[The Unknown]AK FF -Ending Summary: Page 43 - Page 9

Originally posted by: *mystic.moon*

Yikes! me first again!

res. Have two exams tom so will read after that :p loll. hope they went good. 😆

Edit:

Again two chappys in a row. Me likey. Just walked out giving my history exam and had few time before my math exam so decided to come to library and read your update. I am so glad it did. It just made me fresh as I had no sleep last night and every one keeps telling me I look terrible with sickness and exams both running at the same time. aww, sickness and exams together do suck. Hope you're feeling better. 😃 And yup, 2 chapters because i literally have more than half of the story typed up already. 😆

Nyways, that was the bg story I think you were least interested in. haha coming to the updates.

I loved it. Yes, again. You are such a brilliant writer. I read very less fictions over here and I am glad to read this one! The concept just seems to be grabbing me with each chapter. It's like I am reading something written by a professional. Aww, i'm glad my concept is good enough to grab members. 😆

Shahil - Girl, who is he? The most handsome mystery dude ever. I love the way you potray him, enough to know him from Kripa's view yet not enough to know all of him. You'll find out soon. 😃 There's more to him than it seems.. which i'm sure you've figured out already. LOL

Ridzi, ROFl I had to control myself from not laughing out in the library when I read the suggestion she gave of making Sahil jealous. Only one best friend can give this suggestion. Oh I still love her though.HAHA. Yeah, i wanted her character to be the kind that says what she wants, when she wants.. just very opened minded and careless. 😆

Oh did I mention? You have like perfect knowledge on when to transist from one chapter to another. it's like a book I am reading that keeps me wanting to turn the pages until I have read it completely in one go. DO I? Omg, thank you. 🤣 I'M ALWAYS WORRIED ABOUT THE TRANSITIONS. I always feel like i cut it off at such odd spots. *shakes head*

Love <3 Update soon.THANK YOU MONAL. 😃

Originally posted by: *mystic.moon*

Haha, BBQ is the first thing that comes in mind. Nothing wrong there. 😃 Yeah. Well it's like 3 chapters, it will take time for the side characters to develop. I know when I write I have to like work really hard on my side characters. I feel as if I neglect them when I just put them were main players are concerned. But I am sure, you will do just fine with Khushi and Madhu in coming chapters 😳 No, but it's always like this for me. 😆 I do a horrible job of developing the side characters. They just end up looking very horrible. 😆 But mehh. we'll see how this works out to be.

Awww, I am glad u like my comments. Me being a silent member usually will try my best to comment regularly. 😳 Love <3 Haha, don't worry about commenting regularly. <3 I appreciate whatever i get. 😆

Originally posted by: MS-meghasharma

fab updates

why do i feel that it's sahil only who was there in the club when kripa was out and also at her house.

m really not able to understand him...is something wrong with him like some personality disorder.

riddhima is sweet...i luv her she is indeed a cute friend of kripa.

thanks for pm

Originally posted by: monikaseth

amazing want to know more about sahil amazing

Originally posted by: sadffi

AweSome UpdaTe..👏

Ridhima iS sO swEet..❤️

But Sahil..🤔

UpdaTe sOon..👍🏼

ThankS foR tHe PM..😳