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Posted: 12 years ago
fab update \
Kria is scared to do Rey's treatment😭 n she ran away from there...
Kriyam's convo was amazing😊...
u know i just love Kria, sharon n neha's bonding in dis FF❤️
n utni hi nafrat hai iss Taani se chudailo ki naani😡
Sharon maar hi daalti toh maza aa jata😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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jst amazing update
us taani ko toh n kisi jungle mein bhej do...😡
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update..
loved it
ye taani ko toh me ek din maar dalugi 😡
so finally kriyaansh ko kuch time pvt milega.. 😳 😳
hope saari MU clear ho jaye.. aur dono phir se ek ho jaye..
update soon
thnx for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
a hearty thanks to everyone who commented,liked and read it...thanks alot guys...😃😃😃

😛chapter 16😛

kria entered the ward and saw rey sleeping peacefully cuddled himself!!!...she slowly walked towards him...n moved her hands to caress his hair but she stopped...again she looked at him and her lips curved seeing him sleeping like a baby...without any hesitation she caressed his hair...which was enough... rey slowly opened his eyes...kria saw this n she immediately jerked her hands...

rey:kria??(slowly)

kr: mujhe injection deni thi(casually)

she took the injection...n injected him...

rey:ahhh!!

kr: kya hua??(concerned)

rey: kuch nahi...

she didnt utter a word and turned to walk away but rey caught hold of her wrist...

rey: u still love me...??(she turned to him)

kr: love???no..

rey: kria joot maat bolo...

kr: reyaansh itna sab hone ke baad bi aap kaise kehsakte ho ki that i love u(attitude)

rey: kria plz forgive me mujhe aisa nahi karna chahiye tha...(with teary eyes)

kr: rey plz i dont want to talk about this its over for me...

rey: nahi kria galti mujhse hui hai...mai hi usse teek karoonga...

kr: aap jo bi karo lekin kuch nahi badalne wali hai...(sayin this she took few steps)

rey:toh thodi dher pehle jo tumhe kiya tha vo kya hai??jab mera accident hua tha tum itni dar kyun gayi thi...the famous DR.KRIA GHAI ek oxygen mask pehnane keliye dar gayi kyun kria??

she looked at him in alarmed expression...

thoda flaskback😆😆😆

jab rey teek hogaya tha...n when he was shifted to the ward two nurses were talking...this was heared by rey...

n1: aaj pehli baar aisa hui hai..

n2: haan kria mam aisa pehle kabi bi behave nahi ki thi...

n1: kitna mushkil cases solve ki hai...but rey sir ka accident hua tha...kitna rohe tai..n rey sir ko chune se bi shiver kar rahi thi...pata nahi kya hua aisa??
(sayin this the nurses left frm their)

flashback katam😆😆😆

rey:bolo kria??

kr: dekho mujhe tumhari baat pe koi interest nahi hai...but but but she was pulled by rey...n now she was on top of him half bed pe...they shared a llhh...

rey: humhari beech itna duriyan mujhe accha nahi lagtha...tum humesha se meri thi n rahegi..tum kuch bi bolo...he caressed her left cheek n inched forward she knw wat was coming she wanted to stop him but she closed her eyes...rey looked at her n closed the gap b/w them...he took her lowerlip(liplock) n whisperd "i love u" b/w the kiss...as a tear rolled down his cheeks...kria sensed her cheeks were wet n opened her eyes n saw tears flowin down rey cheek his eyes were closed still sucking her lowerlip...without knowing her both hands moved to his both cheeks n with the her thumb fingers she wiped his tears n took his upperlip...the kiss turned to a steamy one...

after around 5 minutes kria broke the kiss...n moved a little back frm him...to rey caught hold of hands...

