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Chandana

@chandana.s

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#21

Brilliant,the way u explained everyones character was awesome & most importantly Akash's feelings very very well described...Loved it

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Anamika100

@Anamika100

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#22

So true...lovely couple and somehow never exploited their story not talent. Thank you for writing about them.

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lilakumariacnw

@lilakumariacnw

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#23

Wow... Nicely written...
I love d payash..jodi... They are cute...
Thanks for writting this...
CVs always ignored them...
Akash thoughts were beautifully written...

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Revathy Sugathan Nair

@revathysugathan

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#24

I liked this one coz there had been some issues between them sometime in the show but it was never developed. They were shown as the perfect couple - which in fact they were not. Perfectly done - waiting for more in this line 👏

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shonagudia

@shonagudia

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Posted: 12 years ago

#25

A beautiful one . It's lovely to see something on this couple. It shows complete truth of the sentence that "every glitter is not gold" . Payash always been projected as perfect couple and specially payal a perfect wife. But Akash's insecurities over his past made him behave such a way. I am happy that he decided to start a fresh...
Loved it..

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fraser

@fraser

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Posted: 12 years ago

#26

Its awsome bingala
dis time payash

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ssafdar

@ssafdar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#27

Please can we have more of Akash and Payal...I know i'm being greedy as i want to read the build up to La and NK but this was so hauntingly beautiful I NEED MORE.

loved how Arnav intervened as her brother rather then a Raizada 👏

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mysticmanthri

@mysticmanthri

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Posted: 12 years ago

#28

thats a good one shot

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SS88

@SS88

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#29

Oh I wish they had shown this side to their relationship, but they never did. In the beginning of their marriage, when she embarrasses herself at the party , I was really disappointed in him when he got irritated with her . Then the Bubbly fiasco happened, and then the post-Shyam revelation , Akaash was such a disappointment. I had loved him in the show earlier, esp when he stood up for Payal before the wedding.In his own quiet way. I'm so glad, you've redeemed him here, to some extent.

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kondhili

@kondhili

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Posted: 12 years ago

#30

Yipeee
Discovered your stories quite by accident 2 days back. To say i am glad is such a small word.
What an amazing incredible writer you are.
Finished reading everything you have written. Loved all the OSs you have writen but 'The games we play' remains my favourite.
In Fact finished the FF in one go staying awake almost till 3 in the morning.
Was disappointed that you have not updated it for quite some time.
Could i please request you to updated the FF...please please don't leave it hanging in the air.
Well once again i am in love with your amazing writing skill

- Liza

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