Hi Neeti sorry being so late to read this one... but its better late than never...I saw the PM and title itself suggested this had to something intense... I had my fingers crossed when i came here and started reading this one. I can tell you the reason why i was keeping my fingers crossed and it was that I kind of know you somewhat and I have this idea that you are somewhat 16 years old and happy go lucky as a person. So i was just in a bit trauma that will you be able to show the level of maturity that was required here, thought i never had and have any doubt that you can really writer very well, you are an amazing writer.
Now after reading this OS I can say that there was really no reason for me to think that you will not be mature enough to show this state or frame of mind of Sharon that well. You have done a splendid job here Neeti. Kudos to you for thinking about something like this where you are showing that a person who grow up missing love and got love finally but unfortunately it didn't stay with her for lifetime but true love never breaks a person, it just makes the person more strong to face everything.
Your OS had everything almost every emotion that one person can have in his lifetime. The maturity with which the whole concept has been handled is just amazing. There was never a moment where one could feel that narration became lame. Everything was just perfect here from the very expression to the words you choose to describe everything, it was just awesome, mind blowing, astonishing, superb, fabulous and i can go on and on adding words to praise your effort.
This was the OS which touched my heart really well. It was just that a feeling of true love was very well expressed how Sharon got true love after waiting for long and that true love though stayed for less time with her but it made her strong enough to face everything in life. She was shattered once but his love made her strong and she recovered from that stood on her own run the academy and was doing very well in life. Thought she never married anyone because her life was complete with his memories they were more than enough for her to live her quota of life. It was very nice and heart touching where Sharon went to Eiffel Tower to relive the promise that she and Swayam made once.
This was one heart touching experience reading this one. And yes Swayam though was not part of this OS that much because It was the journey of Sharon and described from her POV but Swayam was pretty much everywhere in the story with his karizmatic presence. The proposal part of SwaRon was very beautifully done and i liked everything about this OS.
Thank you for the PM... Do write such beautiful stories more...
Pratik...
Udne Ki Aasha
Jaane Anjaane Hum Mile
Fan Fictions
Kyunki Saas Bhi Kabhi Bahu Thi 2
Iss Pyaar Ko Kya Naam Doon
