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Posted: 12 years ago
#31
eagerly waiting for next part
continue soon...
write a long one full of ariya😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32
wow they are so cute...

plz quickly legalize their marriage so that arjun's desperation can settle down

poor arjun evrytym he's trying to shower his love on riya...riya's shart comes in between.

nice work dear...keep it up

and please update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33
Waooo dr
its awesome part...!!!
i lv to see arjun new Angle!!!..
lv rathor n arjun conversation,!!!
hey who that person..!!!!!'.
i meen riya ko kon marna chahata hai????
ohhh i lv when arjun says to riya ...!!!
main tumhare mayke aya huin..!!!!!
hahhhaaa shree was totaly confuse...!!!!
ab ye rathor ka kon sa past hai???
uff etane sare Q or ans ek bhi nahi!!!!
cant wait to read more!!!!
update soon!!!!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34
Hey dear! 😊
Read the whole ff in a go!
And I loved it!!
First mein Arjun ka ghut ghut ke jeena.. Aww.. Poor guy! 😭
He wanted Riya soo badly!!
Everyday he used to hurt himself coz he was not able save her.. 😒
And he even went to Dargah to ask God his Riya back!!
I wish aise hi show mein bhi dikhate!!

And then comes the bang!
Riya was alive!!
She was just in coma!!
And Arjun comes to knw about her too!! Wow!!

Phir Riya shifting to Arjun's house but dumbo dint realise Arjun's love after his antics too! 😆
Her awkwardness nd then.. Ariya's shaadi.. hayyee.. 😳😳
You hv written the whole ff very beautifully!!😳

Next comes Rathod nd Arjun's mini fights.. Hahaha.. I love them!! 😆

Bas ab jaldi se unki shaadi legal kardo yaar! 😆
Waiting for the next part 😊
Edited by ..Sneha.. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35
Waooo
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nexttt part is sooo
ooo romentic...!!!!!!
its awesome yr...!!!!!supubbb!!!!
n realy romenticcc!!!!!
i lv each n every single scene!!!!!!!!
ohhh chuti kurti...grand son...!!!! lvvvlllyyy part cant wait to read more...update soon samjhe ya samjhayooo...!!!!
plz uodate soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
wow it was cute romance
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
when will u be updating dear...cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38


PART 20


Arjun: mei toh sirf aap ko tease kar raha tha..

Riya: really

Arjun: toh aur kiya…

Riya; lagta hai aap nay ETF ko alwida keh diya hai.

Arjun; aap ko aaisa kyun laga .

Riya: jaisay aap meray sath flirt kar rhay ho us say toh yahi lagta hai k aap ko ETF nahi jana.

Arjun: oh shit mujhay jaldi jana tha Saam aur simar bhi nahi hai…

Riya: rasta yahan hai washroom ka..

Arjun: par ye shirt..

Riya: mei isay press kar rhi hun ap ja k fresh ho jao..

Arjun: Thanks..

Riya: what happened? Go..

Arjun: jar ha hun na.

Riya: towel lay k jaey ga bad mei mei nahi daynay wali.

Arjun: ok.. he picks the towel. ( Arjun's POV) " kya ajeeb larki jo plan sochta hun isay kaisay pata chal jata hai, socha tha towel chor k jaun ga aur isay tang karunga par ye.. chal beta Arjun aaj tera kuch nahi honay wala"

Riya: ha kuch nahi honay wala aao ka aap ka koi plan aaj kam nahi karay ga..

Arjun: tum nay nahi bataya k tum dil o dimagh dono parh sakti ho.

Riya: what?

Arjun: kuch nahi jar ha hun..

Riya press his all time favourite shirt.

Arjun: riya riya are you in the room.

Riya: ya I am here. Kya kam hai aaj towel chaheay toh mei nahi denay wali kaha than a lay k jana..

Arjun: tum meri baat toh suno..

Riya: ha bolo.

Arjun: agar meri shirt press ho gai ho toh day do .

Riya: ok I will give you.. please open the door.

He opens the half door and grab shirt from her, He also holds her hand.

Riya: kya kar rhen hain mera hath choren.

Arjun opens the door and pulls her inside the bathroom.

Riya: ye kya kar rhay hai aap..