rey: plz mujhe chodkar maat jao...(with teary eyes)i want u all my life...jo kuch bi maine kiya aur tumhe bola usskeliye m...(looking down) m sorry kria...(sayin this he started crying a bit louder)mujhe maaf kardo kria...i didnt trust u...but uss time pata nahi mujhe kya hua tha...tumhe swayam ke saath...humesha mai chata hoon ki tum sirf meri bahoh mai ho...mujhe pyaar karo..sirf mujhe...bcoz i love u a lot...and mai tumhe kisi aur ke saath nahi dekhsakta...bolo kria tumhe mujhe maaf kardiya na??bolo u also love me na??bolo kria...

kr: i...lov(she was cut)

ta: kitni time chahiye tumhe injection lagane mai...??(to rey) baby cuuping his face...r u alright??

rey: tani leave m fine...(annoyed)

kria looked at rey to which rey gave a sweet smile...meantime a sister entered...

sis: mam ek patient ko dekni thi...

kr: haan chaliye...(she didnt look at rey as she walked out...his smile vanished into hurt)

after 1 hr😆

papa singhaniya and mumma singhaniya came to the hospital...

mom: excuse me reyaansh singhaniya jo accident hua tha??

rec: one sec mam..room num 143😳

mom: thank u...

rec: ur welcome mam(smilin)

both moved towards the ward...

mom: rey??beta tum teek ho??(caressing his hair...)

dad: hw is my son??

rey: mom m fine n aap ro rahi hai...????

mom:(sobbing)toh hasoon😆😆

rey looked at his dad with pleading eyes...

dada: sudha yeh kya baccho jaise ro rahi ho...dekho tum rohogi to rey pareshan hojayega n uska bp high hojayega...

su: yeh kaisi baat kar rahe ho app??

dad: maine kya kiya??

mom: aap??

rey: aap dono plz..mujhe kuch nahi hua hai..dekhiye m all fine waise meri swtheart hai yaha par mera kayal rakne keliye...

mom n dad: swtheart??😕

sw: haan swtheart...(entering the ward to juice coffea wagera wagera){mai jab kisi ko dekhne hospital jaati hoon yeh sab lekar jahhongi mereliye🤣}

mom: matlab meri bahu issi hospital ka dr hai..(excited) hearing bahu's name rey blushed...

dad: dekho bai maine suna ladkiya sharmathi hai iss topic pe par tum uska opposite ho...rey blushing deepened...☺️

mom: awww mera bachha kitna cute lag raha hai...(touching his cheeks)

their convo was broken by chudail😡

p.s(tani ko rey ka parents nahi pata n vice versa)

ta: koun ho tum log??(seeing rey's parents)

mom: hum??

ta: aur koi yeh yaha par...out nw??

rey: shut up vo meri mom hai...

tani was shocked...immediately she ran to rey's mom...rey and swayam and vicky's eyes went wide😆😆😆

ta: mom mujhe aashirwad dijiye(touching her feet)

mom: kya kar rahe ho beta??haan dedi aashirvad uto toh...(making tani stand)

rey's dad was busy in his cell...tani suddenly turned towards him n shouted dad...to which dad got scared n was abt to drop his mob but swayam caught it...

ta: aap rey ki dad honge na??(brode smile n excited matlab jumping)

dad: ha...hannn(scared)

ta: mujhe aashirwad dijiye...(touching his feet)

dad: haan beta aashirvad aashirwad...

mom:(thinkin) iss ladki ko rey pyaar kar raha hai...(she looked at rey who was smiling) ok agar rey ko accha lagthi hai toh teek hai...phir bi hmmm...her thaughts were broken by tani...

ta: mai kuch lekar aathi hoon...

sw: tani mai lekar hahi hoon...

ta: vo tum hi kaalo(annoyed..sayin this she dashed out)

mom: rey aachi ladki hai...(not at all happy)

rey: koun??😕

mom: kria??

rey: kahan hai kria??

mom: abi hahi aur chali gayi na vo...

rey: noways mom vo kria nahi tani hai swayam ki behen...

rey's dad sighed...🤣even mom bi😆😆😆

mom: mujhe meri bahu ko dekni hai vo b akele...swayam kya tum mujhe uske paas lekar jaasakte ho??

