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Applebee

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Saraa

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Aakash's feelings were beautifully described!

This reminded me of the scenario when Aakash taunted Payal when she decided to fit in the society of the rich!

Felt sad for Payal, she had always been a perfect wife,

I guess maybe too perfect for Aakash's liking!

I was surprised at Aakash's sudden outburst!

Arnav had to interrupt in between to control the situation!😲

Well NK with Lavanya-- that's good!

It's good sometimes to read something apart from Arshi by some Raizada's viewpoint!

I'm amazed at the writing skills and specifically the speed of writing updates!👏

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Saraa

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Posted: 12 years ago

I'm the first one to comment?

😆 I'm very happy!

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Saraa

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Posted: 12 years ago

Well let me just take the first page! 😃

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Saraa

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Posted: 12 years ago

I loved it when Aakash asked Payal out for a date...!

At first i thought that he had given her a divorce!

thankfully he didn't and he realized his mistake!

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Anjali

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Posted: 12 years ago

A stunning piece..! The way u have explained each character was apt. Loved how arnav intervened not as a bil but as a brother.

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Saraa

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Posted: 12 years ago

I love the name of the OS, it signifies the demons deep inside Aakash which he had been hiding for quite a time, the feelings that he never expresses. Like the oceans have treasure deep inside, he keeps his feelings for loved one deep inside his heart. 😃

I love this Aakash!

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farheen75

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Posted: 12 years ago

Just loved it... A very new and different look Into the relationship of Akash and Payal... Knowing akash's insecurities and Payal's attempt to fit in, a lovely insight into their married life... Wish that they could have added this track in the show as well... Waiting for more oses like this.

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archa2810

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Posted: 12 years ago

payash was the least explored couple in all the fictioms i have read till now... glad u gave it a shot

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dumas

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Posted: 12 years ago

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i am loving this awesome this remind me of the episode were payal had done everything for him at the party and he has insulted her because she did not fit in so wanted to punch him loving that you are going to write about them also love your spin awesome os can't wait to see akash woo his wife and asr told her not as his brother but her awesome os thanks for the pm

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