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Posted: 12 years ago
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Damn well written there! Now I hold a slightly different opinion of Akash. For me he's a dark character and I feel his potential was gravely under utilized on the show. He's surrounded by strong yet thick headed people. Arnav, nani, his own mother but its his fathers trait of nonchalance that he wears as a mask. Akash is the utopian ideal son, or atleast what he showcases himself to be but ofcourse he has dreams and aspirations and moreover.. A life! That he'd like to live without being judged and not to forget, ridiculed, courtesy his maternal lineage.

I think he's with Arnav 'cause he's learning and preparing for a coup. Ufff.. Filmy.. I know but somehow Akash to me is way more than a vulnerable, bespectacled, stammering goofball.

And so payal, who's been the good daughter but always over shadowed by K's outgoing nature, meets his mate in Akash, there should be fireworks!

I do like your perspective and the way you've put it and vedder just adds to the magic!

Much love babe!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: archa2810

payash was the least explored couple in all the fictioms i have read till now... glad u gave it a shot




I agree with you. The way this couple was showcased onscreen was blasphemous! It is 2013, just incase the cv's forgot! Who does all that.. Wear chameli ka tel to impress your husband.. Hmmphhh!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I loved it! The way you showed Akaash's feelings, the relationships between the three couples and the contrasts, everything was fantastic! Keep it up!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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akash and payal truly lovely couple. you are right they haven't been given the lime light as much as the ohters did. and you did them justice.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Akash as the doubtful husband,has growing up in the shadows of his cousin led to this... Nice to read his thoughts and views, he knows what he did was wrong...wow, I loved the actions and emotions spoken by all three of them.. Akash Arnav and Payal... The fact that Arnav helped Payal in itself was awesome.. look fwd to reading more...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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yea this was my demand
thanks but pls fulfill my second demand also. UPDATE UR FF
u write so well
the feelings described in such detail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I loved it... Wow akash's marriage trouble was delt beautifully here... When he called I thought payal would say s and come back like a doormat... But her no shows her self esteem... I liked the date part too... Fab one dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Loved it.. Akash & Payal's character have been really not explored after their marriage on the show. They had a great potential..
I'm glad you wrote this for them. Coming to your story I loved it.. This reminded me of the time when Akash was embarrassed because of Payal at a party. I liked how Payal didn't agree to come back when he asked, requested. But glad that she is still willing ti give him a chance by going out on a date with him.. Finally Akash is improving & learning😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I loved the OS. Loved Akash's feelings. The best of the whole thing was the shades of Akash that I had never even thought about. Also, I really liked Arnav storming in to his Sister-in-Law's defense. There were so many relationships that the show failed to focus on. This one - the potentially wonderfully relationship between ASR and Payal - was the one with the most possibilities.
Really enjoyed reading the OS. More please!!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Really liked this face of the ever-composed mr akash raizada. Loved how you described his feelings, and then of course the ending! I feared they had seperated but theres still hope and they'll make it up.

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