They recalls their bathroom scene when Riya shoot's first time and She was disturbed and when she didn't know what She did? She rushes toward the bathroom and wet herself under the shower…"

Arjun pulls her towards her.

Arjun: yad aaya kuch .

Riya: ha.

Arjun pulls her more closer: yahi wo kandha hai jis par tum nay aansoo bahaey thay..

Riya: in baton k karnay ka aaj…

Arjun: aaj bhi wohi mei hun wohi tum ho aur ye ….. farq bus itna hai k us waqt tum bhegi hui thi aur abhi mei.. us waqt tum sirf tum mujh say pyar karti thi aur aaj mei bhi… kyun na usay phir say celebrate kya jaey..

Riya: shut up Arjun shirt pehno aur bahir aa jao mei wait kar rhi hun…

Arjun: un hun aaisay nahi mei is moqay ko janay nahi dunga..

Riya: jo karna hai kar lyn mei chali bye..

Arjun: no Darling aaj nahi..

She takes a step back he take a step in She again step back and he steps in atlast she hits from bathroom's wall he is infront o her … she puts her hand on the walls and He opens her hair and start combing… Now his hand moves to her face… She is not able to release her from him. She is totally trapped with his strong muscles… she also doesn't want to go away from him

Riya: Arjun please.

Arjun: aasiay nahi Riya pyar say kaho.

Riya: Ar..jun.

She opens the wall of shower and they both becomes wet. Arjun is afraid by sudden falling of water over them.. he left her and lossen his grib. Riya laughs" what happened my dear husband"

Arjun: oh ye tumhari harkat thi.

Riya: yes..

Arjun: ab toh aap bhi bheg chuki ho kyun na..

Riya pushes him outside from bathroom and locked the door..

Arjun: riya darwaza kholo ..

Riya: no

Arjun: ok ..

Riya: arjun.

Arjun: Ha bolo kiya huwa.

Riya: Arjun wadrobe say meray kapray day dyn mujhay change karna hai..

Arjun: nahi milen gay khud aa k lay lo.

Riya: mei bahir kaisay aa sakti hun please day dyn na..

Arjun: no.

Riya: theek hai nahi dyn..

His shirt and pants is in the bathroom She wear his shirt and pant.

Arjun: ab pata chalay ga usay kya karay gi ab..

Riya: kuch nahi..

He sees her by wearing his dress.

Arjun: tum nay meray kapray kyun pehnay…

Riya: jaisay ko taisa Mr. Arjun.. ap kya samjhtay ho sirf ap k pas mind hai mei bhi ap say kam nahi hun..

Arjun: manah paray ga aap ko.

Riya: a bap ETF janay ka kasht Karen gay a…

Arjun: jar ha hun meri shirt toh do mujhay.

Riya: ye mei nay pehan li hai aap kuch aur pehan lo.

Arjun: but..

Riya: ap say mei nay pehlay hi kaha tha meray kapray day dyn magar ap nahi manay hi nahi.

Arjun cellphone rings.

Arjun: ha shree bus pohnch raha hun just 15 min ok.

After 15 min.
Arjun: jar ha hun Bye meri jaan ka khayal rakhna.

Riya: apki jaan.

Arjun: ha meri jaan.

Riya: kahan hai ap ki jaan.

Arjun: pointed to her heart: Yahan hai

She blushes .

Arjun: agar aaisay dewana banati raho gi toh mei nahi janay wala.

Riya: jaen na Bye

Arjun: aaisay nahi He kisses on her check " aaisay kehtay hain bye"

Riya checks becomes pink…

Arjun: returns gift..

Riya: no……….

Arjun: ok bad mei lay lunga dyr ho rhi hai he again kiss her and go..

Riya: ye bhi na..

ETF is investigating a case Shree Chotu and Arjun is in a bar…

Shree: sir mei nay details colleck karnay ki buhat koshish ki ,agar koi kuch kehnay ko tyar hi nahi.

Chotu: mei nay bhi buhat pocha magar koi apna munh kholnay ko tyar hi nahi .

Arjun: koi bhi nahi ..

Shree: nahi sir koi bhi nahi..

Chotu: par sir ek larki hai jo humari help kar sakti hai.

Arjun: kaun hai wo larki..

Shree: wo hai ..

Arjun: ok mei usay say pochta hun tum dono sab par nazar rakho.

