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Posted: 12 years ago
i always say u r superb di
and today yes also today u r amazing
fabulous update di its awesome
wow i like NUPUR hard replay for MAYANK
she is amazing di what a reply
"yes, there are maids to do all the work but my mom used to say me a woman should do all the works of her house her own. It's her duty to take care of her house not maids duty"
"Neither I have habit to have my breakfast with lunch"

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Posted: 12 years ago
mayank was rude on breakfast table.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Writer's Note

Thank you so much every one for liking the previous part*hugsss*
keep reading the story i hope you'll like coming parts too:)
Maria
Do remember me in your payers always)
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Posted: 12 years ago

Part 5

He gulped down the lump of momentary guilt lifting up his chin.

"Sorry.. I didn't mean that"

She had looked bewildered to see those scattered lines of guilt on his features that he was trying to cover up under his soft expressions. The panic left her face; she smiled at him tenderly.

"It's ok'you don't need to feel sorry----" She broke off her words, gnawing on her bottom lip.

" It was my fault too"

He had given her a look of amusement hearing her words and trailing his eyes over her beautiful features he then smiled genuinely. "But I must say the wait is worth as you cook really well" Taking the first bite of a cheese sandwich he said. She rolled her eyes in bewilderment at his unexpected comment and when she gave him a brief look she had seen the genuine admiration and she realized it was the first time she had seen him passing her a genuine smile that was reaching his eyes, He had fascinated her with his smile and predatory grace. He was looking handsome with his broad shoulders, his fascinating smile, and his deep dark eyes.

"Why aren't you having your breakfast?"

He had given her a quick glance lifting his one hand to take a sip from his glass of juice and she startled tearing away her eyes from his handsome features.

"Oh!!"She could just speak this and heaved a sigh of relief when she realized he didn't notice that she was staring him shamelessly few minutes ago.

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A week had passed since they got married, Nupur was trying her best to accept this new life whole -heartedly performing her all duties as a wife though she knew it was a long way that she had to pass. On the other hand life got busy for Mayank, after taking three days leave from his work he finally rejoined his office, there was lots of work that was pending due to his absence so now he was giving full attention to his work almost had been forgotten about her existence around her and he was relieved to realize that she didn't even bother to ask him the reason she might have guessed how much his work, his business had meant to him.

Hearing the thudding of things and noises Nupur turned the knob and entered in the room, "you came so early?"Her words were almost choked to see his unexpected arrival in the home at afternoon. "I've some work"he replied hastily turning back his face towards the armoire she stepped closer to him and then cocked her head, judging his panic expressions "are you searching something?"She inquired giving a glance to all the scattered files and papers on the floor and Mayank lifted his head giving an irritating look, "yes'I have kept that in this drawer but now the file is missed"

"I forget to tell you in the morning-----"

"Did you clean my drawers?"He snapped rigidly and she sucked in a breath of panic giving him an amused look to see the anger flushed on his cheeks..

He threw the files and then lifted his gaze at her straightening himself, She had touched his personal things without his permission The mere thought had only intensified his anger.

"Yes I cleaned these drawers and re-arrange----"

"How dare you touch my things?"He spat angrily and her body jolted with the sudden rise of his tone and the anger that she hadn't experienced before. She gasped in uneasiness clenching her hands at her side; Mayank was braced for the frustrated rage that clenched his heart. Any man would react in this way if someone would touch his personal things without his permission. But what he did not expect was the odd sense of guilt that stirred in the pit of his stomach to see the faint color of her face, those shimmering eyes'the hurt look on her features. He sucked in a deep breath and then let out the sigh of frustration, "Nupur'I---"

"I'm sorry---I shouldn't have touched your things. It's just when yesterday I was cleaning our room I find some of your files scattered in the armoire so thought to arrange and keep them in lock as I thought these are important for you" She snapped completing her words in almost chocking voice but one could easily feel the hurt in her shaking tone. "I'll keep in mind in future" He heard her faint gasp swiftly followed by the sound of the plump female hurrying to obey, and His gaze never shifted from her face regarding her with an expression of frozen guilt not even when she passed through him stepping closer to armoire and opened the one of the lockers grabbing out some files and papers. "Here are your files" She spoke almost in whispering tone blinking back the tears and when their eyes finally met he had found her so innocent'so vulnerable and scolded himself in a breath.

