'And Life was Back on Track..'{KR OS} - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome update luvd it
Update soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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that was damn good

plz cont. soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Aarti welcome back dear!!

Farah happy birthday jaan.

Beautiful Os.
The feeling of a mother to protect her daughter was beautifully said..

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Happy bday Farha di..it was really grt update dear..now waiting fot the next
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superb start just mind blowing
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: kajen

Happy B'day Farah🤗
Here's your little gift😳...You wanted me to write something for your B'day and I couldn't think of anything but KriYaansh so Here's a little something hope you like it..your sis-mance partner has tried really hard this time especially after writer's block that i had developed i never thought i would be able to write..Anyways Happy B'day once again..May you get everything you desire in your life...and even an Oppa😆
Love you
Aarti (Bai)😳🤗

OOOMMGGEEE Aaartiii😲😲😲 JHAPPPIAAASS and PAPPIAAS🤗🤗🤗, THNKU SOOO MUCH❤️
seriusly loads of huggies to u damn i cant tell you i'm jumping reading this OS
hahaha wen u said u will write soemthing yesterday night tab se hi mai excited hogayi thi 😛🤣🤣
ok firstly u know how much i luv ur writing and have missed it sooo much🤗, i'm literally in tears reading ur work 'Kushi ke aasu'😆, its been literally ONE whole year hahahahaha😲😆, gosh those were the days when you wrote such amazing OS's of arsha/kriyaansh which u never completed🤔 hahahaha🤣🤣
seriusly i cant thank u enough for writing such an Amazing piece for me☺️...i love u my sis-mance partner❤️😳😳
i know writer's block hahaha i went through it too and still going through it 🤣🤣but seriusly i dont see any tinge of writer's block in this OS, its just as Brilliant as ur other works👏👏⭐️
ok aage barring with the OS🤣🤣
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And Life was back on Track...

"Time heals all wounds Beta"

"Beta! You should move on now"

"He is gone forever, forget him!"


The same sentences still haunted her! Like a flash of memory they hovered over her skin creating deep goose bumps filled with guilt. She couldn't get it out of her mind especially now when she had realized that she ended up doing the same with her daughter.

"You cannot have this Baby"

Haila kaise dhamaka wali shuruwat karti ho😲🤣🤣...i always luv the way u begin ur os's😳😳...hahahaha i was in soo much excitement of reading it for some reason at this point i went in kind of a shock, mujhe pata hai u give the biggest shocks and surprises in ur writing🤣🤣 i literally went in shock thinking Kria was having a baby🤣🤣
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"Sab kya Kahenge Smriti, ek kunwari Maa! Kaun Shaadi karega tujhse"
oh ok it was mother ka story...silly me🤣🤣🤣
The memories of the day when she told her parents that she was pregnant with Shushant's baby were something still fresh in her mind. The day she decided she'll leave everything for her unborn child and live a life on her own. She was determined to live a new life forgetting the deceitful past.

Wasn't she herself living in the same past? She had distanced herself from her own passion of Dance because it reminded her of Him But she was also the same lady who changed her surname to Ghai which was His surname. When she discovered that even Kria had the same dancing bone as her parents had, She made her leave dancing forever and If that wasn't enough she even made her leave her love.

Realization was finally dawning upon her; looking at this ever so quiet Kria broke her heart into zillion pieces. She couldn't gather up the courage to console her because she knew she was the reason of her misery. Her own double standards had landed her little baby in such a truce.

Her insecurities of losing her daughter had driven her to do the same thing which her own parents did to her. She still remembered the day Kria came in her life; it was like she had got a new reason to live. Her mete existence had infused life in her. She had promised herself that she would be the best parent but..

WOW, everything is just beautifully said aarti👏👏👏...her whole disheartening past, her reason to live, her possessiveness and her love for her daughter, its all very heart touching😳😳👍🏼



"Maaa"

She wiped the dried tears off her cheek and gathered herself up to face Kria with the same plastered smile she had been giving her since a few days now.

"Haa Beta!"
"Maa, Mai college jaa rahi hu."
"Acha Beta."
She looked at her pale body as she adjusted her backpack and turned around to go for college. Her chirpy little daughter who giggled like a child at the smallest of things had become a lifeless soul. The girl who used to bloom like a flower was no more. Smriti shut her eyelids to stop the tears which were brimming in her eyes.
Gosh i love the way you described Kiya's look here through mother's eyes, its really beautiful 😳👏👏

"Kriaaa"
She turned back and shot a questioning glare at her.
"Will you ever forgive me Beta"
She ran back to her weeping mother and held her in her arms while patting her back and canoodling her like a mature person as she had recently become.

