'And Life was Back on Track..'{KR OS}

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Happy B'day Farah🤗
Here's your little gift😳...You wanted me to write something for your B'day and I couldn't think of anything but KriYaansh so Here's a little something hope you like it..your sis-mance partner has tried really hard this time especially after writer's block that i had developed i never thought i would be able to write..Anyways Happy B'day once again..May you get everything you desire in your life...and even an Oppa😆
Love you
Aarti (Bai)😳🤗
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And Life was back on Track...

"Time heals all wounds Beta"

"Beta! You should move on now"

"He is gone forever, forget him!"
The same sentences still haunted her! Like a flash of memory they hovered over her skin creating deep goose bumps filled with guilt. She couldn't get it out of her mind especially now when she had realized that she ended up doing the same with her daughter.
"You cannot have this Baby"
"Sab kya Kahenge Smriti, ek kunwari Maa! Kaun Shaadi karega tujhse"
The memories of the day when she told her parents that she was pregnant with Shushant's baby were something still fresh in her mind. The day she decided she'll leave everything for her unborn child and live a life on her own. She was determined to live a new life forgetting the deceitful past.

Wasn't she herself living in the same past? She had distanced herself from her own passion of Dance because it reminded her of Him But she was also the same lady who changed her surname to Ghai which was His surname. When she discovered that even Kria had the same dancing bone as her parents had, She made her leave dancing forever and If that wasn't enough she even made her leave her love.

Realization was finally dawning upon her; looking at this ever so quiet Kria broke her heart into zillion pieces. She couldn't gather up the courage to console her because she knew she was the reason of her misery. Her own double standards had landed her little baby in such a truce.

Her insecurities of losing her daughter had driven her to do the same thing which her own parents did to her. She still remembered the day Kria came in her life; it was like she had got a new reason to live. Her mete existence had infused life in her. She had promised herself that she would be the best parent but..

"Maaa"
She wiped the dried tears off her cheek and gathered herself up to face Kria with the same plastered smile she had been giving her since a few days now.
"Haa Beta!"
"Maa, Mai college jaa rahi hu."
"Acha Beta."
She looked at her pale body as she adjusted her backpack and turned around to go for college. Her chirpy little daughter who giggled like a child at the smallest of things had become a lifeless soul. The girl who used to bloom like a flower was no more. Smriti shut her eyelids to stop the tears which were brimming in her eyes.
"Kriaaa"
She turned back and shot a questioning glare at her.
"Will you ever forgive me Beta"
She ran back to her weeping mother and held her in her arms while patting her back and canoodling her like a mature person as she had recently become.

"Maa, Aap ye kya keh rahi hai, Please maa, Aapne jo kiya mere ache ke liye hi kiya! Please apne aap ko blame mat karo na Maa"

"Kaise na karu Kria, Mai chahti thi ki apni bachi ko duniya ko wo saari khushiyaan du jo mujhe nahi mili par apni hi insecurities me mai ye bhool gayi ki tujhe apni khushiyaan chunne ka haq hai...am so sorry beta"
"Nahi Maa, Please jo hua usne jaane dete hai!" She said while controlling her own tears which were on the verge of eloping from her eyes.

"Nahi Kria! You cannot do it to yourself neither can I do it to you! You won't lose your passion or your love the way I did...Tum Kria Ghai, the winner hogi...Meri tarah ek haari hui Maa nahi."
And she began telling the story she had hid from Kria, the truth she deserved to know, the truth which surrounded her existence, and the truth which made her mother the woman she was now!
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"Aur isliye mai chahti hu tum jao aur apni zindagi jeeyo, Apna passion poora karo and iss baar mai tumhare sath hu kria" She said while caressing Kria's head as if blessing her for her future wishing her with all her might.
"Maa, I'll go and iss baar ye mera sapna nahi hoga, ye aapka sapna hoga jisse mai poora karungi"
And that was the moment Smriti Ghai saw the determination she used to witness in her daughter's eyes a few months back. Her almond like orbs once again gleamed with the same shine which used to be there when she was in Mumbai and this mother needed felt such bliss which is beyond description.
With that the mother-daughter duo started preparing for Kria's departure and talked their heart out something they hadn't done for a long time now..
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Stepping on the land of Mumbai she somehow felt feverish. It brought back all those memories which she had locked in her heart; Memories she never thought she would ever be able to rub off her heart; Memories which were there to stay forever; Memories which were carved on her heart because they were His Memories.

