Troubled love kr ff thread 4(ch 21 updated)

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Posted: 12 years ago
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guys thread 4!!! i mean thread 4...last thread mai i hv just updted 1 chap...😔

but m also happy it reached thread 4😉
once again thanks to all my sweety readers n my spamming queens...
hotdiva_dmg(fida😳)kusha14(kusha)angle_luvkreya(tamanna)krasforever(shreya)(cutekriya)Mesocute(meenal)sweetanu(anu)...

n guys atleast ek thread mai 5 chappy hone do!!!
love u all😳
keep readin n commentin😉




😊index😊

chapter 14-page 1
chapter 15-page 13
chapter 16-page 28
chapter 17-page 35
chapter 18-page 40
chapter 19-page 55
chapter 20-page 64
chapter 21-page 77

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Posted: 12 years ago
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😊chapter 14😊
kria came back...rey tried to speak but she ignored n tls sister to nt allow unwanted people which rey heard...

rey: unwanted people...

kria was busy checkin tthe patients...

the whole day rey was just sittin in frnt of kria's cabin with teary eyes...kria saw this her heart whinched but rey's
words pierced more...

around 7:00 pm

kria came out n saw rey was still their...but she ignored n moved ahead which didnt go unnoticed by rey...

rey: kria??
(he called her but she didnt react...)

rey:kria plz meri baat suno...(she was still walking)

rey: kria plz (caught hold of her wrist n pulled her into the fire exit)

but kria never spoke a word...instead she freed from his grip...

rey:(cryin) kria please mujhe maaf kardo...please

kr: maaf karnekeliye kuch bacha hi nahi...(with expressionless face)

rey: kria aise maat kaho...i love u...

kr: but i dont...(casually)

rey: lekin humhare beech jo kuch bi tha vo kya tha...??(sobbin)

kr: mujhe aapke saath baat karne mai koi interest nahi hai...(saying this she was abt to leave...
but he caught hold of her shoulder n pinned her to the walll...llhh

kr: mujhe chodo...

rey: plz kria aise maat bolo..mujhe pata hai yeh sab kuch gusse mai kehrahi ho...n tumhara gussa jayaz hai...but
plz mujhe maaf kardo...

kr: (shouted) kya tha humare beech kuch nai tha...

rey: hum jo moments share ki thi vo tujhe kuch myne nahi rakthi...

Kria looked away to hide her tears...but it flowed down...

rey: bolo kria kya humare beech mai kuch nahi tha bolo...

kr: tum batao humare beech mai kya tha...??(a little angry)

she pushed him n stared at him...

rey: v love eachother rite...

kr: maine dekhliya aapka pyaar...(shouted)

rey: kria plz...(came forward to hug her)

kr: dont touch me!!!(shouted)

rey was frozed...

kr: (crying n sobbin)wow!!!! m so lucky to hv u in my life...jo kud apni pyaar par trust nahi kartha...rey tum kaise
aisa soch sakti ho??mai aur swayam...

she caught hold of his collar...

kr: tumhe kya laga mai tumhare saath itne din time spend kar rahi thi...mai tumse paagalon ki tarah pyaar karthi thi...i
loved u so much tumhe ek jatke mai sab kuch katam kardi...(she left his collar)ab humhare beech mai kuch nahi
hai...kuch nahii... aaj se mai tumhari zindagi mai kabi nahi hahoongi(sayin this she left frm their)

rey just fell on the stairs motionless...

rey:(thinkin) ko diya usse ko diya humesha humesha keliye...vo mujhse itna pyaar karthi thi aur mai...

he spent 1 hour in the fire exit...

rey wiped his tears...n moved to the parking lot...n left... after 10 miutes he reached a place...n he entered

racin track...


...he
soon got ready...
swaym saw him...
sw: hi rey...

rey: aaj mai jaati hoon...

sw: but rey??

rey: swayam do as i say...

sw: ok...

actually swayu had a race today...swayu withdrew his name n gave rey's name...the reporter announced...

mujhe pata nahi hw they'll announce...yeh mera style hai😆😆😆
rep: wow!! nw hold on ur breadths coz REYAANSH SINGHANIYA is gonna hit the track...

the crowd cheered n hooted they were mad...the crowd oly said "REYANNSH"

rey sat on his bike n moved to the track...

