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meem17

@meem17

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Posted: 12 years ago

#101

Really liked the uPdate ...never saw khushi in this light...cant wait to see where this story goes...

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FAYKHAN29

@FAYKHAN29

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#102

hi im slient reader always clink like button & not good at commet i will try my best, read all in one go.

Love reading ur work they r brilliant, very well writtent , the concep & very Interesting story It is so intriguing & so diverse 4m the show & love all ur strong characters completely, all 4m different backgrounds, looking forward for next chapters,really cant wait to read more plz do continue! vill send email plz if possible do add pm me if u can thank uxxx

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ManmarziyanTeri

@ManmarziyanTeri

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#103

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... Woah Khushi! I've skimmed over the 3 chapters and I like what I see! I will be back!

Okay and I'm back 😛... Sorry this took absolute ages! I have very little time to read FFs these days.

Let me just say that I love this FF! It's simply amazing! So I've just read your note on pg 20 and I appreciate Khushi even more now. I like how you've done this with Khushi. Usually we get the layered character more for Arnav as apposed to Khushi and I guess that's what has drawn me into this FF in the first place. I can't even begin to think of how exactly you will shape around her character so I can't wait till you update now!

I especially liked the ASR-Khushi convo, there was just something there which I can't pinpoint with words. The challenge felt like more of an undercurrent which sort of made it sound all the more threatening.

Arnav does not sound like a man to be reckoned with. I didn't quite understand exactly what he'd done to the twins, but then I am a bit thick 😆. But I understand that he likes his revenge and now I can't wait until these two equal forces collide.

I loved how he just put his agenda forward; that he was looking to destroy the Gupta empire. Perfect.

I loved the pre-cap, how you portrayed this mellow, sweet, hidden side of Khushi, where she likes to just walk around under the stars at night. I guess when stories are written, the many dimensions that can be associated with a character are so subtle that the readers don't really notice it. But in this fic you've made it a point to make the layers very different and let us feel that too and I really like that about this fic.

... Oh dear Khushi has been hit 😲... And is this an intro of a new character?

P.S. Good luck with your exams!

Edited by DropofDew - 12 years ago

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Arani_Kumar

@Arani_Kumar

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#104

interesting...at this point i believe u r just setting the groundwork for the story to proceed...having said so i am curious to find out how you will write khushi and arnav relationship

also i have a question: was the plot of this story inspired by a book you have read? because it is really really good so far...

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moomin4455

@moomin4455

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#105

What's a town like you doing in a dame like this? It's my first reaction on reading this chapter.

The car, the clothes, the figure, the face...the attitude: ruthless! And Akash's reaction just made me 😆

And Arnav...let's just say when an irresistible force meets an immovable object one can expect fireworks!

Brilliant chapter!

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Humayra

@Humayra

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#106

Khushi's character here is totally different from the show.. You know what I kinda like this bold Khushi...

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Vee

@reflorated

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#107

Originally posted by: Arani_Kumar
interesting...at this point i believe u r just setting the groundwork for the story to proceed...having said so i am curious to find out how you will write khushi and arnav relationship

also i have a question: was the plot of this story inspired by a book you have read? because it is really really good so far...

In answer to your question - no. Had I been inspired, I'd have given credit. The story, setting, characters and situations everything is mine.

-Vee

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Vee

@reflorated

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#108

Originally posted by: FAYKHAN29

hi im slient reader always clink like button & not good at commet i will try my best, read all in one go.
Love reading ur work they r brilliant, very well writtent , the concep & very Interesting story It is so intriguing & so diverse 4m the show & love all ur strong characters completely, all 4m different backgrounds, looking forward for next chapters,really cant wait to read more plz do continue! vill send email plz if possible do add pm me if u can thank uxxx

Hey,

Thank you for breaking your silence. It feels particularly good when a silent reader decides to comment. You have no idea how much it means to me :)

Yes I'll send emails to you as well :)

-Vee

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Vee

@reflorated

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#109

Originally posted by: moomin4455
What's a town like you doing in a dame like this? It's my first reaction on reading this chapter.
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The car, the clothes, the figure, the face...the attitude: ruthless! And Akash's reaction just made me😆

And Arnav...let's just say when anirresistibleforce meets an immovable object one can expect fireworks!

Brilliant chapter!

"whats a town doing in a dame like this"

You just summarised Khushi in that one line 😃

Arnav and Khushi are two forces of nature. Both the masters of their game, both equally egoistic, cunning and rich. All of us have heard of opposites attracting... But how many of us have heard of a story where so much is at stake, and the two leads are exactly alike?

-Vee

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niharika111

@niharika111

Navigator

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Posted: 12 years ago

#110

Hi V323 (sorry, I do not know your name, but would love to),

just came across this story...in all earnest, I'm still trying to make up my mind about it. Its slick, sexy and mysterious...and the characters that have been introduced so far are nothing if not complex. I'm definitely in for the ride...that is if you care to give me a ticket. I generally comment profusely, which sometimes end up riling up the writer. Anyways, would look forward to reading the rest of it! 😊

My e-mail id is: niharikachatterjee07@gmail.com

Edited by niharika111 - 12 years ago