Collecting her luggage she walked forward to call a cab. Her mother had arranged an accommodation for her. She was going to live with a certain "Ms. Disouza" as she read the note given by her mother.

"Ouccchhh" She squealed as she hit the bonnet of a car which was parked at the wrong place.

"Universe Jee! Aate hi kaise Jhallo se pala padva diya" rubbing her paining knee she mentally cursed the car's owner and got into the cab'

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"St. Louis College"

The name itself ran chills down her spine; she was way too scared to face them, the same people whom she had betrayed. She had thrown them out of her life like trash. She knew it was going to be tough. Her heart was racing thinking about it; she didn't even know how she would justify her actions but her biggest fear right now was Rey..
"Maa ke samne to itne confidence se keh diya tha ki Maa Sab thik kar dungi apne K effect se but kaise karungi ye to socha hi nahi..Kria tu na Jhalli ki Jhalli hi rahegi"

She muttered under her breath while slapping her forehead. Her mind drifted off to the day she crudely broke her love's heart. How much it pained her to do something that horrible to someone whom she loved so dearly. She shattered his heart as if he meant nothing to her. Nothing, There was absolutely nothing she could do to make it up for him. Her heart longed for his love; her heart needed the same warmth he had given her by his love. The times they talked all night bout nothing to everything, the way he used to make her feel like a princess making her giggle at his silliest of jokes. How she wished she had not broken his heart..

"Madam, aa gaya St. Louis College, 50 rupaye hue!"
Paying the Rickshaw driver she stepped ahead and gazed at the big gate of the college. This place had given so much to her but she couldn't give anything back to it. She was clear in her head about one thing that now it is her turn to make this college proud of her.

With those thoughts she marched towards the principal's office only to be met by various shocked glances, it was almost like her re-appearance had stunned the whole college and in no time she was the hot topic of gossip. Ignoring all those remarks she went ahead and completed all the formalities. She hushed all the questions all the teachers asked her by calling it a "personal emergency" But barring all that she still felt home. The air of Her college hadn't changed much but for sure it was different than the first she stepped in this college. She was the sole reason of the breaking of ever so there Dazzlers and Weaklings war as complimented by RDX who seemed to be more than happy to welcome her back in the college as well in the dance league.
"Thank you sir" Her eyes were wet seeing the same compassion in his eyes.
"It's Ok Kria, I know tumne jo bhi kia uska koi bohot bada reason hoga and you don't need to say it aloud till the time you don't feel comfortable."
"Sir, I don't even know how I am going to explain myself to everybody" Her fear was visible in her body language. She seemed to be tad too nervous to him.
"That's what am saying Kria, you don't need to, wo tumhare dost hai wo tumhe zarur samjhenge, Anyways I guess you're getting late for your classes so jao jao jaldi" He smiled showing his pearly white smile which for sure was the reason of Neha's crush on RDX according to Kria.
"Bye Sir!" Bidding adieu to her understanding teacher she began her toughest journey i.e to face her Friends..
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She settled on the small bench whilst ignoring all those questioning glares and got her books out of her bag. None of her friends were yet in the class. She wondered what might be the reason of such delay. She was too afraid to call anyone of them so she had no choice but to sit there.
"Good Morning Class, We'll continue from yesterday's lecture, Please open page no. 46 of your textbook"
Thus began the most frustrating 30 minutes of her life; She couldn't concentrate on the lecture, her mind was busy calculating the permutations & combinations of where they would be until..
"May we come in Sir.."

"Yeah! Come in..Btaya mujhe principal sir ne..I hope the event was good!"

"Yes Sir! Event was really good" spoke Sharon in a really sweet voice.

