Suniye Toh (Taarey OS)

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Haters spare the post please🥱
Folks, this is my first ever OS. I am quite excited about it; I mean I never wrote an Os before. But TaaRey⭐️ finally made me do this too.😛 Actually, since I saw the confession and yesterday's super cute episode.😳 I couldn't stop myself and wrote this os.

Suniye Toh


"Taani… Taani listen…. Taani" Rey ran behind Taani "Taani meri baat to suno" called Rey while following her in the corridor.

Taani suddenly stopped, seeing everyone starring at them and turned to glare at Rey. She did not like the way everyone was starring at her. Unwanted attention was something she always dreaded. She always hated seeing people being judgmental and poking nose in her life. Her matters were hers only. She never even let her brother be part of her problems, her issues. Though, she was very warm and friendly in nature but apart from her being generous and helpful Taani was very private sort of person.

Seeing Taani glare, Rey also stopped at his track and gulped down. He knew she was really angry at him because it takes a lot to make Taani angry. Being Swayam's sister she was always calm like him. But her anger was really something to watch. She looked far cuter than usual. Rey smiled a little seeing her nose and cheeks getting red. A soft wave of breeze touched her beautiful face pushing her hairs back from her face. He felt himself getting lost in the mesmerizing dept of her eyes, which were frowning at him this moment.

Taani saw the lost look on Rey's face and felt her heartbeat getting raised. She still couldn't believe her dream actually came true. She still couldn't get over the fact that her prince charming was finally hers, that he loved her the way she loved him. Seeing the awed look on his face, she felt her anger melting away. Anger, yes she was angry with him, she remembered. Breaking the eye lock, she turned and paced out of the college. Rey came to his senses as soon as the eye lock broke and saw her rushing out of the college.

"Taani" he followed her out remembering what had occurred between them few minutes ago.

FLASHBACK

"Where the hell are you Taani?" mumbled Rey while pacing front and back. He was waiting for Taani in fire exit for 15 minutes now. They were in auditorium with the gang when he asked her to meet him in fire exit immediately. He again checked his watch and exhaled angrily. He could feel himself getting riled up "what is taking her so long? She knew I am waiting for her but" he stopped hearing the door open and turned to the door.

Tanni hurried in, closing the door behind her "sorry, sorry Rey wo main"

Rey cut her in between "kahaan thi tum Taani? You knew na I m waiting for you"

Taani took a step back startled, she never expected his sudden outburst "Rey main aa hi rahi thi but wo AVP ne bulaya tha so"

"Enough Taani" shouted Rey cutting her "I am fed up of your excuses kabhi gang, kabhi Swayam aur ab yeh AVP, ager tumhe mujse nahi milna toh saaf saaf bol do na kam se kam tumhe yeh lame excuses nahi dene padenge"

"Rey aap aise kyon?" she asked softly, taken aback by his words.

""toh aur kya bolu Taani?" he snapped at her "you know what I am fed up, I am seriously fed up of this" he finished looking away.

Taani looked up surprised, as the words pierced her heard, he was fed up? of? Of what? of Her? "aap mujhse fed up ho gaye ho Rey?" she asked at the unknown fear roared in her heart.

Rey stilled as he registered her words. She has taken everything wrong as usual. He turned her and regretted his words seeing the innocent hurt in her eyes. He wounded her unintentionally. All his anger left him as soon as he gazed into her big innocent eyes. How could he be fed up of her? Didn't she know she was his life? Didn't she know what she was for him? He hated to see that hurt in her eyes, the pain of rejection on her beautiful face.

"No Taani" he took a step towards her but Taani kept his hand on his chest and pushed him back gently, surprising him.

"Nahi Rey ager main aap ko pareshan kar rahi hoon toh thik hai, aap tension mat lo main ab aapko bilkul bhi disturb nahi karrongi"

Rey was shocked hearing this. What has he done? He was about to say something but before he could do anything, he saw Taani hurrying out of the door.

