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PART 18b


Next day morning….

Riya wake up …

Riya: lagta hai kafi dyar ho gai… She sees in her side table clock.. It's 10: 00 am…

She rushes toward washroom for bath… After bath

Riya: arjun uthen subha k 10:30 baj rhay hai aap ko jaldi jana tha na …

Arjun is in shock: 10:30 ye Saam mujhay mar day ga…

Riya is infront of her dressing table , she wears a light blue saree and look like an angel …

Arjun: wow so beautiful……….

Riya: what?

Now Arjun is near her and hugs from back .

Arjun: kitni haseen lag rhi hai na meri Riya..

Riya: aap ki Riya.. She mumbled under her breath.

Arjun: ha sirf aur sirf meri Riya…

Riya blushes and still in shock is all this is in dream or reality…. He voice echoing all around meri Riya..

Arjun: yahan dekho kuch kami lag rhi hai..

Riya: kya…

He puts sindoor and fill her mang..

Arjun: iski kami thi now you look perfect…

Riya: thanks…

Arjun: thanks say kam nahi chalay ga..

Riya: toh kya chaheay aap ko..

He goes near her and want to kiss on her lips .. when His lips is an inch away from her lips She puts her hand between them…

Arjun: kya huwa..

Riya: pehlay brush toh kar lyn …

Arjun: sorry pehlay brush phir…

He wink…

After half an hour He is ready and She is in the kitchen busy in making break fast…

Door bell rings…

Arjun opens the door. Saam is on another side..

Arjun: tum phir aa gay, I mean abhi kaisay itni subha subha…

Saam: subha subha 11 baj rhay hai aur tu subha keh rha hai…

Arjun: par abhi is waqt tu yahan kaisay aur tu ETF kyun nahi gaya…

Saam: agar ye sawal mei tujh say pochun toh, by the way mei ETF say hi aa rha hun…

Arjun: yahan kyun aaya..

Sam: socha k apni pyari behan k hathon say bana nasta kar k jaun…

Riya: aaen na sath nasta kartay hain aacha huwa aap bhi aa gay hum bus abhi nasta hi karnay walay thay..

Saam: nice sahi waqt par aaya hun…

After breakfast…

Saam: ab chalen Arjun .

Arjun: kahan..

Saam: ETF..

Arjun in sad mood: ha chalo..

Saam: mei soch rha tha k aaj tumhari shadi ka pehla din hai ek din k liay tumhain off day dun meri behan khush ho jaey gi ,.. kyun Riya

Riya smiles..

Arjun: ok…

Saam: bye Riya raat ko dinner par miltay hain kal ki adhori batein aaj poori Karen gay…

Arjun is burn with anger : aaj bhi…

Saam: ha Dinner tyar rakhna Riya…

Riya: ok…

He leaves…

Arjun: had hoti hai Riya… aaj bhi ek toh us nay meri wedding night kharab kar hi aur abhi breakfast bhi socha tha dono sath beth k aaram say nasta Karen gay pata nahi kahan say tapak gaya… aura b dinner ka bhi program hai aaj k raat bhi wohi hoga jo kal huwa tha,… nahi aaj mei apnay ghar k bahir no entry ka board laga dunga usy enter nahi honay dunga…. Dekhna Riya mei us say chun chun k badla lunga… jab us ki shad hogi na dekha kaisa maza aaey ga apni bhi wedding night ko wo hamesha yaad kar k roey ga k mei nay Arjun k sath kya kiya tha.. I promise..

Riya: chill Arjun relax…

Riya is busy in collecting plates from dinning table and Arjun is still angry with his best friend sameer who spoil his wedding night….

Riya is in the kitchen and washing plates while he is silently sitting on kitchen's top..

Riya: abhi tak gussa hai..

Arjun: ha Riya …

Riya: ab bhool bhi jaen is baat ko…

Arjun: itni aasani say nahi bhulun ga badla toh mei lay k hi rahoon ga I promise… aur plz bad mei tum mujh say kuch nahi kehna k meray bhai ki suhag raat kyun kharab ki..

