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ALRIGHT, i just want to make it very clear that you guys are NOT dreaming.🤣 i'm actually updating in ONE DAY 😳😳😳

i know i know! loads of improvement 😎 actually i couldn't wait to update this part as it will be in THREAD 3 first of all. all the thnx to you guys! 🤗

secondly, this part is dedicated to @Kbrt and Rafaheli... ...
kbrt who was a bit disappointed at arnav's character in the last update. i wanna tell you that you'll love arnav in the following update! and this update is EXCLUDING SHRUTI MIA! 🤣 a smile please 😳

and rafaheli, i love you for your comments. that's why wanna dedicate this part to you too.. an sorry for giving you a heart attack by not replying to you at first. check my reply in page 136.😃

and the rest of you who comments regularly! just wanna say that i truly love you guys from the core of my heart.
here you go!
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Thread 3
PART 30 ( longer than ever) 😆😉

The next morning they were getting ready to tour Mountreaux where the Panoramic- Express starts. The Panoramic-Express is a part of the famous Golden Pass Line from Montreux to Lucerne. The golden-colored, elegant trains take passengers from the banks of Lake Geneva via the famous resort town of Gstaad to Interlaken in the Bernese Oberland.

Khushi came out of the wardrobe wearing a blue jeans, cream-wool top, a brown scarf, chocolate colour boots, had her shades on and earing. sHe put a bit of eye-liner and mascara. She looked so elegant, so charming that arnav couldn't move his eyes off her.

Khushi: what?! you're ready?

She went to the mirror and tied her hair to a high pony tail and put on lip gloss making her pink lips shine.

Khushi turned around just to hit by Arnav's chest.

Khushi: oh! Sorry!

She was about to walk pass when he pulled her back into his chest.

Arnav: who are you?

Khushi: huh?

Arnav: who are you? I don't know you.

Khushi: who do you think I am Mr. Raizada?

Arnav: ummm'.. A hot, good looking, sexy, charming, attractive, elegant Swiss girl who's standing infront Arnav Singh Raizada and talking to him

Khushi giggle at that

Khushi: aha? Hot?

She started lining his forehead with her index finger.

Arnav closing his eyes: hmmm

Her finger moved to his nose

Khushi: sexy?

Arnav: hmmm

She moved it to his lips

Khushi: Attractive?

Arnav: hmmm

Khushi seriously: go and get ready.

She pulled back and went to the living room to get some of her stuffs making Arnav open his eyes in shock and-

Arnav: what the?!

They came downstairs.

Arnav: Aman? Ya send someone to clean our rooms. We'll be back by evening.

Aman: yes ASR.

As they went out of the hotel, shruti saw them from upstairs. Wih a disgusting look she thought: don't be so happy khushi. I'll show you what's the consequence of competing with shruti malhotra. Tomorrow evening. Get ready girl!

Arnav and khushi went to the route of Panoramic Express and got into the golden train. They sat on their seat and khushi just looked outside at the window. She was memerized by the beauty of the high hills, mountains, lakes, small coutages .

Khushi: wowww!!! He scenery is sooo beautiful. Wow! The mountainsss! Omg! The lakes are so beautiful. Aw! The cottages. Hey look at that! This is just out of the world Arnav.

Arnav smiled at her.

Arnav: I know! That's why I brought u here

He winked and Khushi gave hima side hug.

They reached to a small crowded town.

Arnav: ok now. There are lots of shops here where you can get traditional stuffs of Switzerland, clothes etc. go and check! I'll wait outside. Gotta make some important calls.

Khushi jumped in excitement: REALLY?!WOW! ok. I'll go then. and are you coming after you're done or you're gonna wait outside?

Arnav: I'll see. Here's my credit card.

khushi: alright! Thanks!

After an hour khushi came out of the shopping mall to see Arnav nowhere to be seen.

She looked around and finally saw him sitting on the chair staring at her. She sighed and gave him a dangerous glare. He bid hi to her. She ran to him and slammed herself in his chest

Khushi: you saw me right?! Why didn't you call me. I was so scared.