Shree and chotu: ok Sir..

Arjun to that Girl : he tells her something and she nodded her head in positive..

Arjun: thanks..

Arjun phones ring..

Arjun: yes jaan kyun call kiya tum nay.

Riya: itna shor kyun ho rha hai kahan ho aap.

Arjun: ek baar mei…

Riya: baar mei … ap baar mei kyun gay kahin ap nay drink toh nahi ki. Mujhay aap aisay hargiz nahi lagtay thay par aap..

Arjun: Riyu relax jaan… mei yahan ek case k silsilay mei aaaya hun…

Girl: sir ye lyn details sari details hain is mei jo aap nay mangi thi..

Arjun: lao do mujhay..

Girl: unhun aaisay nahi..

Arjun: kya matlab hai tumhara.

Girl: pehlay ek cup coffee meray sath..

Arjun: abhi nahi kabhi aur mujhay kuch kam hai. Ye file mujhay day do please

Girl: theek hai jab aap ka meray sath coffee penay ka mood hoga tab ye file mujh say lay lijeay ga..

Arjun: ok chalen.

Girl: sure pass mei hi ek coffee shop hai wahan chaltay hai.

Arjun: ok..

In the coffee shop.

Girl: kafi handsome hain aap.

Arjun: thanks.

Girl: kafi intelligent bhi lagtay hain.

Arjun: hummm.

Girl: ek baat pochun..

Arjun: ya..

Girl: ap ki shadi ho gai hai kya..

Arjun: wo..

Girl: I knew you are bachelor.

Arjun: ap ko kasiay pata..

Girl: aap k chehray ki chamak bata rhi hai aap bechlor ho..

Arjun: kyun kuch likha hai kya ,meray chehray par.

Girl: nahi kyun k jo chamak aap k chahray par hai wo married logon k chehray par nahi hoti after all biwizindagi ka azab..

Arjun: unhummm coffee khatam ho chuki hai ab wo file mujhay milay gi.

Girl: itni jaldi bhi kya hai ACP arjun Rawate.

Arjun: mujhay chalna chaheay

GIrL; Ok first promise me hum dobara milen gay toh dinner par wo bhi meray ghar par.

Arjun: ok… by the way ap apna contact number dyn dyn zarorat par sakti hai case mei apki bhi. Number hoga toh aasani say ap say contact ho sakay ga

GirL: sure why not?

Arjun: waisay ap say bhi mujhay ek baat kehni hai.

Girl: ha kahen..

Arjun: shaid ap chehray ghalat parhti hain..

Girl: what do you mean?

Arjun: Iam married, meri eke dad beautiful wife hai, aur meray chehray ka ye glow usi k liay hai..

Girl: oh waisay mujhay koi problem nahi married man bhi buray nahi hotay ..

Arjun: bye.

Girl: I hope hum dobara zaror milen gay.

Arjun: bye and thanks for details..

At home.

Arjun: itni shanty kyun hai ghar par is everything ok. Riya where are you?

Oh aap yahan ho.. kya huwa itni khamoshi moan rath rakha hai kya..

At Riya's side no reply.

Arjun: Riya kuch kuch poch raha hunt um say.

Riya is still zipped her lips.

Arjun: Riya mei tum say batein kar rha hun in dewaroon say nahi..

Riya is fuming with anger.. He sees her red eyes.

Arjun POV " lagta hai ye tofan say pehlay ki khamoshi hai, tu nay aaisa kya ghalat kiya Arjun yaad kar.. nahi yaar kuch ghalat toh mei nay nahi kya, us waqt jab uski call aai thi tab toh kuch nahi kha than a tu nay, Nahi us pal bhi kuch nahi kaha tha sab kuch toh theek tha us waqt tak ab kya huwa isay"

Arjun: Riya kuch toh bolo tumhari ye khamoshi meri bechaini aur barha rhi hai.

Riya: toh aab aap ko ab yaad aa gaya k aap ki ek adad biwi hai jab aap us larki say flirt kar rhay thay us waqt aap ko ye biwi yaad nahi thi na Are you bachelor Mr. Arjun ap k chehray ki chamak bata rhi hai aap bechlor ho,, aap apna contact number kyun nahi day deti… biwi kanta hoti hai na ghar kyun aaen hain dinner par kyun nahi gay us k sath..