Kria's eyes wandered over the same "Siren Sharon" as Swayam fondly called her; none of them seemed to have changed even a little bit. She was gawking at each one of them who were now sitting in their respective places. None of them noticed her and for some unknown reason she was glad they didn't. What irked her most was the fact that He was not here. She silently prayed for his well-being and hid herself behind her books.

*Trrringgg*


The bell she was waiting to hear finally rang and she collected her stuff and ran behind her "Friends" who seemed to be preoccupied in their own.
"Guysss" She spoke lightly awaiting a heck of a reaction which made her shut her eyes tight but when she heard nothing she slowly opened her eyes to see none of them there.
"Great! Now I am calling an invisible crowd, Good going Ms. Kria Ghai" She talked to herself while shaking her head in her usual manner realizing that she wasn't really audible to them.
She followed the gang as the made their way towards the rehearsal hall; she thanked her luck as even she didn't want any scene in front of the whole college.
"Guysss" She spoke a little loudly this time and with a tad more confidence but with the same amount of innocence which enveloped her soul like always.
They all were aghast seeing her; All of them had different set of emotions on their faces. Neha seemed to look too confused; she had no idea whether to be happy that her best friend was back or to be sad the girl who betrayed them all has stepped in her lifes once again. The same girl who made her won not only her identity but also her love. She knew in her heart she owed her big but her betrayal had changed quite lot things. Whereas Vishakha looked calmer as if she understood that Kria wasn't one of those who would leave her friends for no reason. Swayam had enclapsed Sharon's hand in his own as he knew she was losing her cool. Who wouldn't if someone who betrayed their best buddy would come in front of them?
Kria had noticed that and somehow she was happy Sharon and Swayam were together now. They really deserved to be together. Rey and Kria had really worked hard for this. She sighed thinking about it.
Vicky and Nil never really liked Kria but the impact her disappearance had left over Rey had made them despise her completely. Bharat and Amar had a sympathetic look; they could never bring themselves to hate her. For them she was the one who brought them out of nothingness, Whereas Rinni and Simmi looked too shocked to react anything. It indeed was totally out of the blue.
"Ab kyo aayi hu yaha, Rey ka dil todna Kaafi nahi tha kya tumhare liye" roared Sharon with her eyes full of disgust. The girl who stood in front of her was someone she detested and seeing her friend cry for her had made Sharon all the more wrathful towards her.
"Seriously dude! Why are you here?" asked Vishakha who seemed actually interested in listening to her.
"Listen Kria! Jo bhi so called Dosti ya pyaar tha humara tumhare saath. It's over so just get lost now" spoke Vicky with equal amount of hatred as of Sharon.
Kria couldn't handle it anymore. The tears which she was holding till now finally came out, her hell broke loose. She felt too weak to answer all that. Her own friends hated her now and she knew it was all her fault.
"I am so sorry guys!, I am really sorry...Mujhpe Vishwas karo, I had no option" She weeped as she mumbled her apologies to them as she their retreating figures at the door.
"Guys'please' listen to me'Ek baar meri baat to suno"
"Kya sune hum Kria.." said Swayam in a loud manner as if giving her a chance to speak.
She looked down; she couldn't bring herself to look eye to eye with them and spoke softly..

