NC17/ Arhi SS: A New Life- Complete

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@pup03

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

awesome !!! loved it... so arnav roped in khushi in his business... thanks for pm dear 😊

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Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#22

Loved d update
Thanx for pm

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suwin

@suwin

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#23

lovely and beautiful..

please PM me...

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Venkata

@venkata

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#24

Wow.. Excellent written Kushi joining Arnav business great.j

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titanichomeless

@titanichomeless

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#25

brilliant! thanks for providing such a nice story. Next soon please

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sudhalata1

@sudhalata1

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#26

wishing to see some office romance too...lovely update

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mdeshpande

@mdeshpande

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#27

👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

that was so like Arnav ! have read ur SS all in one go and really loved the way u show their thought processes, their dialogues n the way story progressed. I esp. loved how u combined K's sensitivities with Delhi gang rape incident and then followed it with the restaurant one. those were aptly worded.

looking frwrd to another lovely updt.

plz pm me.

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Dynamix215

@Dynamix215

Voyager

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#28

Cute! *sigh so much could have been done on th actual show :(

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vandana.sagar

@vandana.sagar

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#29

Afya, you cannot imagine how much I am enjoying this story!

Its written so beautifully...loved how she wonders what he is upto , so natural...loved how he comes and sleeps with her in that creaky bed just hugging each other, saying how can he sleep without her!

Loved the fashion show, the childrens' range,his surprise for her and his faith in her talent and in her!

I love how they react to and with each other. The idea of it happening in Sheesh Mahal...brilliant, wonder if their past meeting at the same venue is going to be brought out!

I love how the entire Gupta clan are going to Lucknow and how Khushi is comforting them...

Its just exceeding my expectations with each chapter! I feel I am totally justified asking you to write another story after reading your first one!

Now I am not going to let you stop writing!