Arhi SS :OUT OF THE CAGE ch.7 pg.32 - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
#21
I like , i like..
Khushi s condition is more horrifying than of sanjay dutts in zinda movie..she doesnt know anything + hasnt felt anything..any emotion..her father hated her so much? That he subjected her to this!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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its a really diiferent concept nd I love it waiting 4 the next chapters plz plz pm me :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Miku

WOW Purnima...

The concept u know is amazing...

And the Way u started the story its too...

I loved the prologue as well as the 1st Chapter, now will be waiting for you to start full flegedly...

Do pm me.. and a request do update soon ha!!! ok...

and again,

I loved the concept and the story... its totally "HATKE" and m sure everybody is gonna enjoy it a lot...


- Ishi ...



thank you dear.. I'll update soon ..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#24
This update is specially dedicated to ASR6262 who took the effort to send out pms promoting this SS. Thank you so much dear.
Thanks to all those people who liked and commented and encouraged me to write further.
Here is the next chapter. I was thinking of updating this only on Monday but seeing your love I couldn't stop myself from updating it today.😊

CHAPTER 2

Arnav was shocked at a question. "Is she actually asking if I'm a human? Don't I look like one??" For one minute he was lost in his these weird thoughts.

"What kind of a stupid question is this? Now I doubt, were you actually born today just like this that you don't know what a human is?" Arnav asked starting to get angry at this stupid girl.

"I... locked... there...don't know..." Khushi was confused and pointed to Arnav the place in which she was locked all these years.

Arnav looked to what she was pointing. There was an old building, which did not give an appearance that it was inhabited for so many years.

"You were locked there???" Arnav was stunned when she nodded her head in approval.

Arnav suddenly grabbed her wrist and told "Come with me".

New sensations evoked in Khushi's body at that touch. Something was beating continuously in her chest. Was it the heart?? Khushi's cheek started becoming reddish and she felt her blood circulation at her cheeks. All these were extremely new for her. Neither she has felt like this before nor has heard of such feelings from Shabd.

Khushi followed Arnav obediently to her old home, the prison. He was the first human she has seen and she trusted him completely.

They entered the place and they moved forward. As they went inside Arnav saw the truth of Khushi's life. A grilled room was there inside that place. There was a broken lantern and few tattered clothes on the floor. There was a small window on one side and a plate with some bad looking food was inside this. "She was kept inside this." The realization struck him.

It was not pity that Arnav felt that time. It was a sudden rage to all those people who did this to her. Though he met her today only, Arnav had felt a connection with Khushi.

"Are they so blind to keep an innocent soul captive in this horror room? Who knows for how many years she was inside it? I think she has never seen the outer world even once.

I'll help her. I'll teach this innocent soul to live in this world. I don't care if anybody opposes me in this. I'll be her guide" Arnav smiled at his decision.

"From how long were you inside this?" Arnav asked.

"I don't know. Shabd had told me I was inside it from my birth. My mother died due to my birth. So my family hated me and kept me in this prison. I've no one since then."

"From birth?" Arnav was stunned. "She is a fighter. Nobody else can survive all these years in this." He thought.

"Don't think you have no one. From today I'll help you. I'll guide you in this world. From today I'm your family." Arnav assured her.

Khushi smiled at the word 'family'. From today she has a family. She felt another new feeling. A new feeling of happiness.


PRECAP : Shabd reveals Khushi's truth to arnav. 😊


Howz it?? Like and comment please.. 😊.. I'll update the next chapter when I get another 4 pages of comments .😊


Edited by goldengirl.0123 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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This is a totally different Concept and very captivating too.

Kushi was in prison for 23 years from her birth onwards?If she was in jail how did she learn to speak , how she learn the languages ? Was she in contact with any human being ?


Anyways the idea is fresh and will love to read how Kushi will experience the life of real world.


Waiting for next chapter...

Edited by ramyarn - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: ramyarn

This is a totally different Concept and very captivating too.

Kushi was in prison for 23 years from her birth onwards?If she was in jail how did she learn to speak , how she learn the languages ? Was she in contact with any human being ?


Anyways the idea is fresh and will love to read how Kushi will experience the life of real world.


Waiting for next chapter...



thank u for commenting.
Khushi learnt language because she used to talk with a person called shabd who used to provide her necessities. He has given her a brief idea of outer world. But she has never seen him because he used to stand outside the small window of her prison.
Edited by goldengirl.0123 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thanks for clarifying my doubts.


Originally posted by: goldengirl.0123



thank u for commenting.
Khushi learnt language because she used to talk with a person called shabd who used to provide her necessities. He has given her a brief idea of outer world. But she has never seen him because he used to stand outside the small window of her prison.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow, wonderful concept. U had an amazing start. It wil be really interesting 2 c how arnav guides nd teaches her 2 live in dis world. I guess it may be difficult 4 her 2 adapt 2 dis world. Poor soul. I would love 2 read this story.
How can anyone be so cruel 2 lock his own child in such a place. I thought arnav wil yell at her when she asked whether he s a human. . Pls continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#29
wow!!
its intereating...👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
#30
Wow such an interesting concept!! Pla continue:)

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