"Maa ko meri dancing ke bare me pata lag gaya tha..She didn't want me to be here..Mujhe jana pada..sab chodh ke'tum sabko'yaha tak ki Rey.."
"Ek minute! Ye nakli aansu tum apne tak rakho..Tumhe koi haq nahi Rey ka naam tak lene ka..How the hell could you play with his feelings..He freaking loved you!" Sharon was enraged seeing her winning by sympathy, even the sight of this girl was driving her crazy. She bloody betrayed her Best Friend.
"Mai Rey se sach me pyaar karti thi Sharon and aaj bhi karti hu..." She cried as she said the words aloud for the first time, How she wished Rey was there to hear it. "Par mere paas koi rasta nahi tha'Mai nahi chahti thi ki wo mere pyaar ke karan tarsate rahe isliye mujhe jhooth bolna pada.." She hiccupped while saying the last few words. Finally letting it all out was really taking a toll on her.
"I am really sorry guys..Mai nahi janti how can I ever make it up to you..par na meri dosti jhoothi thin a pyaar..." She broke while stating the truth she longed to say..her knees gave away she fell on the floor. Her heart was filled with so much remorse that she just didn't know what to do.
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Neha caressed Kria's hand while she narrated her story to everybody. All of them were teary-eyed to see a girl whom they always pictured as a really brave and strong person was now there in front of them all shattered and broken. Kria's hiccups increased as she incessantly cried remembering the past few months when she caged her feelings. She was left all alone and today all those captivated emotions were out flowing in the form of tears.
Sharon still couldn't bring herself to believe Kria completely, she sympathized with her but what her friend had gone through in the last few months made her really cold towards Kria. Even Vicky had the same reaction; He didn't think he could ever forgive Kria for what she did to his best buddy. Destiny plays its own weird games and the worst thing is no one can retaliate to it.

Silently all of them listened to Kria as she spilled the beans. She didn't want to lose out on even a single detail maybe she was scared that she won't get another chance to explain herself ever again. Neha could feel her heart swelling up in pride and her eyes getting full thinking about her friend's sacrifice. She couldn't dare to imagine herself in Kria's shoes.

Silent tears made their way through each of their eyes as they listened to the story of the girl whom they hated since the last few months. Swayam wanted to punch himself for ever believing that Kria was a heart-breaker, his nostrils flared as she mentioned Shivam as the real culprit behind all the menace. That guy was a serious pain in the ass.

He went ahead and wiped her damp face while making her stand on her feet. His eyes showed immense guilt and his clenched fist portrayed his anger towards himself. She was an angel and yet they made her look like the beast. They all owed her in one way or another, their friendships, and their relationships everything stood strong only cause of her effort. He embraced her in a hug as if expressing how sorry was he for not trusting her as she cried on his shoulder.

This gloom-stricken stance broke as Amar and Bharat came with drinks for everybody, they were the true rays of happiness.

"Talo, talo...sab dlinks le lo..aaj klia wapis aayi hai na..celeblate bhi to karna hai" as he spoke with his ever so radiant smile.
Rinny was one lucky girl, Kria thought as she saw those two stealing glances while sipping their drinks. She was feeling much more content. It was like some heavy stone had been lifted off her. Her friends were finally with her...
"Thank you, Universe Jee" She mumbled in a low tone as another lone tear escaped her eye.
"Dude, we all are really story for not understanding you" Said Vishakha while she enveloped Kria in a bear hug.
"Vishakha, Rey kaha hai?" asked Kria finally letting that question out which she was dying to ask since she saw them entering the classroom.
They all looked at each other as an abominable lull took over their voices. She was yet to face whom she had hurt the most and they all knew it wasn't going to be easy for either of them. He was off to pick a cousin from the airport as he had directly gone there from the event and wouldn't be coming to the college for another two days.

Her heart ached as she thought of not seeing him for two more days. Since the time she stepped in Mumbai all she wanted to do was run in his arms and stay there till she cried her heart out to him that would have been her solace. She sighed as she cursed her destiny for making her suffer this much. She requested her friends to not tell her about her re-appearance as she didn't want him to hate her even more in these two days.

They all chatted and caught up with each other's lives as they made their way out. Her heart skipped a beat thinking about her and Rey together. Last time when she went she knew he was more than a friend for her but this time she was sure how much he meant to her and she was all set to show him that.

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The last two days were the most impatient days were the most impatient days in her whole life time. She couldn't concentrate on anything. Everything reminded her of him and honestly she was getting pissed off. Love makes people insane and she was surely acting like one right now. Calling her love-struck would be a pure understatement because she was truly Rey-struck (as emphasized by Vishakha). She was glad that finally the wait was over and he'll be back in the college but with that she could feel her heart beat fastening; it was like her heart was getting poked with each beat of her heart. She knew it won't be easy, he might just shout at her with all his might or who knows he might hit her for being such an idiot but can she blame him for that?

