Chasing Dreams Thd2- CHP18 PG129 Thd 3 link pg 148

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soaringskies

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Posted: 12 years ago

#421

NB quite mature and realistic writing...!! i guess this has to be my first fiction on forums at least where i am reading arnav and khushi are not opposites but have similar tastes...😊

it was a lond update indeed and a treat to read...!! continue soonish...😃😃

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gabby123

@gabby123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#422

i read the first 13 chapters in jiffy and before i could comment ..

i had the 14th chapter up to read..

and i was pleased...this is a beautiful piece of writing..making readers eagerly wait for more..

I am going to comment after each update now..

this is a very gripping story and charachters are also very well defined...thankfully no rona dhona..and a better, smarter and sensible K...

Awesome!😊

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anumadduri

@anumadduri

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Posted: 12 years ago

#423

One of the best chapters of the story NB !!!! You have given us a visual treat of London and "The phantom of the Opera " !!!! Also poor Khushi had to go through that in the past that was so horrific... Getting out of it is really hard and have to undergo therapy to oust the fear out of you . This explains why her parents so over protective . Also noticed the fact that was comfortable enough with Arnav to share it with him without any qualms :) His dream in the end some how may have made him realize that he has feelings for her and care for her

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ekiholo

@ekiholo

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Posted: 12 years ago

#424

such a scary dream of arnav
even i was sweating!!

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PixieFlame

@PixieFlame

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Posted: 12 years ago

#425

Just read all 14 parts together!

I love the way the story is moving!

Do Pm me for the next updates! :)

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kushi81

@kushi81

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Posted: 12 years ago

#426

Wow amezing I mean it was mind blowing loved it

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Mini17

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Posted: 12 years ago

#427

Just caught up with the story and loved it!
I liked Khushi-Payal-Akash relationship and easiness in their friendship.
Arnav and Khushi's likes and dislikes match so much except in one aspect which is a very important one ;)
I hope everything goes fine with Akash and Payal :)
Would love to read more 😊

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vgedin

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Posted: 12 years ago

#428

Tell me, Gabbar, if I tell you that I share pretty much the same taste is Western music as this Kushi, do you think I too have a chance at this Arnav? They bonded so well over one of MY favorite songs (and ABBA!!!!), and one the most beautiful romantic songs ever for that matter, my Arnav better be out there somewhere listening to it :D

I love how you've taken the progress in Arnav and Khushi's relationship step by step - comfort, attraction, admiration, trust, tastes, and now bonding in the time of crisis. Lovely!

He always feels protective of Kushi, hai naa? And I also see how you subtly highlight the differences between their personalities - the whole sharing an apartment thing in the last update and the making breakfast incident in this one.

He was so affected by her trauma that he dreamt about it? Aiyyo!

And thanks for making Kushi kickass at her job - perfectionist, meticulous, driven. It made me happy. Very happy. Your Kaalia is a happy soul :D