FLASHBACK ENDS

Rey cursed the moment he shouted at her. But shouting at her was the last thing he ever wanted to do. He was still very confused that how Taani manage to bare him of his every single emotion? How she always manage to make him so out of control with her? He never behaved this way with anyone in his entire life, such aggressiveness, such rush of emotions, never. It was Taani who could make him pour his heart in front of her but that surely doesn't mean he should hurt her, he told himself.

But then what could he do? After suffering from the most painful struggle of months, most dreadful pain of separation, he wanted to come so close to Taani that the word separation would seem meaningless in front of their love. He wanted to celebrate this togetherness, he wanted to shout out loud and tell the world that his Taani was only his now. Only he knew how he managed to control himself. How hard it was for him to bottle up his emotion in his heart. If not for Swayam he wouldn't have stopped for anything but Swayam was not only Taani's brother but his best buddy. So, he and Taani decided not to tell anyone about them till Swayam gets fine.

But for now his biggest concern was his love that was walking away from him. Giving his car a last look he followed Taani who crossed the main gate. He had a mission at hands, He has to manaofy this cute fighter…

Suniye To, Rukiye To, Kyon Hai Khafa, Kahiye To

Taani stopped hearing Rey singing and turned to him

Aaisi Kya Jaldi Jaane Ki, Dewaana, Hoon Mana

He made puppy face and sang cutely

Suniye, Dewaane Ki

Rey came in front of her kept his hand on her shoulder. Taani jerked his hand back and walked away

Yeh Shaam Ka Dilkash Manzar
Yeh Saahil Aur Samandar

He pointed at the sea nearby and lied down before her. Taani took a step back and frowned at him. Rey held Taani's foot as she tried to pass him. Taani sat down and slapped his hand lightly, to which he left her foot

Kehte Hain Aap Na Jaaen
Hum Par Yeh Karam Farmaaen

He came to his feet and joined his hands begging for her forgiveness
Suniye To,
Kehti Hai Balkhaati Lehren
Aap Kuchh Der To Thehren

He took hold of her shoulder and stopped her. Taani again shook his hands away and pushed him back angrily

Suniye To, Rukiye To, Kyon Hai Khafa, Kahiye To
Aaisi Kya Jaldi Jaane Ki, Dewaana, Hoon Mana

Stomping his foot, he sat down dejected.

Suniye, Dewaane Ki
Taani turned to her back to see if Rey was following her. But seeing no one she sat down on a bench dishearten…

Ithlaati Shokh Havaaein
Bheegi Rangeen Phizaaen

Suddenly she felt flowers being showered on her and looked up.

Jo Aapko Dekhe Jaaen
To Seekhe Aur Adaaen

Rey hugged her from behind the bench tightly, rocking her side to side. To which Taani pushed his hand away again.

Suniye To,
Rey thought of something and called few boys from the road and they all started dancing together.

Yeh Zulfein Jo Dekhe Baadal
Rey touched her hairs and pointed at sky.

Saare Baras Barse Woh Pagal

He splashed some water at her form the fountain nearby, making her jump. Taani was about to warn him but decide else and turned to go

Suniye To,
Rey gave her flowers which she threw away

Rukiye To,
Boys passed him chocolates but Taani threw them too

Kyon Hai Khafa,
He gave her balloons, but she didn't stopped

Kahiye To
He gave her teddy which she gave to the children playing nearby

Aaisi Kya Jaldi Jaane Ki, Dewaana, Hoon Mana
Finally Rey sat on his knees, with his head hanged.
Suniye, Dewaane Ki

Taani saw him holding his ears and stopped. He was looking so cute just like a 5 year old kid. Rey looked up worriedly. Taani saw him starring at her innocently making the cutest face ever possible. Now, who could be angry with him? Thought Taani. Smiling at him after a moment, she saw the life has returning to her prince charming's face.

Rey smiled seeing her smiling and pulled her in rib crashing hug "I am sorry Taani. I am really very sorry. Main tum pe nahi chillna chahta tha but what could I do? I mean tum hi dekho na main jab bhi tumse mil ne ki baat karne ki koshish karta hoon koi na koi aa jata hai kabhi gang, kabhi VP, AVP aur kabhi wo sala Swayam"

"Rey" tanni parted from hug and glared at him.