She shut her eyelids tight so as to get rid of all those thoughts. Pessimism was the last thing she wanted right now. Smiling inwardly she started walking towards her favourite haunt i.e. the Fire escape. That place was like a serene escape for her. It was their place; being there made her feel as if she is in his embrace'

The loud shrill of her phone made her come out of her deep thought as she answered her ringing phone. She looked like a ghost as she got off the call. Her face was all white with fear; her frail fingers tightened their hold against her phone as she tried to calm herself. Neha had called to tell her that Rey had reached the college and the news had hit her like a tornado.

"Universe Ji, Please bacha lena!" She mumbled as if she was going to enter some lion's cage.

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Her eyes scanned the atrium as she looked for him midst of the crowd. She was really dying to get a glimpse of him and she got that; the very next moment. He was there with a couple of guys discussing something with them. She glanced at him as she noticed those frown lines on his forehead; He wasn't the one who took much tension rather he was one of those Happy go lucky ones. She stepped back a little as she controlled her urge to go and caress his cheek. She had really missed him' She took a long breath and started moving towards the rehearsal room as she saw him going in that direction.

"Rey'" her voice trembled as she called him stepping into the empty rehearsal room.

His head turned in a fierce motion as his eyes tried to register her presence; they looked void as if there were no emotions in him. He stood there like a statue in absolute silence, an eerie silence which seemed to be haunting her.

"Rey, aapki Kria wapis aagayi hai, aapke liye, humare liye.."

Her meek murmur didn't get unnoticed by him as she batted her eyelashes so as to stop the tears which were starting to fill her eyes.

"Mere liye? Are you kidding me?" His voice was as sharp as a dagger.

"Tum-me aur mujhme koi hum nahi hai Kria'If that's your name'I'm sorry I have a bad memory, Par haan Welcome to St. Louis once again'Akhir GS hu, welcome to karna hi padega na"

His words stung her badly; she felt the ground beneath her moving as tears made way down her cheeks. He almost snatched her hand and shook it as a part of his "Welcome gesture" and went out. She hadn't expected this, she surely hadn't.

His reaction had left her gobsmacked as if somebody had punched in her stomach. She can't let him do that to her. He treated her as if she meant nothing to him. She couldn't tolerate such indifference. Her nostrils flared as she fumed in anger while wiping off those tears off her face. She ran behind him and caught him in the corridor as he walked away as if nothing really happened.

"Aap..Aap aise kaise jaa sakte hai" she spoke catching her breath.

He stared at her for a second and walked ahead leaving her agape. He was really testing her patience. It was like he had really moved on. Had he?

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"Usko koi farak nahi padta Neha'he is over me..He is behaving jaise I'm nobody for him!"

She had been weeping since her meeting with Rey. She expected his reaction to be extreme rather she wanted him to shout at her, make her realize what a blunder she had done, shake her by her shoulders and make her understand that what a ruthless bitch she was but what she didn't want was this reaction. She sniffed as she told her friends how he reacted. His coldness was driving her nuts. It was like he didn't even acknowledge her presence. Was she really dead to him?

She howled as the last thought crossed her mind. Her heart shuddered in pain thinking about it; was this really the end of her love story'

Her friends consoled her and wrecked their brain trying to decipher Rey's behaviour. Sharon looked lost in her thought and so did Vicky. They were evaluating the situation and seemed they had reached an end point where they pretty much supported Rey.

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It had been 10 days since Kria came back in the college and not even once after that meet had Rey approached her. They did bump into each other a few times but all she got from him was a straight face. It was like he had made those walls around him which won't let her be close to him. She was exasperated because of all this. Her brain cells seemed all set to explode.

She had cried enough already. She understood that she betrayed him and made him suffer but she wasn't also on a vacation. She suffered as well if the pain of separation wasn't enough, she also died everyday with the guilt of betraying him and now this "Mr. Daddy Cool" Rey was wrenching her heart all the more.

If not anything at least he could listen to her for once. Wasn't he the one who claimed to be the one in Love first?

"Jootha kahi ka" irriation was written all over her face.

