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Posted: 12 years ago
#31
For the first time in any FF that I have read about Kushi And Livi (love that nickname!) I really love the friendship they share. I guess because it seems more on an equal footing.
Thirteen years is a long time! And yeah, Kushi may forgive him, but please don't make her run into his arms. In fact, I would love to see a jealous Arnav. And I'm dying to know who is the man that saved her from falling! I hope Arnav gets really jealous. He can't just up and leave and then expect her to fall in his arms just because he is now ready! And sinc ehe's bitten by wanderlust, what's to say, he won't do it again - leave her again? Thanks for the PM. Am waiting for the next update. 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32
hey dear, first of all, i request PMs!!😃
and this story is sooo amazing and intriuging!!
arnav left his home and went off!!
cam back after so many yrs!
and who was that guy who caught Khushi??
well guess have to wait for that!! uodatr soon pls!
gr8 concept ...loved it!!😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: Maddy1270

just read part 2 and got totally confused as a totally new set of characters, apart from jiya, seem to have been introduced... is this still the same story? I am really sorry for the confusion. Blame me. Or my bheja that didn't remind me to not mess up names. Brain went on sleep when i posted. Not my fault🤣 kosofy the brain😎 is rishab supposed to be arnav or, as mentioned, the second brother?have I already mentioned the second brother? I mean, yeah, there is a second bro, but I wasn't supposed to mention that me and my forgetfulness😭 there are similarities there in the circumstances surrounding the past... it would be too much of a coincidence for both of her brothers to have run away from home! I see i really did confuse you. But, you know, you can think of it like brain exercise😕 I guess I'll do the same, I am also confused now...😆 Lemme go chk where I mentioned the eldest brother😆 Oh wait... you mean where she sees him and says second brother? Oh, got it. Jiya has two brothers😃

we were given only a hint of the girl, don't believe her name was mentioned in part 1 so impossible to say she can't be madhu... in our minds arnav and khushi are so closely linked that someone else seems an impossibilityOnce again, chowie for the confusion😳
just saw the corrections made so the whole comment is superfluos!😕
anyway loved the language and expressions used to bring out the humor and the emotions... loved the khushi-lavanya friendship and khushi's matchmaking as well as lavanya's desperation to escape nihar!


@bansi, hira2050, yappingduck, seethu, frenzy.

Thank you guys :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: TRULYNANDINI

Interesting!ur way of writing fascinates me.every detail and expression of the charecters is explained so well..I am humbled. Thank you. and the part where arshi meet after a long time was the highlight.believe me meeting a friend after so many years is so different..its true that we aren't prepared to face them absolutely, and the situation get's messier if you are taken unawares....continue soon.


Originally posted by: riafna

Khushi and Livi thats really enjoyed part. Khushi irritating her to the core. Like their friendship.Irritating others is also an art, isnt it, especially when the other is a friend. 😆Nihar mystery should be solved... Khushi matchmaker
Khushi loves Arnav like Arnav loves her.I am not sure if i should, or shouldn't burst the bubble. Since me itching to do some bursting, i'll get a pin. Bracing time. Khushi sure doesn't love wala love arnav😆 neither does he, well, not really not yet😛 That's why his appearance made her distract her... She wants to punish him and and she already forgive him. She climbed hill... their place... she was too distracted she was trying to compose herself..
Arnav trying to patch up with her.Atleast he left a note for her.
Like the update.Thanks for pm.
Update soon


Thank you guys :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: Anupama.