Arjun: tumhain kaisay pata

Riya: mujhay kaisay pata .. sahi kaha aap nay mujhay kaisay pata mujhay toh aap nay yahan qaid kya huwa hain na mera toh is dunya say koi rabta nahi phir bhi mujhay pata chal gaya How it's possible? Pata nahi mujhay yahan qaid kar k aap kis kis say miltay hogay mei toh yahan hun na mujhay kuch pata hi nahi. Kash aaj bhi mei ETF member hoti har pal aap k sath rehti ap par nazar rakhti kya karty ho aap kis kis say miltay ho..

Arjun: tum mujh par shak kar rhi ho.. Riya mei bus us say case details laynay gaya tha bus… Tumhari kasam Riya mei tumharay siwa kisi aur ki taraf nahi dekh sakta mera pehla aur aakhri pyar tum ho Riya…Mei kabhi kisi aaisa nahi soch sakta. He has tears in his eyes

RIya brustout her laugh: Arjun mei mazak kar rhi thi…

Arjun: ye mazak tha riya.

Riiya: ha .

Arjun: by the way tumhain kaisay pata chala.

Riya: jab aap mujj say baat kar rhay thay yab aap phone cut karna bhool gay thay.

Arjun: tumhain waqai bura nahi laga.

Riya: nahi.

Arjun: are you sure? Tumhain jealousy feel nahi ho rhi .

Riya: nahi, balkay mei toh khush hun k mera pati itna handsome hai k sab us par fida hain.

Arjun recalls Roshini memories: " agar kabhi arjun ki zindagi mei meray ilawa koi aai toh mei sach keh rhi hun saamy mei us larki ko jaan say mar dalungi"

Arjun; tum Roshini say bilkul alag ho riya… Roshini kabhi meri Riya jaisi ho hi nahi sakti thi…

Riya: kya huwa roshini ji ki yaad aa gai .

Arjun: hum Riya She was my best friend.

Riya: rathode sir bhi unhen jantay thay.

Arjun: ha Riya hum teeno ek hi college mei parhtay thay bestest friend thay hum, sirf dost…

Riya: sirf dost..

Arjun: ha..

Riya: ap nay kabhi bataya hi nahi.

\Arjun: kabhi moqa hi nahi mila kabhi tum say apna past share karnay ka.

In Mumbai..

Simar: kya huwa Sir gari kyun rok di ..

Sameer: ye college dekh rhi ho simar, ye mera college hai I mean humara, mei Arjun aur Roshini teeno isi college mei sath parhtay thay.

Simar: aap teeno best friends thay na.

Saam: ha.. wo jagha dekh rhi ho simar kuch saloon pehlay yahan ek thelay wala pani puri lagata tha aur roshini ko panipuri buhat pasand thi, hum teeno wapisi par yahin beth k panipuri khaya kartay thay…

Simar: abhi taka p unhen nahi bholay na, aaj bhi aap roshini say utna hi pyaar kartay hain,,

Saam: ha.. koi apna pehla pyar kaisay bhool sakta hai.

Simar: par kab tak.

Sameer: koshishi kar rha hun par ussay bhool nahi paunga.. par koshish zaroor karunga aagay barhnay ki.

Simar: I hope so

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Are advance main like ker diya baad mai dekh lena likha kya hai...!!!!anyway update per ate haiii!!!!!!!
it is supub ..lovly n fantastic...update..!!!!
u r realy grate..!!!!!
i realy enjoysss dr
it is complete package of full episode...!!!!!
1-lv to read arjun n riya's romence...!!!!...hummm bathroom romance...
2-hahahhhaaa heeehee grate vo girl sach main kamal the...!!!...case file chahiye to mere sath..ek cup coffe peni hogi...!!hehehhh arjun ko blackmail..!!!
3-when arjun calling riya ..n riya looks angrly i though ab to full to fight hogi but no...she laughing...!!!! grate...
4-Ohhh to sam lv rosh..!!!!..ab kuch kuch samajh aa raha hai...
thanks for this lvly update n conti soon...!!!!...cant wait to
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Posted: 12 years ago
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lovely update...
ariya scene was cute and romantic...
close riya's case soon...
poor arjun cant able to romance with her biwi...
make them soon legally wedded couple...
come soon with next part...

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