Kriyaansh FF Aisa hai hamara pyaar...last part pge 23 - Page 13

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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome...Update Soon & Plzz PM Me 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
pls pm me when u wl update...
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Posted: 12 years ago
A really sweet update. continue soon! (:
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Posted: 12 years ago
Part 9
really sorry for the late update...
Im dedicating this update to my Paagal friend...NISH...NISHTHA DHAND...

NXT MRNG...Rey on Bed
Rey:kriya...battcutter kaham ho tum?aare ye battcutter kaham chali gayi...,
suddenly the washroom door opened...
Kriya entered their bedroom she weared a beautiful golden saree that too in wet hair...
Rey:gossshhh...shes damn hawt...wow..pata nahi mein itne din kaise control kia..
Kriya:Rey..Rey...
Rey:hun...hannn...
Kriya:kya hua Rey aap aise kyun dekh Rahi ho jaise ki muje pehli baar dekh rahi ho...
Rey:Battcutter...(he hold her hand)
kriya:haan...
Rey:you look beautifulll infact hawt...
Kriya:reyyy (she blushed)
she started moving from his hold..
Rey:aare itni jaldi kya hai?
Kriya:rey chodo muje maa bula rahi hai
Rey:aare mom kuch nahi bolegi
ab jaldi muje mrng kiss do..
Kriya:rey...no wayyy ab chodo muje...aap na biljul bache ban gaye ho
Rey:haan your baby...dekho ab tumhara baby rona shuru kardega...
Kriya:rey ye kya hai...dekho,mein tumhein kiss nahi karnewali..
Rey:reallyyy...hello you are no more kriya ghayi now you are kriya Reyaansh Singhania...so muje tumhari permission ki zaroorat nahi hai
he pulled her and without wasting a second he took her lips into his...
They breathed Hard...
She moaned his name
he loved that...


In living room...
Ranvijay singhania Reys dad..
Ranvijay:Rey...rey...

Rey:aarrggghhh ye sab log ghalt time mein kyun bhulate hai.i hate it...
Rey:dnt wry Battcutter...we will continue it later,,,
kriya blushed...

In living Room
Rey:yes dad..aapne bhulaya..
Dad:yes son..Rey there is a good news...
Rey:kya hua dad
dad:rey ,iss saal ka Best bussinessman ka award tumhein mila hai...
Rey:what...really OMG...
Dad:congratulationsss my son.
Rey:thanxxx dad
ranvijay called his wife and kriya
dad:hey hamare bete ko best businessman ka award mila hai..
Mom:wowww congratulationsss my son...
She hugged him tight...
Kriya felt happy...
She smiled heartley...but Rey avoided that...coz smething cooking guysss
kriya mindtalk
kriya:aare Rey ko kya ho gaya..achanak
The whole day he avoided her
@ night..
Kriya:rey aap muje ignore kyun kar rahi ho
Rey:kyunki mein tumse naaraz hoom
kriya:kyunn
rey:tumne muje kuch nahi diya naa
kriya:mein aapko kya doo
Rey:aare tumhare pati ne itna bada acheivement kia phir bhi tum pooch rahi ho ki kya doo..
Kriya:sry Rey...bolo aapko kya chahiyee
Rey:mein jo maangoom woh doogi...?
Kriya:haan...
Rey:wowww grt..i want ermmm ermmm YOU..
kriya:kya..mein
rey:tumne kaha dha ki tum muje kuch bhi doongi...sooo simple i want my battcutter...
Kriya:but Reyyy woh...
Rey moved close.
Rey:sshhh..kuch mat kaho...

He pick her in his arms and goes towards the bed..they look in each others eyes.he placed on her bed and leaned forward.he took her lips into his ,nibbling softly...she encircled her arms around his neck...she caressed his hair...he dug his face into her neck and slowly bite her neck.she cried in pain.he started removing her saaree...they breathed hard..she feel very shy...she also feeling the equal passion..unable to control her emotions she started kissing him back...she unbuttoned his shirt and kissed his well build chest...she moaned his name...
Reyyy...he loved that...
Then he offed the light
( aage ka imagine karo guys mein zyada nahi lig sakti...sry sry)
now they are like two body one soul...
Rey:thanxxx Battcutter,and im sry for everything..
Kriya:i love you sooo much Reyyy...
New beginning of their life...
Aisa dha unke pyaar...

This is the end...i hope you guys enjoyed my work...
Thanxxx to everyoneee
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Posted: 12 years ago
res

unres..

WHAT...??? Last Chapter...???? 😲

Tune itni jaldi khatam bhi kar diya isse...??? 😲

uuaaa... galat hai ye... 😭

anyways... coming to ur last part..

it was simply cute one...

and.. i knew u wont be able to describe the intimate scene.. maybe u need lot of time to open up like the other writers... hahahaha... 🤣

chill... tera 1st time tha... so fikar not... 😉

loved ur last chappy babe...

definatly gonna miss it...



Edited by akanksha_arsha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
uwwwa uwwa
tumne ye ff itna jaldi khatam kardiya
that not so fair
coming to update
really nice n sweet update
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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing
bt itni jaldi katam kardiya
this is not fair
loved the ending

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Posted: 12 years ago
Yyyeeehhh...
U finally updated :-D
sweet simple adorable ending
loved it :-) <3
bt main pagal nhi hun :-(
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Posted: 12 years ago
ending was so sweet...loved it...
bt y it ended so soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
LOVED IT ALL...
OSMLY WRITTEN...
do write moree dear...

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