sw: offcouse mom...

swayam took sudha frm their to kria's cabin...they were about to enter her cabin but sister stopped them...

sis: kisse dekhni thi aapko??

sw: vo kria??

sis: vo rounds gayi hai...aapko wait karna padega...

mom: sure(smilin)

they sat on a nearby couch n were talking...(random stuffs)

sw: lo agayi apki bahu...(smilin wide)

mom looked in the direction were swayu was seeing...n vo kria ko dekhte hi reh gayi...😛kria yeh itni beautiful n pyaari😳

kria was wearing:
kria aisi dresses pehanti hai...everyday color changes😆😆😆lekin yeh kria nahi hai🤣

mom:(thinkin)kitni pyaari hai...good choice rey...

mom: swayam tum jao...

sw: ok...(n he left)

kria went inside her cabin...

mom: excuse me may i come in..

kr: ya hahiye...(with a sweet smile)

mom: hello dr kria...

kr: ji namasthe...plz baitiye...

mom: thank u...

kr: ji boliye...

mom: mera naam sudha si...sudha hai...actually mujhe ek help chahiye thi...

kr: haan kahiye...

mom: actually mera cousin ki beti hai..she's blind pehle ek hospital mai usse dikhaya tha...doctor ne suggest ki thi agar koi usse eyes donate kiya toh she can see the worls again...

kr: isme mai kya karsakti hoon...

mom: actaully humhe aisa donate karnewale koi nahi mila toh...maine suna aapke hospital mai bahut aanat bacche hai toh maine socha ki kisi ek bacche meri cousin ki beti ko eyes donate karsakte haina...

kr: aapko pata hai ki aap kya bolrahi hai...??

mom: ji...aapko jitna paise chahiye aap bolsakte hai v r ready to pay...(casually)

kr: aur uske baad uss bacche??( a little louder) mom was happy seeing her reaction...

mom: are usse chodiye orphans hai who cares...

kr: plz leave...

mom: excuse me...aap gussa kyun horahi hai...maine bola na i can pay u...they r just orphans...

kr: toh??kaisi inasaan ho aap..aap sirf apne baare mai soch rahe hai unn logon ka b ek zindagi hai...n waise mai yeh sab aapko kyun bata rahi hoon...mai aisa bikul nahi karoonga nah mai aapko karne doonga...samji aap...

mom: dekhiye aap bahut bol rahi hai...dont u hv manners...

kr: aap jaisi logon keliye aise baat karna hi teek rahega...matlabi log...n mujhe manners mat sikhahiye...aap itna bade ho aur aise harkathe kar rahe ho...n manners unn logon ko di jaati hai jinkeliye vo kaabil hai...

mom: ok ur wish..tc have a good day...

mom left the cabin...n thaught...mai jaise socha tha waise hi hai meri bahu...😃

mom moved to rey's ward...

rey: mom dekhiye apki bahu ko...(smilin)

mom: haan...

rey: toh kaisi lagi..??

mom: bikul acchi nahi lagi...n mai tumhari shaadi usse nahi hone doonga...

rey: mom😲lekin kyun??

mom: maine boldiya bas nahi hoga...

rey was in total shock with swayu,dad n vick...rey was lookin down when she whinked at the three smilin...n the three sighed/...😆😆😆

plz share ur views...
love ya😳


















Edited by only_kriyansh - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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fabulous update.. I'm luving Rey's Mom.. She's really sweet.. Hope Kria will forgive Rey soon
Edited by shukti_19 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Update plz

Update plz

Update plz

Update plz
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Pinkpearly

Update plz

Update plz

Update plz

Update plz

She hs ressed already... update is on itz way!! 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome update...well done ammu😉👏
kriya is so good rey ki mom to impress hi gai...😊
and this tanni...arghh!! 😡😡😡

Edited by Meesocute - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome!! loved it.. thx 4 d pm😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely update
Wow kr kiss
Hate dat chudail tani
Rey mom like kriya
Thanx for d pm

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