Chasing Dreams Thd2- CHP18 PG129 Thd 3 link pg 148

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badfaith4u

@badfaith4u

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Posted: 12 years ago

#411

😭
poor khushi
that's scary
so was arnav's dream

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Roop

@bleeding.love

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#412

just read the last two updates..i am loving this story more with every update.

I just love the relation they share, its new and fresh, there is some awkwardness but understanding at the same time. I am happy that Khushi trusted Arnav enough to share her story with him.

amazing work NB

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ammuse

@ammuse

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Posted: 12 years ago

#413

simply just loved the update,,,,😃

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ayushma

@aycma98

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#414

I am glad to see this new avatar of Khushi... I loved that she is committed to her work, and is a very hard worker. For someone young, to move out into a new place and try to manage work and life is extremely hard. And Khushi is doing a flawless job with it.

You're bringing a new personality in Khushi, that was never seen before. She's so aggressive at work, yet so vulnerable at heart. I am seeing Khushi in a whole new light. Also, I loved the fact that she can easily dodge her attraction towards Arnav when she knew it wasn't right. That's something we do, I know I do, on a regular basis! ;)

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masam

@masam

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+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#415

One thing that out stood for during the whole chapter was Khushi's naivety. Despite the change, the new environment, the adaption and friends, she's still that simple Lucknow girl who once had to face an undeniable, cruel tragedy, still running in its sulci.
And Arnav-- his dream held a lot significance for me and I cannot wait what you've planned for us because this FF, it's getting interesting with every update!
Take care.

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shivanisaur

@shivanisaur

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#416

That was an extraordinary update! It was written brilliantly!
You really know how to build a scene.. It was just immense and the improvement in their relationship was lovely to read!
I loved their bonding! Both their characters are so realistic and interesting! I absolutely love them!!
And arnav's dream at the end effectively encapsulated how he cares for her and feared for her..
It was a fantastic update!
Thanks for the pm.

Edited by shivanisaur - 12 years ago

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312787

Suspended

Posted: 12 years ago

#417

Thanks for the awesome update NB, it was brilliant and 5000 words wow!

Arnav and khushi's bonding was the higlight of the chapter...she's slowly opening upto him and trusts him enough to share her darkest secrets, and he seemed genuinely concerned for her...love the way the story is moving, can't wait to read the next update...

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meshas

@meshas

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#418

just loved your update.
Just loved Arnav's fear of loosing Khushi (which means he is attracted to her).

Khushi n Arnav have commen interests, that's a good base to establish a relationship.

Khushi overcoming her fear and moving to Delhi to live her life, shows she's a brave girl.

Looking forward to your next update.

Have nice weekend.

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roseycheek

@roseycheek

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Posted: 12 years ago

#419

can't wait to read more.wonderful writing!

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ruby-red

@ruby-red

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#420

very nice update. so arnav and khushi share many interests, that will definately bring them closer.
omg, khushi past incident must have been so scary for her, and to relive again...poor girl, no wonder she had a panic attack. it was a good thing the couple was there to help her otherwise god knows what could have happened.
it has obviously affected arnav badly for him to have a nightmare about it, hope things hot up between them now.

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