Riya: by the way for your kind information k abhi unki shadi nahi hai aur future mei bhi honay k koi imkan nahi hai so plz control your anger aur jab ho gi tab dekhen gay now plz smile my dear husband…

Arjun: ok fine … He stands and hugs her from back…

Riya: ye kya kar rhay hain aap mei kam kar rhen hun aur aap mujhay tang kar rhay hain..

Arjun: tang aur mei no Riya bus tumhari help kar rha hun See He cleans dishes…

Riya: ye help hai so nice of you…. Par aap meri help kar kyun rhay hain..

Arjun: meri nai nawali dulhan kam karey ye aacha lagta hai kya….

Riya: no jahan tak mei aap ko janti hun aap matlab k bina toh kisi ki help nahi kartay so plz bata bhi dyn k baat kya hai…

Arjun: kitni aachi tarha jan gai ho na mujhay , suno mei tumhari help isliay kar rha hun k tumhara kam jaldi khatam ho jeay aur hamain sath bitanay k kuch extra pal mil jaen…

Riya: toh ye baat hai par ap ko sham tak wait karna hoga kyun k mujhay buhat say kam hai…

Arjun: what? No way ye saray kam tum kal k liay chor do aaj sirf tum mei aur pyaar

Riya: no…

Arjun: That's not fair dear…

……………….*************………………*********

Arjun: Riya Riya …

She couldn't hear his voice because of headphone which struct to her ear She is listening some music on her IPOD… Arjun plugout headphone from her ears…

Arjun: kab say bula rha hun aur tum ho k sun hi nahi rahi ho…

Riya: ye kya Arjun itna romantic song sun rhi thi ap nay band kar dya…

Arjun: kabhi meri romantic batein bhi sun liya karo tumhara eklota pati kab say tumhain pukar rha hai…

Riya: sorry but abhi nahi aabhi ye song

Arjun: chalo mei tumharay liay ek song gata hun..

Riya: gana aur aap do opposite chezain hain rehnay dayn aap say nahi hoga is k liay mera IPOD hi kafi hai She again put headphone on her ears.

ummm hummm humm ummm

She plugout her headphone and turns.

ummm hummm humm ummm

Arjun is singing a song for her.. She lost after hearing his beautiful and magical voice..

( This is my favourite song from movie "wo lamhe" and half of that song lyrics taken from the same song but in pakistan's album)

Bin tere kya hai jeena
Bin tere tya hai jeena

His voice pull her towards him She stands infront of him….

Meri dil ki rani tum ( he points to her)
Meri kushiyon ka masusam
Mere Kwaabon ke tabeer
Mere sapno ki tasveeer
bin tere kaisi yaaar ( He puts his both hand's on her check)
woh jeet ho ya haar

tere sang hai sab kuch..
tu naa ho to bekaar..

bin tere kya hai jeena..
Bin tere kya hai jeena.

He ables her to sit on bed and put her feet on his knees and ties a panzaib around her feet,,

teri payal ki chan chan ( he rings her payal and kiss on her feet)
teri saanson ka sargam (She takes a deep breath)
teri khusboo teri preet ( His face come close to her face)
yaad aaeN meray meet ( he kiss her on her forhead)
jo tujh per likhay thay
woh saray meray geet
saari khushiyyan sapnay
meray hain teray saath ( he put her hands on his hand)

bin teray kya hai jeena
bin teray kya hai jeena

Suni khali raatein ( he is lying on the bed)
Roothie feeki baatein
Har ahat per chowkun ( he suddenly sits by hearing some noise)
tujhko har suu dekhon ( he searches her all around)
tujhko har dum sochon
tujhko har pal chaahon ( finally he find her )
Tere bin to jeevan mera hai intezaaar.

bin tere kya hai jeena
bin tere kya hai jeena


ummm hummm hummm ummm

Tere saath jeeeye jo pal ( he recalls those memories when they spend together)
kuch unse nahi badh kar
Tere khatir saaans na loo ( he again pulls her and hold her by holding her waist)
Tere khaatir jeeta hoon
Marne ki tammna bhi
Tere saaath main rakhta hoon

Tu hai jeene ke wajhe
kar mera aitbaar.
Bin tere kya hai jeena
Bin tere kya hai jeenaa

tera bunna savarna ( He place bindi on her forhead)
mujhay kehna o sajna ( now she rushes to the bed and sit)
mey kesi lagti hoon
mujhsay yeh poochna
gaalon pay haath rakhay ( She put her hand on her face and hears his song)
meri baaton ko sunna ( now he kiss on her lips sofly)
teri hairaan ankhon ( her eyes opens widely in shocked)
per aana mujho pyaar

Bin tere kya hai jeena
Bin tere kya hai jeenaa

Bin tere kya hai jeena
Bin tere kya hai jeenaa

Arjun: kaisa laga…

Riya: wow Arjun you are so romantic

Arjun: abhi toh shruwat hai madam aagay aagay dekhein hota hai kya..

