiss. It was perfect! bas!

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Roop

@bleeding.love

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#707

they Kissed 🥳🤪

its just how i imagined there first kiss, gentle but intense..and i just loved the fact she initiated the kiss...and not to forget about the dance..gosh everything was just perfect. ❤️

great work NB

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masam

@masam

Navigator

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#708

A really soothing, building update.
The attraction, the gift and then the physical acknowledgment of it-- all very beautifully described.
Blown away by the intimacy and the current between them

You've left me yearning for more.

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oceanssea

@oceanssea

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Posted: 12 years ago

#709

A really awesome update.

And the dance with that wonderful song playing felt so,so romantic.Loved the dance
scene the most.And then there was the kiss...liked it?Loved it!.

Thanks for this simply fabulous romantic update :)