Kriyaansh FF Aisa hai hamara pyaar...last part pge 23 - Page 11

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Posted: 12 years ago
Sry guysss for updating late...actually all of sudden xamaas aa ghayi...ab no more bakwasss seeda update
chapter 8

kriya:haan Rey sirf hum yaham hai kya hua?
Rey:kuch nahi kriya...he smiled mischiveiously...
Kriya mein fresh hoke aata hoom...
Kriya:hmmm
Rey entered wash Room
aaj mein Tumse saari sachai bhatakar rahega...
Meanwhile Kriya entered their bed Room...she opened the cupboard and took a tee and jeans for Rey .she placed them on bed.
Rey cameout from wash Room.he saw that his non stop talkative wife talking to herself..
Kriya:aare Rey ko toh kal important meeting hai but uss black tie pata nahi kaham hai...kriya,tumse naa koi kaam nahi ho sakti,,jhalli hai tu...
Rey smiled then said
Rey:how dare u..tumne meri wife ko jhalli bola...dekho mein uski husband hoom.aur tum mere saamne meri biwi ka insult kar rhi ho..hun?
Kriya started lauging...then something came to her mind..
Kriya:really...oh please mein tum jaise villager se baat nahi karna chahti hoom MR.chabhilal..you knw who iam?Romayira Raichand..understand..
Rey shocked coz of the sudden change...but he contiuned..
Rey:aww sry maadam ji,humko pata nahi dha ki aap itni paisewali ho,woh kaa hai naa maadam ji hum na apni patni se bhahuti pyaar karte hai agar uske bhare mein kuch bhura bole toh humein acha nahi lagta..
Kriya:really...
Rey:haan maadam woh naa itni khoobsoorat hai itni khoobsoorat hi hum kaa kahe woh meri naaa itni care hamara matlab itna khayal rakta hai naa
kriya:lagta hai tum apni wife se bhahut pyaar karta hai...ryt...
Now Rey become serious..
Rey:haan mein usse sabse zyada pyaar karta hoom itna pyaar karta hoom ki woh soch bhi nahi sakte..

Kriya had teares in her eyes..
Rey walked towars her, without wasting time he took her lips into his.he sucked ,licked her lips ,she responded equally she closed her eyes,after sometimes they pulled back coz,lack of oxygen..he started kissing her neck and bite her ear.she moaned his name.Rey came back to his senses then said
Rey:agar itna pyaar karte ho toh muje chodke kyun chali ghayi..?
Kriya was shocked...
Kriya:woh Rey mein..
Rey:jawab do kriya...
Kriya:rey ,meine aapko sirf use kia dha for popularity..
Rey:stop it this nonsense kriya,agar aisa hai toh tum collage chodke kyun chali ghayi tumhein toh college mein hona chahite dha naa.and swayam ko kyun beech mein laya...
Kriya started crying...
Rey:Battcutter tumhari ye aasu mera saawal ka jaawab nahi hai...please muje sach bhathawo kriya,mein manta hoom ki meine ye shaadi sirf tumse revenge lene kelie kiya.but mein kya karoon meon tumhein kabhi hurt nahi kar sakta..coz mein tumse paaglom ki tarha pyaar karta hoom.
Thats it..she hugged him tight..
Kriya:mein bhi aapse bhahut pyaae karti hoom Rey...
He too hugged her and said
rey:i knw Battcutter,pls abhi toh bhatawo kyun tum muje chod kar chali ghyi dhi ,pls kyunki uss raat jab tumne mujse kaha ki mein tumharelie kuch nahi hoom mein poori tarah se toot chuka dha par meine ek bhahut badi ghalti ki meine tumhari aankom mein dekke batt nahi ki agar aise kia hota muje pata chal jaata
kriya:Rey,meri maa ko meri dance karna pasand nahi hai,i knw ki aapko ye bat pata nahi hoga,uss raat hum ek saat dance kar rahe dhe.toh maa ne hum donom ko ek saat dekha,jab mein ghar ghyi toh usne muje poori raat kamre mein bandh kar dia.next day jab neha ,vish aur Amar aaya dha tab maa ne muje bola tumehein Dil aur Dosti mein se kisi ek ko choose karna padega.mein majboor dhi Rey uss waqt sirf muje apne dosotom ka sapnom ka yaad aaya.islie meine apni Dosti choose kia.aur uss Raat islie woh sab kuch mein aap se bola taaki aap Muje nafrat kare aur apne life mein Move on kare..
She stopped and turn to face Rey..

Kriya:rey im really sry ,muje pata hai meri ghalti hai pls muje maaf kardo.
Rey was silent...
Kriya:kuch toh bolo Rey im sryy
Rey:itna Pyaar karti ho mujse tumne islie woh sab kuch bola taaki mein move on kare..im sry kriya mein tumhe samaj nahi paaya..he started crying..
Kriya:rey,,,she hugged him.Rey pls rona band karo naa,Rey i promise ki mein aapko kabi chodke nahi jaawogi then she kissed his forehead
Rey:dance ki kasam
kriya:smiled dance ki kasam...

Kaisa laga guys...agar bakwass hai toh sry... pls do cmnt...

precap:Romance Romance Romance

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Posted: 12 years ago
yippiieee...

so sweet...update soon...i cant wait😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
Phewww!!! Finally rey ko sach toh pata chala...
hmmm precap romance...wait naji horah...
Jaldi updte...plz dnt b late..
n awesome one..loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
yiipeee
kriyansh ke MU clear hui finally...

read all d chaps in one go...

u r jzzz Amazing👍🏼

do cont soon
n plz plz pm me...
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Posted: 12 years ago
i am the truth came out... continue soon wait...
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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing...
finally truth revealed...loved it...
update next part asap...
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Posted: 12 years ago
wonderful update...
finally kriyaansh ki saari MU clear ho gayi...
whole update was superb... but i really like this line of rey

Rey:aww sry maadam ji,humko pata nahi dha ki aap itni paisewali ho,woh kaa hai naa maadam ji hum na apni patni se bhahuti pyaar karte hai agar uske bhare mein kuch bhura bole toh humein acha nahi lagta..

beautifully written... akhir chabilal ko uski ramaria mil hi gayi...
eagerly waiting for next part...
update soon
thnx for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update. . . .
Chalo thank god,at last rey ko sachaie pata chal gayi. . . . .wow. . .m so hapy. .
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb awsum update
chabilal ramaira part ws awww
kriyansh kiss..hayee
Finally rey got to know everything
Precap romance cant wait pls update soon
Edited by angel_luvkreya - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb awsum update
Finally rey got to know everything
Precap romance cant wait pls update soon

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