Riya: I don't believe k aap gana bhi ga saktay ho…

Arjun: koi shak..

Riya: no..

Arjun: Riya yar ajeeb problem hain hum kahin bahir bhi nahi ja saktay…

RIya: wo toh hai..\

Arjun: mei aaj hi saam say baat karunga k jald az jald ye case sole karay mei tumharay bina ek pall k liay bhi nahi reh sakta…

Riya: mei bhi khuli fiza mei sans laynay k liay betab hun kitnay dino say bahir ki shakal nahi dekhi………

Arjun: ghar par bour ho jati ho na tum …, aaisa karta hu kuch dino ki chute lay leta hun phir sath rahen gay kyun kaisa idea hai..

Riya: bakwas buhat bura idea hai aap ka..

Arjun: ab pati hun tumhara samjhi yad rakhna..

Riya: temporary ho permanent nahi ho, yad rakhen jab tak ye shadi registered nahi ho jati aap mujh say dour rahen samjhen..

Arjun: pati toh manti ho na ..

Riya: unhun..

Arjun: riya..

Riya: Arjun…

Arjun: bus isi tarha pyar say mera naam liya karo Going to kiss her

Riya: shut up…

Arjun: ok mujhay tum say baat nahi karni..

Riya: ok no problem…..

Arjun: are you sure…

Riya: for what?

Arjun: please don't go away from me…

Riya: try to catch me ..

Arjun: ok I will do …

She runs away and he try to catch her but she runs very fast there runs here and there like a tom want to catch jerry…

Arjun: bus buhat huwa try I accept I lose…

Riya: oh ACP Arjun har gaye apni patni say…

Arjun catch her: itni aasani say har manay wala nahi hun.. He hold her from her waist…

Riya: ye cheating hai arjun…

Arjun: everything is fair in love and war…..

Riya: no that not fair Arjun..

Arjun: why that's not fair..

Riya: ap nay cheating ki hai..

Arjun: Arjun aur cheating impossible riya…

Riya: ok fine I don't want to talk you .

Arjun: I am also not interest to talk with you…

Riya: ok fine dekhtay hai kaun kisay manata hai..

Arjun: mujh say ye umeed chor do mei jhuknay wala nahi hun, tumhain hi ghutnay takenay hun gay…

Riya: no way …

After 2 hour they don't speak a single word, Riya feels sad She want to say sorry to him but how she do this She think and see her angry husband who is busy in watching television, She collect all her effort and sit beside him.

Riya: sorry Arjun..

Arjun ppretented that He doesn't hear her word..

Riya: puts her head on his shoulder and her hand rested on his chest..

Riya says Sorry again. He doesn't response but move his hand around her shoulder and pull her more closer to his heart… her hand now moves to his face

Riya: I am sorry Arjun mujhay maaf kar dyn please..

Arjun: ok ek shart par .

Riya: kaisi shart.

He puts his middle finger on her lips and then put his finger on his check . He want a sweet kiss from her as her punishment..

Riya: no Arjun.. Sorry mei nay ap ko sorry keh dya ye hi bari baat hai ap mujh say ye umeed hargiz na Karen.

Arjun tightened his grib around her..

Arjun: maafi toh isi shart par milay gi..

Riya: mei saari umar ap say baat kiay bina reh sakti hun par ap ki ye shart mujhay manzoor nahi hai…

Arjun: fine He remove his hand around her and she goes away from him..

