Chasing Dreams Thd2- CHP18 PG129 Thd 3 link pg 148

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kushi81

@kushi81

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#721

Loved it their first kiss couldn't be better than this amezing 😉

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crazy1

@crazy1

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#722

ah finally they got there to acknowledge to themselves that there is some strange kind of pull between them...

great update...

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shree10

@shree10

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#723

I am back with the comment.

First of all thanks for creating another magical moment between Arnav and Khushi! Just like the Diwali scene with exception of an unwarranted interruption.

From the start of the update, the whole build up was electric. The way they were aware of each other's gaze, trying to gauge each other.

Khushi's thoughtful gift and Arnav's first words with that pen ..

And Elvis -- what a perfect song you chose for the dance! The song kinda summarizes Arnav and Khushi's journey to this point.
And finally the magical kiss! I cant find words for it..
But whole update I can tell I held my breath and the effect was same when I read it again!

Now all I am waiting for is next update! I think night is not yet over and equation between them has changed forever. Am anxious to know how they are gonna face this or take this forward?

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hmm.. guess karo :P

@jas0308

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#724

awesome update... loved it

very beautifully written... they shared their first kiss

thanks for the pm

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@guggu

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#725

OMG!! This was so so so wonderful! I had an absolute blast reading this!

It's currently striking four in the morning, so I better go sleep. I would be back with a detailed comment later. For now, I just wanted you to know that their left me dizzy. It was very well written and I had a blast reading the 16 chapters. :) You're awesome! 😃

Swati :)

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Anamika Mitra

@ana_cute

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#726

awwh! read u ff n 1go.. tobba... its mind bloggng! its amnznly pen down... al d bst p.s- care to pm me..

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Sultan_Of_Swing

@Sultan_Of_Swing

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#727

Originally posted by: msin
Hey when will u update next?😊

I'm aiming for today late evening, but it is likely to be tomorrow as I have guests around for dinner.

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Natasha

@no_username

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#728

wow!!!
the update was amazing...
loved their 1st kiss...
romance in the air...😉
waiting 2 see what they'll do after they reach india...they r gonna feel a lot more awkward...
waiting 4 the next update...