"What?" Rey asked innocently "I mean mere toh wo sala hi hoga na?" asked Rey cutely smiling at her, to which Taani just looked down and blushed.

Rey cupped her face and made her look up "tum blush karte hue aur bhi jyada beautiful lagti ho" whispered Rey huskily making her blush even more. Rey smiled seeing her blushing and continued after a moment seriously "trust me Taani I was so irritated and Maine apni saari frustration tum pe nikal di. I didn't mean any"

"ishhh" Taani shushed him keeping her finger on his lips "I know Rey main jaanti ho aap kya feel kar rahe ho, in fact mujhe bhi ye sabse chupke aap se milna, bhai se jhoot bolna yeh sab bilkul achcha nahi lagta, per aur koi option bhi nahi hai"

Rey pulled her hand from his lips and kept it near his heart "I know Taani and isiliye I think hume sabko sab kuch bata dena chahiye. Seriously I mean Swayam ke interrogation sessions na mujh se handle nahi ho rahe, kabhi kabhi toh lagta hai main koi terrorist ya koi virus hoon jise Swayam scanner all the time scan karta rahta hai"

Taani chucked hearing Rey complaining. Rey pouted at her "haan haan has lo. Tum shekhwat brother-sister limited ne milkar mera jina hatam kar diya hai"

"Rey" Taani mumbled incredulously.

"What? Tum bhi kuch kam nahi ho, I mean seriously itna gussa baba re baba, god save me" mumbled Rey looking up at sky.

"Rey mujhe jhagda nahi karna" warned Taani.

"Mujhe bhi" replied Rey "aur waise bhi tumhe manana itna bhi aasaan nahi hai so" mumbled Rey after a moment to which Taani slapped him on his arm "stop it Rey"

He leaned closer to her and touched his nose to hers "by the way congratulations miss GS"

"haa?" tanni looked at him confused.

"I mean hamare relationship ke first fight ke liye" he said seriously as if going through a major ordeal and exhaled tiredly.

Taani smiled even more seeing his antics while Rey continued "koi baat nahi chalo esi bahane sahi tumhare face pe yeh smile toh aayi. Banda toh es smile ke liye mar bhi sakta hai"

"Rey" Taani stopped Rey by keeping her hand on his mouth "please Rey aisi baatein mat kijiye" she said seriously. To which Rey sighed and kissed her hand "ok but ek condition per"

"Kya?" Taani asked amazed.

"wo yeh that you have to keep smiling" they both starred at each other for a moment and then smiling brightly, they hugged each other tightly, getting lost in the blissful embrace of love.
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Hope you will like it. Please let me know how was it?
Love
Sonu😊

Edited by -SmokySapphira- - 12 years ago

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...Natasha... thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Sonu congrats on writing your very first OS 🤗 it was truly amazing, u did an extra ordinary job, love your imagination and writing skills. I so feel that we will see Taarey having there cute little fight cause we all no he can't breathe properly with Taani and he so damn inpatient lol. Love the way he made it up to her though. then they have to keep their relationship a secret aww it was so damn funny when Rey said saale scanning him like he is a virus lol poor Rey. Sonu hope Taarey continue to have this effect on u so that way ws will get to read more fab OS from u.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awww...it was so so sooo sooo awesome...I was literally blushing while reading this beautiful peace of work...!!!! You are awesome yaar truely...!!!👏

There fight...Rey let out all his frustration on Taani as always...Rey i hate you for that😡 but then koi gal nahi...he was running behind her to say sorry haye

And the way he manofied his princess was so romantic...!!!!! Taani's smile was back on her face...😳

Hehehehe the part where Rey said "Wo saala Swayam.."and then when Taani glared at him making him say "Swayam mera saala hi hai na" was so cut+adorable+funny😆..

And congratulations on their first fight????😲..🤣 it was awesome...