At night they silently take dinner without saying any word there is a cold war began among them.After dinner they laid on the bed but they didn't face eachother…

Arjun thinks: larai toh kar li hai par us say baat kiay bina kaisay rahun ga.. kya sorry bol dun usay.. nahi Arjun Acp Arjun aur apni patni ko sorry bolay nahi. Wo samjhay gi k tu kamzor par gaya phir wo kabhi wo nahi karay gi jot u chahta hai..

Riya thinks: ye ACP arjun aur inka ego, tujhay kya lagta hai Riya ye tujh say maafi mangay ga nahi kabhi nahi iska shaan kam nahi ho jaey gi par jo bhi ho mei ab dobara sorry nahi bolun gi…

Arjun POV soch kya raha hai kuch kar us say baat kiay bina tu kaisay rhay ga, kuch aaisa kar jis say wo khush bhi ho jaey aur tera bharm bhi reh jaey..

After half an hour He thinks that She is sleeping He goes near her and put his hand around her waist and his head on her shoulder " bilkul pagal ho tum riya, khuda nay aaisi pagal meray naseeb mei likhi thi par job hi ho Riya tum meray jeenay ki zarorat ho, tum say hi meri sansein chalti hain Riya, tum na dekhun toh mera din nahi guzarta Riya, you are my first and last Love ILOVE YOU Mrs. Riya Arjun Rawate" and I love you too mr Arjun rawate.. this is his wife voice…" tum soi nahi thi" he asked in surprise "Nahi" She replied… Arjun "sorry Riya".. "Jab aap nay mujh say maafi mang li hai toh mujhay aap ko maaf kar dena chaheay "agar aap apna ego bhool k mujh say maafi mang saktay hain toh mujhay bhi apni zid chor k aap ki wish poori kar deni chaheay" She kisses him on his check

Arjun: thanks Riya and hug her..

Riya: par meri shart ka khayal rakhtay huway apko mujh say doori banai rakhni hogi She pushes him away from her..

Arjun: mei nay poori reti riwaj say tumhain apnaya hai phir ye sab kyun , kyun Riya hamaray rishtay ko mukamal karnay k liay court ki permission zarori hai…

Riya: zarori hai Arjun hamain zamanay k sath chalna hai samjhay ya samjhaun..

Arjun: ok madam ji. He again put his hand on her waist "is par bhi pabandi hai kya"

Riya: nahi ,.. par aap nahi sudhroo gay…

Arjun: koi shak.

Riya: nahi..patidev

They smile and take a sweet dream…

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice update... poor Arjun cnt evn romance his wife...bhai- behen both r testing his patience... wats wrong with Rathore cnt he knw dey r newly married couple... Ariya fight ws cute... update soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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So cute update dr...
Ariya fight was so superb...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#14
Heyyy when. u update ur next part dr cant wait
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Omggg achha huya jo maine ek pag piche dekh liya...verna mujhe pata he nahi chalta ke next part bhi update ho chuka haiii...
lvly part ...ufff ye sam bhi...gAlat time per entry kerta haiii...hahhhaaa arjun is fuminggg...lvld it,...
are abhi merrige ko ek din bhi nahi huya or ye fight suro...
gr8 update ...pkz conti soon cant wait for morrr,
samjhe ya samjhayonnn
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Posted: 12 years ago
#16
wow arjun singing song for riya...
so romantic update it is
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#17
very very sweet
thnx for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#18
the update was just awesome :)
their fight was too cute : loved it
how sweet he was singing song for her :) the song selection was great... love the song...
rathore is just hilarious 😆 he always comes on wrong time...
awww feeling bad for arjun he can't even romance his lovely wife 😆poor guy...
eagerly waiting for next part
thanks for the PM :)
continue soon

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Posted: 12 years ago
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loved it ur awesum. Fablous writer u r. I am a gr8 fan continue soon luv
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Piyarani

Omggg achha huya jo maine ek pag piche dekh liya...verna mujhe pata he nahi chalta ke next part bhi update ho chuka haiii...
lvly part ...ufff ye sam bhi...gAlat time per entry kerta haiii...hahhhaaa arjun is fuminggg...lvld it,...
are abhi merrige ko ek din bhi nahi huya or ye fight suro...
gr8 update ...pkz conti soon cant wait for morrr,
samjhe ya samjhayonnn


i try to update soon but i have alot of load of works at home , please wait for few days
i promise my next update is long and full of fun

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