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Kamala

@Kamala05

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Posted: 12 years ago

#681

Thanks for the PM.

That was an interesting chapter. Eager to know whether their night will end just with the kiss ??

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dazzlerabi

@dazzlerabi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#682

Wow,loved it..finally they kissed n looking forward for next update..

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Arjuhisis

@Arjuhisis

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Posted: 12 years ago

#683

i loved what i read NB - excellent update dear

the pull between them is excellently described

great update

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Kalyaani B Rao

@Kalyaani

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#684

Originally posted by: Naach_Basanti
Did I see it right? I got over 200 likes for the last chapter. Woohoo!

Thank you so much, you have no idea how much this means to me. I read each and every comment of yours, sometimes even a few times.

Im touched, I really am.

Ok, I have to say that is not an accurate measure of your story, at times the like button does not work. There are more people liking this story than that number, girl get a reality check, this goes beyond 200. If all the people who read the story hit the like button the number would be roughly thrice that figure.

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phillips_2909

@phillips_2909

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#685

i like this update
the dress the gift the dance and lastly the kiss
its awesome
thanks fr pm dear...

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SS88

@SS88

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Posted: 12 years ago

#686

Oh my God! I was out of town for the last few days, aur kahaani kahan se kahan pahunch gayi. First off, that dress you picked- amazing. It's sexy and elegant at the same time, and I really liked how you described her initial discomfort at the cleavage showing, and then she just went with the flow. And how he was stumped when he first saw her. Now this chapter just about killed me. How romantic. Walking in a street at night, with Christmas lights all around. And i'm guessing Khushi's first kiss? As heady as the feeling of the two of them finally realizing and acting on the attraction was, I couldn't help but feel a little bit apprehensive. Will they perhaps take this to the next level, and that's how she ends up pregnant? Or does that come later. I can't wait for more. And please please, can you add a bit from payal and Akaash's holiday.. I want to know how he proposed.

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-Misek-

@-Misek-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#687

Hi, ( sorry i don't knw ur name)

I just came across this FF while stalking Fan fiction forum in IF which i haven't done in a while now. But I m really glad that I ended up with yours. I just finished reading thread 1 in a go as a much deserved break. I m so much tempted to read thread 2 but i have to got to bed for couple of hrs before startin my day today( weird sleepin patterns ), just wanted to jolt some words before i sleep.

Loved the FF and ArHi makes me blush 😳. I know they haven't had much moments in thread 1 but I just loved the whole tini tiny convo & Cinderella bit. Will comment further once I catch up. Lastly, i appreciate the fact tht ArHi is very much alive in the wonderful & amazing FFs of so many writers in the forum.

Simmy

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Aanchal15

@Aanchal15

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#688

I am still dazed...NB ji !!! ... aesthetically penned...

The whole ambiance was so ethereal...the dance( very apt song, btw), the promenade with the glittering lights in the background and then the kiss ... I loved the befitting gift...the thought behind it...him writing her name...very endearing...the fact that both acknowledged the pull without voicing them..shows how much they are affected by each other's presence...