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Iqra

@Iqraimran

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#961

i love this update

Poor khushi

he always make her nervous

Bad idea...that's arnav singh raizada way to praise his love

"Tum theek ho?" that make feel arnav is asking from me

love the way u rite this update

arnav khushi eye look at door

kiss in garden

khushi make up redo

arnav care toward khushi

eacy and everything i love this party update

i m craving for more

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mayvs34

@mayvs34

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#962

loved it and expecting more in next

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sahada

@sahada

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#963

Awe struck! Simple & beautiful moments- filled with passion! Love how the frist pre party prep n now the party is progressing (= Enchanting!

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shree99

@shree99

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Posted: 12 years ago

#964

Perfection..very well done
the build up.. the reaction.. the aftermath.
very well thought out.
anxious to see dadi khushi interaction

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RealityTruth

@RealityTruth

Navigator

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#965

Mind blowing passionate update.. no words to express.👏..Arnav was mesmerized seeing her in that black saree.. oh god.. you described about their attire so beautifully and that was the most highlighting part of today's update...silent eye communication between them was marvelous... Arnav wished that time would stop so that he can capture this moment for lifetime to see her like that forever.. great...Khushi was also drolling over him...wow, he is having a lot of impact on her..

Loved Arnav's thoughts on Khushi.. He had not thought of this place as theirs when he had picked it up but it was now, as much as hers as it was his. She had not insisted on wanting anything of her choice in the apartment and had accepted it whole heartedly, much like the way she had accepted him, finesse and flaws. That made him like her more- this clearly shows the importance of each other in their life and are willing to accept as is...

Khushi being nervous, and discomfort is understandable after such a passionate kiss, but the silent communication between them was mind blowing, perfect wavelength and understanding between them..Khushi smiled his way and he assured her to relax and enjoy the party...she relaxed and started actively participation in the party.. Waiting for the next update...

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snoopy84

@snoopy84

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#966

Great update love when Arnav becomes all caring towards Khushi

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star303

@star303

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#967

If arnav's intense gaze made khushi all nervous then it was his silent assurance with his eyes that made her at ease in the end. They do the eye talk so well. The effect they had on seeing each other was perfectly written. Good update Kalyaani. Waiting to read more about the party.

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henamani

@henamani

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#968

tum theek ho

i think we should patent this in ASR's name. the husky way in which BS has delivered these lines has made them immortal

i wished that after the jadoo scene we could have seen an epi where arnav was blown away by khushi and could express it.

i wish i could see khushi after being devoured in this way

brilliantly written

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meera06

@meera06

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#969

Passion at its best!Pure brilliance!

Tum teek ho?

That one line from Arnav just melted Khushi's heart (even my heart)

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710617

Suspended

Posted: 12 years ago

#970

This is most certainly my favorite ff in the forum.. Cannot remember any other story I enjoyed so much..

My request don't lose the grip on the story.. U began superbly..lots of loops are still there.. Close all the loops appropriately let it not be like the ipk story..

The update was too good.waiting to see Anjali reaction this Anjali was smarter than ipk di..