ArHi Collab -The Mistake#3 -Ch13, pg28 *Completed*

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asrcraze

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Posted: 12 years ago

#141

Soni you're the hilariously funny one... I wonder how to bring up humour in the most serious of situations !! Seriously I love you sense of humour !

How unfortunate for Sim and Pam that when they were gossiping, Lavanya happened to be in the adjacent booth ! What they talked was actually true but they don't have to know that now, do they??

Loved how La rectified the situation ...A friend in need is a friend in deed :D

And NK didn't waste anytime conveying the same to Arnav...

And La and NK were funnily cute :D

For once Shash Gupta was not just a character... But a man of power :D

Payal's interrogation seemed more like she was assessing Khushi as Arnav's prospective partner... She is his friend after all :D

And how cute were arhi...

not caring about their career/degree anymore... I know may be probably practically irresponsible but still ... 😛 Who cares about degree when you have Arnav Singh Raizada

Loved how they only cared about each other ❤️

Loved the update...an awesome closure to everything !!

And Love you ❤️

Edited by asrcraze - 12 years ago

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Farwa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#142

can I too res.
yeaaa I am on first page I am so happy 🥳
*~*~EDITED~*~*
awesome chapter Soni loved it... So it seems like its a group decision to stop writing any more almost all of u have told so sad tht ArHi's Fan Fic writers r either leaving IF or r quiting writing I mean I havent read all writers work even so wht if later I want to read n they dont have it on IF or have on restricted blogs *sigh* anyways so yeah the update the start was funny NK bracing himself for asking La to become his GF n ended up in saying we will have the most beautifull babies n the La dilwaley tmhara NK dulhaniya a raha hai or something lolz... Really NK u should apply for hindi classes... Apny saath khud hi ziyad'ti kr li lolz... Wao Sim n Pam acha y does it mostly happens that those who dont talk much in classes n who always stand in a shadowed corner are always the one with most cheap mind n thinking and sazshi (well mostly to aisa hota hai)... They did this cheap girsl and they were thinking tht la is joking around n saying wht she said just to frighten them hain? N when she told them Khushi's father name omg un k totay ud gaye right now u see with whom u messed... Loved the ending... U disclosed everyting like who her father was n gave both the couples a happy ending... Loved it... A relation which started with the mistake tht never happened found its happily ever after... *lots of applause for u guys for bringing it I think it was the 1st collab in this style tht every chapter was posted by another writer and it was a superb idea... Again Soni u did a fab job

Edited by -Farwa_Ibrahim- - 12 years ago

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tina_1234

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Posted: 12 years ago

#143

Nycc endin
Will the b an epilogue ??

Edited by tina_1234 - 12 years ago

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Farah

@farah53

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Posted: 12 years ago

#144

Better res than late...

Unres

when did you both Rabba ve or in English terms have eye sex under the stars with the passionate music running in the background? 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

do your weird, aanken humping later, for the sake of sanity🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

Soni, you seriously took the eye sex thing to another level of hilarity!!!!😆

& did Payal really accuse Khushi of being Lolita??😲😆

& I loved it that Arnav thought Khushi lacked humor while she was sober..It hinted at a wicked sense of humor on his part😉Like he'd like Khushi to be drunk more than often...

& for once, in a story, Anjali was just a passing mention & not the almost 2nd lead, & thank God for that!

Well, I too felt very bad about late in closing Mistake, & thank you, Soni, for giving this such a concise closure.. Great job done!

PS: Why are you all swearing off writing??!! 😲 It's such fun!

Edited by farah53 - 12 years ago