"

Maa, Aap ye kya keh rahi hai, Please maa, Aapne jo kiya mere ache ke liye hi kiya!
Please apne aap ko blame mat karo na Maa"

"Kaise na karu Kria, Mai chahti thi ki apni bachi ko duniya ko wo saari khushiyaan du jo mujhe nahi mili par apni hi insecurities me mai ye bhool gayi ki tujhe apni khushiyaan chunne ka haq hai...am so sorry beta"

"Nahi Maa, Please jo hua usne jaane dete hai!" She said while controlling her own tears which were on the verge of eloping from her eyes.

"Nahi Kria! You cannot do it to yourself neither can I do it to you! You won't lose your passion or your love the way I did...Tum Kria Ghai, the winner hogi...Meri tarah ek haari hui Maa nahi."

And she began telling the story she had hid from Kria, the truth she deserved to know, the truth which surrounded her existence, and the truth which made her mother the woman she was now!

aaahh i love this😳, Smriti confessing her past to her daughter, gosh i soo wished to see something like this in the show for soo long 😒but aahh never mind kria ko hi hatta diya😡
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"Aur isliye mai chahti hu tum jao aur apni zindagi jeeyo, Apna passion poora karo and iss baar mai tumhare sath hu kria" She said while caressing Kria's head as if blessing her for her future wishing her with all her might.

"Maa, I'll go and iss baar ye mera sapna nahi hoga, ye aapka sapna hoga jisse mai poora karungi"

And that was the moment Smriti Ghai saw the determination she used to witness in her daughter's eyes a few months back. Her almond like orbs once again gleamed with the same shine which used to be there when she was in Mumbai and this mother needed felt such bliss which is beyond description.

With that the mother-daughter duo started preparing for Kria's departure and talked their heart out something they hadn't done for a long time now..


OMG yayyy Kria going back...starting to move to edge of my seat🤣🤣


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Stepping on the land of Mumbai she somehow felt feverish. It brought back all those memories which she had locked in her heart; Memories she never thought she would ever be able to rub off her heart; Memories which were there to stay forever; Memories which were carved on her heart because they were His Memories.

Collecting her luggage she walked forward to call a cab. Her mother had arranged an accommodation for her. She was going to live with a certain "Ms. Disouza" as she read the note given by her mother.

"Ouccchhh" She squealed as she hit the bonnet of a car which was parked at the wrong place.

"Universe Jee! Aate hi kaise Jhallo se pala padva diya" rubbing her paining knee she mentally cursed the car's owner and got into the cab'

hehehe awww Kria ke dialogues its perfect😳😆😆

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"St. Louis College"

The name itself ran chills down her spine; she was way too scared to face them, the same people whom she had betrayed. She had thrown them out of her life like trash. She knew it was going to be tough. Her heart was racing thinking about it; she didn't even know how she would justify her actions but her biggest fear right now was Rey..

At the edge of my seat😳...how are they all going to take it...especially Rey😳
"Maa ke samne to itne confidence se keh diya tha ki Maa Sab thik kar dungi apne K effect se but kaise karungi ye to socha hi nahi..Kria tu na Jhalli ki Jhalli hi rahegi"
hahaha awww yup thats our Kria😆😆

She muttered under her breath while slapping her forehead. Her mind drifted off to the day she crudely broke her love's heart. How much it pained her to do something that horrible to someone whom she loved so dearly. She shattered his heart as if he meant nothing to her. Nothing, There was absolutely nothing she could do to make it up for him. Her heart longed for his love; her heart needed the same warmth he had given her by his love. The times they talked all night bout nothing to everything, the way he used to make her feel like a princess making her giggle at his silliest of jokes. How she wished she had not broken his heart..

So beautifully said👏👏😳

"Madam, aa gaya St. Louis College, 50 rupaye hue!"

Paying the Rickshaw driver she stepped ahead and gazed at the big gate of the college. This place had given so much to her but she couldn't give anything back to it. She was clear in her head about one thing that now it is her turn to make this college proud of her.