On the other hand, Rey was having a hard time controlling his urge to go and slam her tiny body against a wall and shout at her for breaking his heart, for leaving him all alone when SHE needed him. Yes, Sharon and Vicky had confronted him. He knew the whole story but his heart couldn't just forgive her in one go. He trusted her so much yet she didn't reciprocate that trust; she brought barriers into their relationship by not telling him the truth. He understood that the times were tough yet for him their love was strong enough to face such situations. They could have talked out but she didn't trust him enough to come up to him and talk about her problem and that hit Rey hard.

He was confused; He just didn't what to do. At one side all he wanted to do gather her in his arms and comfort her that everything will be alright, he would be there for her forever but would that be a truth'because honestly he had major trust issues right now. He couldn't just be the same with her again.

He proceeded towards the rehearsal room as he really needed to let go off all this mental pressure and nothing but dance could do that for him. His thoughts were overpowering him and he needed time to deal with this...

*Kuch kam'Roshan hai roshni.. *

He heard the faint music coming from the rehearsal room. He had checked the timings; the rehearsal room wasn't scheduled for any practice. He peeked in to see what was really happening there and what met his eye literally swayed him off his feet.

There she was! Dancing like there was no tomorrow, swaying to the music as the melancholic beats made the surroundings even gloomier. His heart raced to see her dancing the same way she did, he got the glimpse of the girl he fell in love with, the same girl who was passionate about her first love which was dance and when she danced there was no inhibitions and seeing the same was pleasing Rey to no end. She tapped her foot with the music and stretched her limbs as if it pained her soul as she moved. Her eyes were wet and she seemed lost in the moment as if she was repenting some loss, a loss which was causing her such agony which aggravated her from within. She stepped closer to the wall while twirling her body like a bird as she caressed his poster with cloudy eyes. The last few days were too much for her. His indifference had made her weary. She needed him to come and scoop her up in his arms, cradle her like a baby but all she got was rejection..

His eyes hovered over her petite frame as she danced to the tunes...How right it was, since the time she left everything felt so different, so less and so empty...He could feel his own eyes brimming as he kept gazing at her, those beautiful tresses bounced as she danced in the rhythm. He needed her and she needed him that was the reality. What more does he wants, he wanted to slap himself for being such a jerk in the last few days and that was when hell broke loose...

He entered the room with slow steps as he descended towards his destination. She was dancing oblivious to the fact that somebody had invaded in her privacy, the moments she wanted to be all by herself. Suddenly she felt someone grasp her arm in a swift motion which made her fall off her balance and land in another territory. Such territory where she longed to be in, her eyes were looking deep into his dark black orbs and what she saw today made her heart jump in ecstasy... there were emotions, a whirlpool of emotions from fear to anger to love to what not. His cheeks were damp cause of the dried tears whereas his face showed determination. His arms embraced her as he enveloped her in a hug. It was a hug of assurance, one which zeroed the distance between them, one which made them forget their miseries, one which made them remember their love...

"I am so sorry Kria"

He finally spoke in a soft manner as he caressed her head while snuggling close to her as he smelled her hair and planted a little kiss there. Both of them had tears flowing out of their eyes as they felt solace after a long time. Silence spoke volumes for them as they comforted each other in their arms.

"Par Rey.." She tried to speak as she came out of the hug but was shushed by his finger which touched her tender lips in that very moment.

"I know everything Kria par aaj nahi, Today I just want you beside me, Please"

He wept as he again pulled her in a hug out of urgency. It was their moment of epiphany, they really needed to be together, and the separation had done enough to them already. Kria hugged him tighter as she felt the bliss which seemed to be seeping through their veins. Her happiness knew no bounds. Her struggle was over. She was forgiven and he was here in her arms and nothing else mattered to her.

"I...I really love u Rey..I Love u"

She cried as she spoke the words which Rey was dying to hear...those three magical words were all he wanted but as they say actions speaks louder than words, he scooped her up in his arms as he heard her mumble those words and made her come eye to eye and captured her rosy lips in a sweet kiss. He lightly pecked those soft petals while whispering the same words in her mouth. He felt content at last as if his long lost dreams had finally come true. Their foreheads touched as they came out of the kiss and looked in each other's eyes with so much love. It was like they themselves didn't know the height of feelings they harboured for each other. Kria snaked her arms around his neck as they kept gazing at each other while smiling ear to ear.

