|ArHi|Shoreline Ch10 pg. 24 |DISCONTD| NOTE p.26

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Sweet_Ashum

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

Maybe their upper story wasn't empty after all.

🤣 🤣 🤣

Awesome!!!!
I totally loved it
This line in particular cracked me up

P.S: What are u doing up so late missy?

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BSRaizada

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

Amazing n v intersting... Pls. Update soon

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BSRaizada

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Posted: 12 years ago

#23

Such a pleasant concept. Arshi r totally different.i like it.

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_disha_

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Posted: 12 years ago

#24

Hi ,

Thanks for pm 😳

It was a fun read !!

Makes me wanting more for sure! 😆

Also the waiter and his thoughts made me !🤣

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jhirani06

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Posted: 12 years ago

#25

hey, this is a great beginning, loved it alot... don't even think about discontiuning, i complain that i never have time to reply to stories but one of my first few comments are for you to continue, hope that helps you to keep it up x 😃

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Sarah Ashraf

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Posted: 12 years ago

#26

Sorry for not having commented on the first chapter, but i guess i was in a rush when i read that.
I really like the different concept. Im glued to this one and waiting eagerly to know what cooks between them later.
Love
Sarah