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barfi

@barfi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#951

love the way u portray their relationship

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Fuzzbucket

@Fuzzbucket

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Posted: 12 years ago

#952

beautiful update, kalyaani:) i enjoyed every bit of it and am sad it had to end so soon! simply brilliant!! *sigh*

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arnavbarun

@arnavbarun

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Posted: 12 years ago

#953

loved the update!

it was "jadu hai nasha hai" all over again the difference being they didn't "miss" the kiss

so farhan and sami do have an idea about arhi...

i hope the party gets over soon...would she stay back this time

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@debby_11

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Posted: 12 years ago

#954

the part was really very beautiful...Fantastic..I m mesmerized by your writing...Loved it

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jisa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#955

bad idea!!!!
bad idea to read this n falling in love with arnav...
i can never be able to love someone like i love this arnav!!!!!!!😃

fab update!!!!really awesome!!!!
w8ng for next!!!!!!

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shivani_bv

@shivani_bv

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Posted: 12 years ago

#956

What a passion filled update K. The first 2 paras were just so perfect. The way he greeted her, how they both were just completely lost in each other, dressed to perfection just for each other. Aag dono taraf thi barabar lagi hui 😊 . What to say, I am totally floored with ur writing skills .
It was hillarious to read how Payal was showing K around. Can imagine K trying really hard to keep a straight face at that.
and what a meeting at the balcony. It had to happen i guess. His words for complimenting her cudn't have been more Arnav like. Perfect to the T. I am sure Arnav is not going to let her leave from the party anytime soon.

Farhaan and Sami are such good friends. Having their backs for Khushi and helping her. I guess she will have to come clean with them soon. They would also want to know why she is hiding it from everyone.

The silent interaction between Arnav and Khushi at the end speaks a lot. He unsettles
her so much but settles her mildly in his own way.
Night is still young and i am sure you have lots more in store. I guess Anjali might also notice few things,
Waiting to read more.

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Amiarisme

@Amiarisme

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Posted: 12 years ago

#957

never did "bad idea" conveyed such happy feelings to me.
first unnerve her and thn think abt her comfort, a typical men in love.
sami and farhan are the special people who took the limelight for me in this chapter. this silent communication, taking care of eachothers back is what frndship is all abt and it has got nuthing to do with the duration.

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segad

@segad

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Posted: 12 years ago

#958

great update. sami and farhan are great friends to have.

tum theek ho is now a classic seduction line 😆

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arshiyakanishka

@arshiyakanishka

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Posted: 12 years ago

#959

Khushi's appearance is beautifully described and no wonder Arnav couldn't take his eyes off her.They are like magnets pulling each other no matter what the surroundings are.

He had not thought of this place as theirs when he had picked it up but it was now, as much as hers as it was his. She had not insisted on wanting anything of her choice in the apartment and had accepted it whole heartedly, much like the way she had accepted him, finesse and flaws. That made him like her more; there was something about her which drew him to her like a homing bird.

These lines so aptly decribe what Arnav feels for Khushi and warmed my heart.

His "Tum theek ho" is always a scene stealer and you used it perfectly.My heart is just bubbling with love for POL's Arnav and Khushi.

And their wordless eye conversation at the end was a cherry on the top of a beautiful update.

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yoga123

@yoga123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#960

The intensity of passion you show in your work is really commendable...I was just waiting for this moment since this chapter 66 started, it took 3 updates to reach here but worth waiting...I was breath stuck while reading the entire chapter...beautiful and khudos to you...just remembering jaduhai nasha hai...their silent communication and comforting each other is superb,they both are truly in love with each other...farhan and sami are real caring friends, liked them in this chapter...waiting for more...please update soon...