Arnav: thought to play with my little wife

Khushi: very funny

She grimaced at him

Arnav: done shopping?!

Khushi yap!

She said holding all the bags up and showing him her 32 teeth.

Arnav: let's go then

Khushi: where are we going now?

Arnav: you'll see.

Then walked for 10 minutes and Made her sit in cabel car.

Khushi: what is this?

Arnav shrugged and Khushi gave him a sheepish look

As it started to move, she realized that what it is and gasped.

Khushi: ARNAVVV!!!! ARE YOU SERIOUS! This thing is hanging onto a cabel? A CABEL????? If you wanted to die we could have taken 20 sleeping pills at a time, at least it would be THIS SCARY! AND DANGEROUS! ,

at least it would be THIS SCARY! AND DANGEROUS! '.Arnav suppressed his laughter at his crazy wife's statement as he thought it wouldn't be safe to laugh out loud infront of his khushi who's currently mad at his husband like hell

But unfortunetly, a small smile curved his lips.

Khushi looked at him with wide eyes

Khushi: WHAT'S SO FUNNY now?

Arnav seriously: funny? Oh not at all. Nothing is funny. You're worried for your life after all . why would it be funny?

Khushi: huh! I saw that!

Arnav: saw what?

Khushi: you smiled.

Arnav: what me? No. no! not at all.

Khushi dared to see down through the window and as soon as she saw it, she gasped and closed her eyes.

Khushi closing her eyes: don't think that I gave up with you. You'' have to pay for this Mr. Raizada. I mean SERIOUSLY? You made me seat in this BOX that is hanged into a cabel? If I knew before, I would have committed suicide but never ever sat in it

Arnav: ok okay! Come here.

He took her into his lap and enclosed her with his arms making her head rest in his chest.

Arnav: feeling better?

Khushi nodded

Arnav: now, open your eyes and look outside, don't look down.

Khushi: no

Arnav: khushi, it's okay sweetheart. Just try once. You'll be able to see the entire town from here

Khushi did what Arnav said and she actually dared to keep her eyes open all the way down to the other side of the town taken by that cabel car. And all the way, khushi kept showing arnav all the magnificent scenes that were new to him and Arnav kept adoring her innocent face which was white just a few minutes ago and now she herself showing him all the sceneries. Unbelievable

The next thing was super fun. Khushi saw a roller COASTER ride and claped in excitement.

Khushi: let's go!

Arnav: let's go to where?

Khushi pointed to the rolled coaster and Arnav gulped.

Arnav: you know khushi, it's too late. It's already 7 PM. I think we should go back to the hotel

Khushi: no Arnav. It's gonna be fun''.let's go let's go '.

Arnav: no. you'll get scared

Khushi: I won't. it's gonna be fun!

Arnav: you see, it's dangerous too.

Khushi: wooo! I get it. Arnav singh Raizada is scared huh?

Arnav: what? ME? And SCARED? Huh! Not at all

Khushi: then let's go.

Arnav gulped and they went towards the roller coaster. They sat on their seats and the operator locked the side doors of the roller coaster and the buckled.

And it started going up.

Khushi gave a teeth smile to arnav whole face went white out of fear.

it kept going up and the line of it was so stiff that it sensed like they will touch the sky.

After 3 minutes-

Khushi confused: Arnav: why isn't it stopping? It's supposed to go down by now!

Arnav: oh I don't think so khushi.

Khushi confused: what? why not?

Arnav: The roller coaster you chose is 415 FEET HIGH ONLY!

Khushi jumped and her eyes kept getting wider unti it looked like saucers

khushi: WHATTT?

Arnav glared at her.

Khushi: but ' but but I saw it' it wasn't that high''..it was-

Arnav: that's because you saw the fourth line which is 200 feet high .

Khushi gasped and her eyes became eider and wider: let's go back now.

Arnav: oh! I wish it could go backwards khushi

Khushi: hey devi maiya. Raksha karna!

Arnav: yah and ask her to save me too.

Khushi looked at him helplessly.

Khushi: Arnav what should we do now?

Arnav: we can just seat QUIETLY!