But when after handing him a flies she tried to move out the room he had caught her wrist for a moment he bewailed himself at his act but then his heart raised voice'he had right on her.

Her heart had leaped fast as she had experienced his touch very first time and felt a jolt of excitement in her body'a new sensation had passed through her veins that she never felt before. "Nupur'I'm---I was tired, disturbed--"

As his words slowly penetrating in her ears she aroused coming out of the effect of his touch remembering the way he had shouted at her without hearing her. She turned back and finally met with his gaze but didn't speak and he let out the sigh of relief at least she didn't spit or leave the room but instead she gave him a chance to defend himself.

"I'm sorry'I shouldn't have talked to you in that tone"

"You didn't talk but you shouted at me"She spat regarding him with an angry look and he sighed taking a long breath, "I shouldn't have shouted at you but---I was disturbed I was finding this file since morning"

This time his voice came out soft yet guilty and she had seen the lines of tiredness on his face'she knew he wasn't telling lies'she had seen how much he was busy in his work from the past few days and that was the reason of his raising tempers.

"But it doesn't mean you'll shout at your wife without listening what she wants to say"

Her voice was soft but still he could feel the flicker of hurt in that tone and it made him realize what he had done'she is his wife and she has right on his every little thing there isn't a big deal if she touched them. So what? He shouldn't have reacted in this way. Without listening her he spilled out his anger on her.

"You are right'I'm sorry"

She had looked deep into his eyes for a moment to hear his apology tone and she knew he was genuinely sorry for behaving like that.

"It's ok"

She smiled with the curve of her lips with the little shake of her head and he had smiled back this time and too with the heart genuine smile.

"So here the positive end of our one of the longest argument" He chuckled smiling broadly and she couldn't help but let out the slightest laugh yes he was right it was the start of their long arguments and the acceptance of their mistakes.

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Here is next part..i hope you'll like it:)

Edited by Maria. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Very beautiful update, Maria Apu...
For the first time Mayank gave a compliment to Nupur..
Mayank understood what took Nupur so long making breakfast and he apologized..
Anger is human being's biggest enemy and Mayank has a bad temper.. He shouted on Nupur without giving her a chance to defend herself.. But Nupur didn't give up.. She explained why she touched Mayank's things and also made him realize that the way Mayank talked to her is not appropriate.. A husband shouldn't talk to his wife this way.. And Nupur's this thing I liked the most.. Mayank realized his mistake and said sorry to Nupur..
May be this is the true meaning of arrange marriage.. Understanding each other, showing the right path to the partner and support him/ her in every phase and decision of life ( though I don't have much knowledge about marriage thing :P )
Continue soon..
Loooveee you*hugs*, muuuah!!
Edited by Humayra - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Humayra

Very beautiful update, Maria Apu...
For the first time Mayank gave a compliment to Nupur..
Mayank understood what took Nupur so long making breakfast and he apologized..
Anger is human being's biggest enemy and Mayank has a bad temper.. He shouted on Nupur without giving her a chance to defend herself.. But Nupur didn't give up.. She explained why she touched Mayank's things and also made him realize that the way Mayank talked to her is not appropriate.. A husband shouldn't talk to his wife this way.. And Nupur's this thing I liked the most.. Mayank realized his mistake and said sorry to Nupur..
May be this is the true meaning of arrange marriage.. Understanding each other, showing the right path to the partner and support him/ her in every phase and decision of life ( though I don't have much knowledge about marriage thing :P )
Continue soon..
Loooveee you*hugs*, muuuah!!

Humayra🤗🤗 H r u sweety?
you know ur comment is perfectly portrayed the essence of this update and i'm glad you read what i wanted to convey..my lil sweety is quite intelligent huh🤗
God Bless you sweety
TC
And love y loadsss
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Posted: 12 years ago
this one is sooo beautifull :)
Sonia.ArTi thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb part
adORABLE mAYUR
LOVED IT
CONTINUE SOON
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Posted: 12 years ago
Brilliant part Maria
You are Amazing
Loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
That was Superb par...brilliant writing
Loved Mayur ...continue soon.

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