SwaRon OS : Parisien Amour - Page 4

Neets i have always told you that you are superb when it comes to writing even otherwise too😊, But hun writing is your gift, and they way bring in a total change in each and every OS so cool. This OS totally and completely broke me into fragments, i had a hard time to bring it together. I being a sucker for happy endings, was totally flabbergasted to find you have written an OS with tragic ending, this itself proves that you are a fantastic writer, and given any situtation you can build up your story👏 Well done Neets, you are a bundle of talent, and always unpredictable😉😆 It is a Super awesome OS! bring it on new ones dear😳

Originally posted by: Neeti96

Turin di-

Being strikingly late has become my signature and being awfully sorry has added its vicious hue onto my insanity . . and showering icing amity on my cranky-self has turned into ur Blazing nature and carrying peaked endurance to overlook my dishevelment has tinted u with more priceless awesomeness onto ur Effortlessly Wonderful singularity . . . . I LOVE u my little doll . . . . .🤗 ❤️

Well, about the theme of the OS - Neets, I'm keeping sharply honest here - I DESPISE tragedy , I really do . .and trust me - I'm out of that rare classy people who achieve metaphoric and sadistic blithe from tragic endings . . . I just dont possess that "Delicate Masochism" in me . . . once a Fairytale lover always a Fairytale lover - this is the summed up version of me . . . . and I guess , u know it right . . . . but , this OS is way more magnitude than white tragedy . . . it's not just accumulation of mere separation . . .but Far substantial than that . . . Death just cant extinguish the fierceness of inflamed love - isn't it something literally Ethereal to compose up . . . . Neeti, u were Ravishingly Sublime in ur creation . . . . 👏

And trust me Yaar- I dont own much adjectives in my vocabulary to embezzle ur Sublimity as versatile writer . . . . She is Preciously Splendid in her sketching art , universal truth . . . . ⭐️

P.S- Feeling kinda outdated while wording this comment . . . Bear with me little doll , sort of exhausted after continuous classes . . . . 😳 - Turin ( Shantanu Soul )

Originally posted by: shreyasi28

Even though i reserved dis post wid a smiley, dis is one f d few OSs which made me cry! U r a great writer neeti nd d feel of d OS is something i cant xpress in words so plz pardon me :)

Originally posted by: arjuhiswaron007

WOW!!👏👏

I never knew that the city of love could also be depicted in this way...Kudos to you Neets😉😃

Originally posted by: sadiyaswaron

Beautifull os neeti
I hate the idea of swayam being dead but still it was a fab penned os.
Loved it
Write one more os ASAP n that too a happy wala ...:)

Originally posted by: sw1234

good yar but sad ending.

Originally posted by: nature2

res tt Done

Neeti its Beautifull m LOve this

Amazing writting 👏👏👏

Originally posted by: Tanhaforever4

neeti u r amazing dear..:)
Though a sad one...but vry beautifully penned dwn..
a vry vry vry emotinal one...bt superb...:)
i hav no wrds to describe..ths wrk..!!

Originally posted by: pooja123456

u r an amazing writer!!
this was so blissful..
thank for the pm!

Originally posted by: Tanya_Swaronluv

I don't have enough or rather any words to comment! That's all i could say. Neeti you really rock girl. (:

Originally posted by: bhanumathitanha

Wow it was amazing . U written wonderfully its sad dat swayam has last da battle of his life it's very difficult to read if anybody dies in dis two (Swaron) . Please write more os on Swaron it's pleasure to read u r os on Swaron already I ready all of u r work . Thanx for pm

Originally posted by: shaani2209

That was really a nice read :)

thanks for the pm...

Originally posted by: raj_tanha_fan

Wow!!! Lovely os neeti!!!

I loved it completely!!

Sad that you killed swayam but wonderfully penned down!!!

Do write more... happy wala especially!!:)

Originally posted by: Tanuka_TanHa

Amazing OS neeti!
fantastically written .
I thought swayam must have left Sharon due to some MU but swayam being dead was sad .
the way u described Sharon's emotions through the happy times to the sad ones is totally Fab!
loved it.


thanks for the PM .

Originally posted by: kritzzz_ArSha

awesome!!

Originally posted by: sweetsimi123

Awesome OS...Loved it
It was emotional yet Beautiful
Wonderfully penned down OS...

Originally posted by: surbhimathur

Neeti!
Maar daala swayam ko!
Gosh..sad it was :-(
But its not necessary to have happy ending always...thoda namak bhi hona chaiye ;-)

You really explained paris and its feeling pretty well friend.
The starting i thought its gonna be swaron's separation the reason behind sharon's sadness..but you amazingly turned the tables in the end.
And in between i really liked how swayam proposed in front of eiffel tower..that ws awww!!!

It was very nicely emoted...emotions ka tadka was perfect!!