Khushi: OMG! Arnav! It's not stoopping yet! How long does it still have to go?

Arnav just looked front ignoring her as he was scared too. Their face and mouth became dry and white out of fear

Sddenly it stopped.

Khushi: why did it stop arnav? Arnav! Why did it stop'?? Is it- AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA AAA AAA AAA AAA

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA AAA AAA AAA AAA AAA

AAA

KHUSHI SCREAMED HER HEART OUT


And the roller coaster took its first round by going down within 10 seconds making khushi scream her heart out. And on the other hand, Arnav just closed his eyes .

Khushi: o my gosh! I have never seen death so nearly. But good that we're done.

Arnav: oh really? You think so?

He pointed to the next line which was slightly less higher than the first one but it all looked the same to khushi. Khushi's lips made a perfect "O"

Khuhsi: no , no noOO OOO AAA AAA AAA AAA AAA AAA AAA AAA AAA AAA AAA AA AAA AAA AAA AAA AAA AA AAA

AAA

AAA

And then the third and fourth round. And finally when t stopped khushi and arnav looked as if they are human beings without any life in them. they just sat there.

Operator: sir? It's done. Would you step out please?

He looked at him and and looked at khushi. He held her hands and took her out of the roller coaster.

They just walked half heartedly.

Finally arnav looked at her

Arnav: so? How was it khushi?

Khushi looked at him half heartedly. All of a sudden they both broke into laughter. Neither of them seemed to stop anytime soon.

Khushi: O MY GOSH ARNAV! That. Was. Just.

Arnav: I know! And you were scared of that CABEL CAR?! It's nothing to this rollercaster comparatively.

He nodded in disbelief.

Arnav continued: I still can't believe I ACTUALLY WENT THERE!

Khushi: oh! You should have looked at your face. It all went white!

She was laughing her heart out while describing her husband's face . she held her stomach as if it would burst right away considering the amount of of laughter she's having.

Arnav: o please. You were the one who blew off my eardrums.

He shook his head.

Khushi giggled.

Khushi: but it was fun actually! At least I made you pay for not telling me about the cabel car

She winked and Arnav gave a mock glare.

They both finally came back to the hotel still laughing and talking about the day. Shruti was upstairs talking to the manager when she saw Arnav and khushi in that state- laughing, and in each others arms.



alright! not gonna say anything. just waiting to see all of your's comments! 😉 oh please, i want a treat of course!

IMPORTANT: silent readers, please don't buddy me for PMs. it breaks my heart when ppl like my FF and don't comment 😭🥺

Rest of you guys who comment regularly:


Edited by Mushfika - 12 years ago
ritzzzii thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#3
wow...a cute update...hehehehe...
just cant wait o know wat shruti has planned...

waiting for next one..😊😊😊😊...n thnxx updating so fast continue this trend in future also...😉😉😉
Mushfika thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#4

Originally posted by: ritzzzii

wow...a cute update...hehehehe...
just cant wait o know wat shruti has planned...

waiting for next one..😊...n thnxx updating so fast continue this trend in future also...😉😉😉



awww! thank you! i'm reallt glad you found it cute 😳

hahah!!! well no guarantess... my xams are starting 😆 so... but yah . sure i'll try to update ASAP 😉

and no porblem 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#5
Wow its so good.Arnav and khushi ride part was good.please update soon
Thanks for PM
--MISHTEE-- thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#6
Loved d update
felt as though I went to
Switzerland
pks update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#7
superb update..

thanks 4 d pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#8
Awesome and cute part ever.
Mushfika thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: binc0802

Wow its so good.Arnav and khushi ride part was good.please update soon

Thanks for PM


HEY! THNX A LOT! 😃😃

AND I'LL TRY TO... BUT MY EXAMS ARE AHEAD. SO NO GUARANTEE SORRY
Mushfika thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#10

Originally posted by: --MISHTEE--

Loved d update
felt as though I went to
Switzerland
pks update soon


HAHAHAH! I'M GLAD IT MADE YOU FEEL LIKE THAT 😆😆

THANK YOU!

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