With those thoughts she marched towards the principal's office only to be met by various shocked glances, it was almost like her re-appearance had stunned the whole college and in no time she was the hot topic of gossip. Ignoring all those remarks she went ahead and completed all the formalities. She hushed all the questions all the teachers asked her by calling it a "personal emergency" But barring all that she still felt home. The air of Her college hadn't changed much but for sure it was different than the first she stepped in this college. She was the sole reason of the breaking of ever so there Dazzlers and Weaklings war as complimented by RDX who seemed to be more than happy to welcome her back in the college as well in the dance league.
I luv this whole para the way u explained all the shocking glance of everyone on her, i could totally imagine it, its like back to those starting d3 old days where gossip was in every corner of the walls of St-Louis😳, aaahh its Amazingly written👏👏😳

"Thank you sir" Her eyes were wet seeing the same compassion in his eyes.

"It's Ok Kria, I know tumne jo bhi kia uska koi bohot bada reason hoga and you don't need to say it aloud till the time you don't feel comfortable."

"Sir, I don't even know how I am going to explain myself to everybody" Her fear was visible in her body language. She seemed to be tad too nervous to him.

"That's what am saying Kria, you don't need to, wo tumhare dost hai wo tumhe zarur samjhenge, Anyways I guess you're getting late for your classes so jao jao jaldi" He smiled showing his pearly white smile which for sure was the reason of Neha's crush on RDX according to Kria.
aaahhh RDX i miss him, so rightly said he is soo understanding😳😃

"Bye Sir!" Bidding adieu to her understanding teacher she began her toughest journey i.e to face her Friends..

OMG i really am stunned😳...i'm totally at the edge of the seat waiting to read aage what will happen wen she meets others, how will they face her and bhoom u give the to be continued sign🤣🤣...aaartiii behna plzzz jaldi update kar dena🤣🤣🤣

really cant wait to read aage ka its damn exciting😳...u have totally captured the way it was before, the reason why we fell in love with d3 as a whole, the whole set back, the mystery of Kria's mom's past everything feels soo connected to that time, i just love it, seriusly u should write more😳

Your writing anything said is less, its just chumeshwari😳, hahaha i have always said this u choose the perfect words to convey what is to be said, in few words you beautifully explain the sad feelings the horrid past, the motherly love and care, the fear of going back to what Kria left so ruthlessly, the longing to go back and see those ppl whom she loves and cares so much about, its sooo Ah-mazingly written👏👏👏

Thnku sooo soo much again Aarti🤗🤗, this is one of the best gift🤗, love u ❤️

To be continued...


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Finally u commented Farah...I was waiting for ur comment since eternity Hahaha..Gosh I still can't believe i wrote something...And just the fact that you love it is enough for me to write more...Trust me i always wanted like this..I never liked everyone blaming smriti..Like the way i always tell u that My mom is m idol and for me ever mother is God...but sometimes even they commit mistakes and thats what makes them human...and thats the whole reason wh i introduced that Smriti part and her history for me it was one of the most significant things which D3 failed to unravel..And bout the bab part hahaha i put that intentionall shock is always important hahaha...and btw ur comment means the world to me...I am so glad that i could do anything for u today..Anyways am gonna be back to writing firse abhi...Gotta write alot...damn chota chota likhna aata hi ni mujhe hahaha bolna bhi kaha aata hai chota chota :P Love ya :*
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Posted: 12 years ago
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so it wasn't a rumor after all...

shaffs asked me ki aarti ne kuch update kiya hai???

i said mereko pm nhi mila... she said the same...

and then we were discussing abt u...

and then i brought my lazy self to the screen...

and voila...

u have updated...

so loved the OS>...

lekin i have my firngers crossed...

jaldi se bring KR together fir pura karungi comment dhang se...

tab tak zara sa homework karti hun...

great to read ur fics once again...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Vaish-

so it wasn't a rumor after all...


shaffs asked me ki aarti ne kuch update kiya hai???

i said mereko pm nhi mila... she said the same...

and then we were discussing abt u...

and then i brought my lazy self to the screen...

and voila...

u have updated...

so loved the OS>...

lekin i have my firngers crossed...

jaldi se bring KR together fir pura karungi comment dhang se...

tab tak zara sa homework karti hun...

great to read ur fics once again...

😆 Aww that was so cute...actually i haven't sent any PMs as yet..actually i intend to send them once i complete or else mujhe joote padenge hamesha ki tarah😆...And Thanks once again...😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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well mera ek yeh kehna bhi tha ki do cmplt it...

varna sach mein jute hi padenge...

but since it is a gift toh i had faith u will cmplt it... 😉

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