|ArHi|Shoreline Ch10 pg. 24 |DISCONTD| NOTE p.26

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BSRaizada

@BSRaizada

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Posted: 12 years ago

#41

Such a cutie pie update!! Both r own their own n train is helping to get them closer!
Loved this

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Sweet_Ashum

@Sweet_Ashum

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Posted: 12 years ago

#42

Oh wow!!!
That was sooo...umm...*scratches head*
*calls out to Fari*
*Fari replies back after keeping Ashum waiting for 10 days*
*Sorry Fari herself doesnt know what Ashum wants to say*
*And they were born on the same date*
*shakes head*

It was Awesomeee!!!! *yes!!! Without Fari's help* 😆
Who says you cant write romance?
I could feel goosebumps as I imagined the whole chapter
She waited for him for 4 hrs?
I'd never do that for anyone 😆
I get pissed if someone keeps me waiting for a minute 😆
And he took her out!!!
How sweet

But most of all I loved the waiter 🤣
Perfect songs n dialogues for perfect situation😆
Loved loved loved it!!!!

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Sarah Ashraf

@aa_mnhs

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Posted: 12 years ago

#43

L.O.V.E.D. THE UPDATE! The most adorable 'romance' ever

I dont know if it's nice to say this but i would be honest. i save your stories and change the names of arnav and khushi to viren and jeevika and then read (i am a bigger fan of them; really hope you wont mind)

you write so beautifully and it all comes out very effortlessly :) thanks for the amazing read, and the pm too. and please update sooon...

love

Sarah

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Thanushiya

@ThanuAditya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#44

This is just sooo cute ! Loved it

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cozy_mango

@cozy_mango

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Posted: 12 years ago

#45

So sweet! Continue soon! 😊

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Sophia Khan

@Sophia21

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#46

Awww she waited for him.. for more than 4 hours.. wooow..

Travelling by train is something else.. they gettin close ;) Continue soon :)

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saba

@ASR6262

Inactive

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Posted: 12 years ago

#47

loved it awesome update
continue soon please and thank u for pm me

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-Grace-

@-Grace-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: aa_mnhs
L.O.V.E.D. THE UPDATE! The most adorable 'romance' ever
I dont know if it's nice to say this but i would be honest. i save your stories and change the names of arnav and khushi to viren and jeevika and then read (i am a bigger fan of them; really hope you wont mind)
you write so beautifully and it all comes out very effortlessly :) thanks for the amazing read, and the pm too. and please update sooon...

love
Sarah

Hi Sarah

Thank you so much!

and i dont mind at all 😆in fact even I like virkia more hehe😳

thank you again😊

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ShiningStar18

@ShiningStar18

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#49

Too amazing!

Haha i love how he complimented her and she couldn't outsmart his compliments 😉

Lovely update!

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Fari

@SmileyStar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#50

Awww! I can tell this one is going to be one of your most amazing stories! I don't know but something about this seems so natural 😳 I'm loving this!

Loved Khushi looking forward to Arnav's visit and him making it up to her 😛 The train wala part was sooo cute 😃

Also loved the dialogues! They're so realistic! Continue soonish ok? Cos I really want to read more 😛