1...2...3...the game started rey moved with full speed...he finished his frst lap...he was ahead from
everyone...he finished the 2nd lap...he finished the 3rd one...but but but he saw something and looked in the
direction...(the bike was in full speed)he remembered wat all kria said to him..."HUMARE BEECH MAI KUCH
NAHI HAI""AAJ SE MAI TUMHARI ZINDAGI MAI KABI NAHI HAHOONGI" he uttered oly one word"KRIA"as tears
made its way...but suddenly in a fraction of sec a bike moved with tunder speed that he lost balance n the bike
skid n it went trashing down the track the helmet which he wored got removed ...rey rolled with bike...n it hit a pole...
(the crowd went silent n all were in a shock)

rey: (oly thing he said)i...lov..u kr...

kr: rey!!!(shouted) as she came running frm the crowd...security guards stopped her but she pppushed them n
ran towards him...meantime swayu n vick also reached him...

she was cryin bitterly..kria took his head n made it rest on her lap...n patted his cheeks... she checked his breath
it was stopped...

kr: rey rey...aankhe kolo plzz(cryin)

but she remembred somethin...she placed her lips on his n gave him a mouth to mouth...(cryin) after 3-4
attempts rey coughed,...

kr: rey ankhe kolo...(pattin his cheeks)

he saw kria...n smiled

rey: i...love...u(n he fell unconcious...)

kria's dress was full of blood...as rey's head was bleeding badly...

soon the ambulance reached n they took him to the hospital...

FLASHBACK..

when kria came running out of the f.e shar n neha saw her...kria entered her cabin...

sh: kria...(kria soon wiped her tears)

kr: haan bolo shar...

sh: tum acting mai bure ho...(the nxt second she was in shar arms...)

sh: sshh!!! sab teek hojayega...

sh: ab mai tumhara mood lighten up karthi hoon...aaj swayam ka race hai toh chale...

kr: nahi shar tum log jaho...

ne: arre aise kaise tumhe hana hi padega..

kr: neha...

sh: plz

ne: plz

sh n ne: humareliye...

kria couldnt deny them...

kr:(smiled) ok...

kaisa tha...??
plz share ur views...
love ya😳





Edited by kreya_pearl - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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yayyy 1st one to comment dhinka chika
awesome update amu👍🏼
aww rey pure din Kria ke cabin ke saamne uska wait karta raha...
loved their conversation in F.E...
Kria is so upset with him but hona bhi chahiye usne kaam hi aisa kiya hai😡
Rey met with an accident while racing😲 but y to fear when Kria is there😉
n mouth to mouth breathing scene of Kriyaansh killed it☺️
well done👏
continue soon
Edited by krasforever - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Amu luv u❤️
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wow me 2nd . .first time. . 🥳 😛

fabulous update amu
rey waited fr kriya whole day. . 😛 sahi track per hai.
Kriya ignored him. . ye to hona he tha.

fire exit convo is nice . . 😊 kriya ka outbrust over rey. . 😲 rey ne uska trust toda hai .trust is the base of evy realation to recation to banta hai na.

Rey is nw feeling vry guilty. . .😔😭

Rey ka accident. .😲. .😭[^(] so sad hope he will get well soon
Kriya gave him mouth to mouth respiration. ..😳
Hope every thing will solve out soon.

Loved it ❤️
Edited by _sweetannu_ - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Congo for the new thread n update was awesome 😊
hoping that Rey would get well soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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love u too😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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mind blowing update collar pakadke sunaya usne rey ko itna kuch but she have to do this otherwise maza kaise aati story mein mujhe tho pyaar hua is update se

wo kya haina mein aisi hoon mujhe is tarah kahani bahuth pasan hai
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Congrats for the 4th thread aur 3rd thread mein sirf 1 update , kya baat hai 😆...


This part was as always Awesome 😃...
Kria ka gussa expected tha but phir bhi...
Both of them are suffering 🤔...
Rey ka accident hogaya 😲...
Sab kuch bura kyun horaha hai 😒...
Continue soon...
N thanks for the pm 😊.

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