"I missed you so much, Kria"

"Maine bhi aapko bohot miss kia Rey'Bohot!"

He dipped his head in her long hair as he tightened his grip against her and planted several kisses along her nape while taking in the heavenly scent. She blushed as she felt her knees going weak in his hold.

"Wo Rey...hume sab.."

"Kitna baat karti ho tum Baatcutter" He grinned as she looked down trying to hide that crimson lush that was spread over her cheeks. They were in love and nobody could deny that. And now their life was back on track...

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*completed*
Pheww finally...Though the ending sucked🤢..But I really wanted to complete it before i get busy so here is it..Am sorry if you feel it feels thoda ajeeb😆 but same here...The day i started writing it I was really sad and today when i ended it..I was just too happy that i couldn't add much pain and all that sadotra stuff..Hope i don't get any rotten eggs😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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:Res:

Me shocked😲

Aarti, welcome 🤗

::Unres::

Who else can say dat mahaan dialogues except Smriti..😆

Oh my hell freak...

Same thing happened to Smriti..

Thats d reason of the behaviour..

The guy who cheated on Smriti was Shushant..

Shushant was a dancer n so did Smriti, she left dancing for him...

But somewhere the past still effects her n dats d reason why she changed d surname too..

Glad dat Smriti finally started realising the worthful things in Kria's life..her passion dance n her love Reyaansh..

Faking smile hiding tears...d dreaded past of Smriti made her possessive over Kria's life..

Loved it when Smriti asked for Kria's forgivance n Kria's gesture was heart-touching..

Finally the reason for her behaviour is revealed.

Im sure Kria wud analyse everything..

I so know this, when Kria comes to know what made Smriti does then she would surely make everything perfect..

Good Ending..

Pls don't end it here..

Pls unite Kriyaansh pls...

Would love 2 hear dat dis OS has more parts to it😃

Marvellously written n fabulous concept..loved it🤗


Edited by snigdha_arsha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Unres'd😃

^Edited

Thank goodness u added 'To be continued' part😆

Im proud to say, Im ur fictions fan, Piyu's Vm fan n Farah's siggy n Vm's fan😆

Pls be in this forum..

Edited by snigdha_arsha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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OMG😲

Aarti🤗So good to see u here...🤗

ok so coming to the OS...

it was Mindblowing...

And Emtional tooo...

Loved it...

Will be waiting for next part...

And

Wish u a very Happy Birthday Farah...🤗
Edited by Angel56 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#5
😳

Originally posted by: snigdha_arsha

Unres'd😃

^Edited

Thank goodness u added 'To be continued' part😆

Im proud to say, Im ur fictions fan, Piyu's Vm fan n Farah's siggy n Vm's fan😆

Pls be in this forum..

Thanks a ton! This forum has always been more than welcoming whenver I or as a matter of fact anyone has came here...i am so glad that you love my writing...And same her even I am a fan of Piyu and Farah😳...they are Fabulous...And i will continue it...i woke up at 1 and after my daily watsapp routine😛..I began writing and damn i am so hungry that i had to stop..will continue it after eating something😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
#6

Originally posted by: kajen

Thanks a ton! This forum has always been more than welcoming whenver I or as a matter of fact anyone has came here...i am so glad that you love my writing...And same her even I am a fan of Piyu and Farah😳...they are Fabulous...And i will continue it...i woke up at 1 and after my daily watsapp routine😛..I began writing and damn i am so hungry that i had to stop..will continue it after eating something😆

Gud fr me n all d readers😆

That means u will b deir in this forum ryt?

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Posted: 12 years ago
#7
awww... so sweet nd emotional...
loved it
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#8
m left speechless!!! 😲...amazingly writen luvd d way u describd evrything!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! suprb wrk!!👏👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
#9
awesome update...
waiting eagerly for d next part...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#10
sweet and emotional too...pls update soon...

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