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Posted: 12 years ago
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Interesting story...u described arnav's emotions so well..good start meghna.update the nxt part soon!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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That was a great beginning. I wonder if we'll get to "hear" her (Kushi's) thoughts? Seems like he has some feelings for her (and yet he stayed away for fifteen years!) I can't wait to see what happens when they meet and how will they react with/to each other.
Please PM me when you update. Thanks.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Must say i loved the concept. And the fact that Arnav is different in this. A writer and has different friends here. Loved the whole description. Was that gal Khusi with Green obsession 😆. Hope so. So Arnav is back for his sister's mrg. the last one was little emotional. I always get tears whenever i read anything brother n Sister. 😃
continue soon and if you manage a PM list do include me ..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Damn cute yaar...please pm me whenever you update...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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It was really interesting... IT was great... and i loved the way you wrote the chapter...❤️
Looking forward for it...

Do continue soon and plz pm me when you update...😊😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Arnav after long time return his home . 13 yrs ago he left his house. His father and son conversation two people don't know how to express their feeling and wants to talk hours ... Its touching .
Her.. Green favourite color ... She didn't recognize him?
Nice. Continue . Send me pm when you update. Thanks in advance
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice concept and writing style ... Do continue soon dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
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sounds very nice, please update soon and thanx for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: shonagudia

Must say i loved the concept. And the fact that Arnav is different in this. A writer and has different friends here. Loved the whole description. Was that gal Khusi with Green obsession 😆. Yep, it was her. We cant have ASR pinning after someone else. Triangles are irritating😆 Hope so. So Arnav is back for his sister's mrg. the last one was little emotional. I always get tears whenever i read anything brother n Sister. 😃Believe me, I know the feeling...😳
continue soon and if you manage a PM list do include me .. will include you, 😃

Originally posted by: kbtr

That was a great beginning. Thank You😊 I wonder if we'll get to "hear" her (Kushi's) thoughts?Obviously😆 I can't write continuously from ASR's POV, me is a girl😆 it takes time thinking, ASR is that hardheaded😆 Seems like he has some feelings for her (and yet he stayed away for fifteen years!)What can i say? He IS dumb! I can't wait to see what happens when they meet and how will they react with/to each other.

Please PM me when you update. Thanks.

Originally posted by: riafna

Arnav after long time return his home . 13 yrs ago he left his house. His father and son conversation two people don't know how to express their feeling and wants to talk hours ... Its touching .
Her.. Green favourite color ... She didn't recognize him? she didn't see him...
Nice. Continue . Send me pm when you update. Thanks in advance

thank you

Originally posted by: Dynamix215

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*phew* i know i unres'd after a lonnggg time... but anyways! No probs
I love this!!!! perfectly described emotions and stufff!!!! and i hope khushi aint goin out wid someone already? Khushi, well, she is too busy with her little endeavors at stuff, when you read about her, you'd know.
I hope its aint shyam *wrinkles nose*Shaam? Nope... Nah... Me making faces. Rest assured he aint getting show time here😆
interesting that arnav and khushi were childhood buddies (i guess?)Yep... you could say that.
But whatever it is, one request- Plz donot make khushi fall in love wid arnav first and khushi's heartbreak and moping and all... (this seems to be th trend these days... :P )
it would be quite typical...Mopping? Heartbreak? Nah! Too dramatic. Khushi here doesn't believe in melo drama... she believes in dramebazi
anyways, i hope u would update soon :)after M done replying... I'll update... It's ready😃
And yeah, mujhe PM kar dena plz? I'll b making a PM list. Will add u😃
And continue sooonnn!!!!


Originally posted by: Maddy1270

an interesting premise... must say homecomings are usually difficult especially if one had departed due to sad circumstances...

They sure as hell are. Poor Arnav. Wheni'd started writing it was supposed to be Khushi in his shoes, but then, hell, she's a woman, and so ASR had to become scape-goat...

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Thank you guys :D, hope I didn't miss anyone :) If I did, sorry :(

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