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Interesting story...u described arnav's emotions so well..good start meghna.update the nxt part soon!

That was a great beginning. I wonder if we'll get to "hear" her (Kushi's) thoughts? Seems like he has some feelings for her (and yet he stayed away for fifteen years!) I can't wait to see what happens when they meet and how will they react with/to each other.

Must say i loved the concept. And the fact that Arnav is different in this. A writer and has different friends here. Loved the whole description. Was that gal Khusi with Green obsession 😆. Hope so. So Arnav is back for his sister's mrg. the last one was little emotional. I always get tears whenever i read anything brother n Sister. 😃
continue soon and if you manage a PM list do include me ..

Damn cute yaar...please pm me whenever you update...

It was really interesting... IT was great... and i loved the way you wrote the chapter...❤️
Looking forward for it...

Do continue soon and plz pm me when you update...😊😊

Arnav after long time return his home . 13 yrs ago he left his house. His father and son conversation two people don't know how to express their feeling and wants to talk hours ... Its touching .
Her.. Green favourite color ... She didn't recognize him?
Nice. Continue . Send me pm when you update. Thanks in advance

Nice concept and writing style ... Do continue soon dear

sounds very nice, please update soon and thanx for the pm

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Originally posted by: shonagudia

Must say i loved the concept. And the fact that Arnav is different in this. A writer and has different friends here. Loved the whole description. Was that gal Khusi with Green obsession 😆. Yep, it was her. We cant have ASR pinning after someone else. Triangles are irritating😆 Hope so. So Arnav is back for his sister's mrg. the last one was little emotional. I always get tears whenever i read anything brother n Sister. 😃Believe me, I know the feeling...😳
continue soon and if you manage a PM list do include me .. will include you, 😃

Originally posted by: kbtr

That was a great beginning. Thank You😊 I wonder if we'll get to "hear" her (Kushi's) thoughts?Obviously😆 I can't write continuously from ASR's POV, me is a girl😆 it takes time thinking, ASR is that hardheaded😆 Seems like he has some feelings for her (and yet he stayed away for fifteen years!)What can i say? He IS dumb! I can't wait to see what happens when they meet and how will they react with/to each other.

Please PM me when you update. Thanks.

Originally posted by: riafna

Arnav after long time return his home . 13 yrs ago he left his house. His father and son conversation two people don't know how to express their feeling and wants to talk hours ... Its touching .
Her.. Green favourite color ... She didn't recognize him? she didn't see him...
Nice. Continue . Send me pm when you update. Thanks in advance

thank you