Do write more...!!!!😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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omg what a thought dear loved it its awesome i couldn't stop smiling even for a single sec its so nice and different loved it

I mean Swayam ke interrogation sessions na mujh se handle nahi ho rahe, kabhi kabhi toh lagta hai main koi terrorist ya koi virus hoon jise Swayam scanner all the time scan karta rahta hai"


and this line was🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

after reading this i thought you are not a beginner plz write more
Edited by taareylove - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hayee Sonu dii...
First of all.. a big congratulations to you for writing an OS!
I loved it.. pata hai.. mai taras gayi thi.. TR after a couple ka ek OS padhne ke liye.. n aapne mujhe de diya! Love you for that!
Rey manaofying his lady love was sooo cute yet romantic!
Rofl-ing during the part when Rey says.. " woh sala Swayam!" and then saying ki " swayam toh mera sala hi hoga na.."
Awesome.. Love ur writing skills.. seriously!
Do write more.. and please.. keep pming me about all your works and also when u update ur ff!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Natasha.

Sonu congrats on writing your very first OS 🤗 it was truly amazing, u did an extra ordinary job, love your imagination and writing skills. I so feel that we will see Taarey having there cute little fight cause we all no he can't breathe properly with Taani and he so damn inpatient lol. Love the way he made it up to her though. then they have to keep their relationship a secret aww it was so damn funny when Rey said saale scanning him like he is a virus lol poor Rey. Sonu hope Taarey continue to have this effect on u so that way ws will get to read more fab OS from u.



Thank you so much dear for the comments. Appreciation is something always valued no matter if its beginner or winner.
I am really glad you like it.
And about Taarey effect don't ask me about it. I kind of fear writing OSs cause writing something in one shot is far difficult than FFs. But see what Taarey had made me do.;):D

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: sreeja_rox

Awww...it was so so sooo sooo awesome...I was literally blushing while reading this beautiful peace of work...!!!! You are awesome yaar truely...!!!👏


There fight...Rey let out all his frustration on Taani as always...Rey i hate you for that😡but then koi gal nahi...he was running behind her to say sorry haye

And the way he manofied his princess was so romantic...!!!!! Taani's smile was back on her face...😳

Hehehehe the part where Rey said "Wo saala Swayam.."and then when Taani glared at him making him say "Swayam mera saala hi hai na" was so cut+adorable+funny😆..

And congratulations on their first fight????😲..🤣it was awesome...

Do write more...!!!!😳



he he he i know, that swayam wala thing i was imaging it in my mind about how swayam will be keeping close eye each time he sees rey with taani as for boys already saw the famous CHEMISTRY between Taarey.
I m actually waiting to see this in D3.
Thanks a lot so sharing your views:D
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: taareylove

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Thanks dear, i was really nervous, in fact i m nervous right now too.
I was wondering what to include what to leave, what should be the length and all this being an OS.
I am really happy you like it. Will try to write if i could:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I'm sorry but there is no way I believe you...😡




... There is NO WAY that is ur first OS.. It is absolutely brilliant 😃

I had such a huge grin on my face while reading it, it was sooo awesome, please tell me you are going to write more stuff on taarey in the future, would love to read mor of ur work
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Posted: 12 years ago
#10

Originally posted by: Shivangi_Taarey

Hayee Sonu dii...

First of all.. a big congratulations to you for writing an OS!

I loved it.. pata hai.. mai taras gayi thi.. TR after a couple ka ek OS padhne ke liye.. n aapne mujhe de diya! Love you for that!

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Rey manaofying his lady love was sooo cute yet romantic!


Rofl-ing during the part when Rey says.. " woh sala Swayam!" and then saying ki " swayam toh mera sala hi hoga na.."

Awesome.. Love ur writing skills.. seriously!


<div>Do write more.. and please.. keep pming me about all your works and also when u update ur ff!!



Thanks a lot dear.:)
Actually the credit for this Os goes to the song chori chori from lucky. Last night when i heard the song i imagined Rey and Taani at the song , then the idea crossed my mind about how will it be to see rey running behind taani, though he always does so but i thought about him running literally behind her. Till this morning, i was all worked up for writing my first Os cause my FF is just started so no such scene could be included there.
I changed the song, cause when i was writing i heard it on radio and it felt quite compatible with the situation.
So this is how i wrote my first Os.:D
Edited by -SmokySapphira- - 12 years ago

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