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Aaradhaya1688

@aaradhaya1688

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#91

this story is really gripping
u hv great writing style
this story seems dark and tense
u represent a very different version of kushi waiting to see diff layers of this character
continue soon...
ps:and i m a new member to ur reader family...really happy that i found u
u are one gud writer 😊

Edited by aaradhaya1688 - 12 years ago

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masam

@masam

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+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#92

Not only the score but the ego has also hit the fan.
Perfect entry of Miss Klepto and the sultry, seductive night that made her even more.. ravishing.
Aakash- kissing her senseless and then also slapping her. A witch. V, can I hug you for that? I so chuckled at that line.
Arnav and Khushi- oh and the games they play!

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Jia

@TinkJia

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Posted: 12 years ago

#93

this is tit for tat, they both are same level players! NICE!

seems good story so far, I guess the firecrackers are waiting to burst!

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meera06

@meera06

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#94

I love this Khushi...

And the banter between A and K was superb...the best part is that they are in the same level..

does Akash have a crush on Miss Gupta...poor soul is confused as to whether he wants to kiss her/dance with her or slap her...

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dilectus

@dilectus

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+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#95

i guess i am not that good in vocab, for many a times i have to search for the meaning of words you use in your narrations. but believe me when i say i love this thing. there are two other prominent writers, which bring up this magical world of words, some long lost ones and some with an aura and mystery behind them, and i have found myself smiling many a times when i found the meaning.

you V, are a wonderful writer!!!

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bungeejump

@bungeejump

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#96

That was one sizzling conversation! Wonder who will have tge upper-hand here! And Akash is so confused... it's interesting to hear his dilemma!

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hashey

@hashey

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#97

Interesting update. Both are with loads of attitude and seems like going to give each other a tough time.

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_disha_

@_disha_

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#98

Oops Akash drooling over Khushi 😕😆

And Arnav ka to kya kehna

Even though they both are playing dark characters ( atleast thats what my brain tells me ,tell me if i am wrong ) still its so easy to be charmed by them the way you write !!!