I first read the comment from my cell and my very first reaction was, okay, this is huge😃 Thank you😛 M already in love with livi and smiley Me tooo..i enjoyed their banter so much + it was so funnyWhat can we do? It's khushi in the scene, bantering and fun is part of the package😆..texts from nihar had me in splits 😆 Really,m laughing right now but when someone has to face such guys its really annoying.i had this friend of mine who said that he s in love with me and i would like to quote a text of his
"plz anu,reply karo..m dying..dont do this to me.i l die"
oh God! Really?! I dint reply,coz i dint know he has texted me coz i had sleeping..he had an over the top behaviour..i feel m such a cruel one,laughing at him right now..but i cant help it..okay enough of my blabbering.I know this isn't a laughing matter, but honestly, sometimes you just can't help it. I'd really like to bash some heads together, of those people who says women are chipku. Well, some are, but since they are women it's sort of digestible. However, when a man goes gooey-eyed and all sissy, then it get's irritating in an amusing sort of way. I've a friend who's been getting not to subtle but overly stupid messages from someone, we had a good laugh. Well, at least I did, since I wasn't on the receiving end. coming back to story..
So arnav guessed it right.she s a wedding planner..
Ofcourse,she has the right to be angry at him.any girl who is her place who has had a soft corner for him,is so close a friend to him would be..if he would leave just like that after sneaking only a note and then not contacting for whole of 13 YEARS!! She thinks he dint consider her that important.but we know that arnav thought of her many times after he left. ;) Had he not thought, believe me when i say I'd have fed him to the sharks in Khushi's dreams😆
She still likes him,doesnt she?hence she got unsettled on when she saw him..
Very interesting..Yep, she still does. Friends remain friends, distance may lead to drifting apart but the liking remains true. Besides, her liking him makes it a tad easier for her to fall, and I like taking easy way outs😆
P.S-As much as i would want to request u for a p.m..,i believe in saving the author from the tedious job of sending out p.ms.. 😆 so m more than happy stalking your story.but yes,do remember to p.m me as and when you write anything new.. :)If and when I do, i'll definitely PM you😃

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Posted: 12 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: sneaky-aj

hey dear, first of all, i request PMs!!😃will add you :D
and this story is sooo amazing and intriuging!! Thank You😊
arnav left his home and went off!!
cam back after so many yrs!
and who was that guy who caught Khushi??you'll find out soon😉
well guess have to wait for that!! uodatr soon pls!
gr8 concept ...loved it!!😳


Originally posted by: kbtr

For the first time in any FF that I have read about Kushi And Livi (love that nickname!)her name was too long, and I am too lazy to type it again and again, hence livi--a result of my laziness😆 I really love the friendship they share. I guess because it seems more on an equal footing. Well, if and when the footing shifts and one goes higher, the other would kick real hard and bring her back down😆 that's friendship😆

Thirteen years is a long time! And yeah, Kushi may forgive him, but please don't make her run into his arms.I just got a very weird picture of Khushi running towards him, slow motion. Ouch Nah, too melo-dramatic for me😆 BTW, when you read the next update and something you read is suspiciously like embracing, well, remember it wasn't her who ran into his arms. Quite the opposite🤣 In fact, I would love to see a jealous Arnav.I have no idea if he would be J, maybe.😆 And I'm dying to know who is the man that saved her from falling!Well, I am thinking if I should tell you. Nah. M lazy. I hope Arnav gets really jealous. He can't just up and leave and then expect her to fall in his arms just because he is now ready!Sure as hell he can't. But, he is dumb😭 And sinc ehe's bitten by wanderlust, what's to say, he won't do it again - leave her again?you hit the nerve of the story😉 Thanks for the PM. Am waiting for the next update. 😃


@smdosi, zeedia.

Thank you guys :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE CAN YOU PM THE REST!!!!!!!!!!

thanks <3
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
aww nice update, khushi and la friendship is cute and loved la's reaction to nihar's over-attention and how desparetly she wants him off her back.
please continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
UPDATE Day after Tom😊 . . .

For Now, Spoiler 😛. . .

"You've just got to like it" she ordered.

"Like?" he shifted gears, "I like it just as much as I do other colors. I am just not obsessed with it"

"Slow down. And did you just very indirectly say I am obsessed?"

"M-hmm" he smiled, looking at her from the corner of his eyes. She was pouting.

"I am not obsessed." She sounded like an irritable child.

"You are. Believe me. No one knows how obsessed you are better than I"

"Is it? Who are you? God?"

"A victim . . . of your obsession. You remember the day we met." Without slowing down, he rounded the corner.

"Slow down." Her fingers dug into the seat, "This isn't a race track."

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Posted: 12 years ago
#40
First of all i loved the nick name you used for Lavanya as Livi. It's different from the regular Lav or La. 😃
Totally loved the frndship between Livi n Khusi. In the beginning i thought they may just met for the wedding business but loved the whole scene between them.
So Khusi is furious on Arnav for running away all those years back without a proper goodbye . And he's her crush and even now he affected her like before. Only if she could how he also get affected by her. I like the idea of the place which is theirs from childhood. And Arnav also came to the same place.
The teaser was nice. Can't wait for their time together and i m sure you ll show some past moments also..

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