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star94

@star94

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

nice start.. i am loving it already.

update soon

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Nivriti

@agreatperhaps

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#22

It's a really nice and interesting start, and I am waiting eagerly to see how you will develop this story ahead! :) Continue Soon, and please PM me! :D

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..Roop..

@..Roop..

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#23

another fab work of urs...

new n interesting concept...

loved the start..

feelng really bad for kriya...

let see wat happen next...

plz update the next part soon...

thnx 4 the pm...

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luv_arsha

@luv_arsha

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#24

awesome start...loved it very much

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Shailja

@---Shailu---

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#25

Truely Loved it !!!

Fantastic one Pasto darls =D

Do continue soon and PM me ^_^

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rubykriyansh

@rubykriyansh

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#26

Loved d concept ..!
Awsome update ..!
Update soon ..!

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Pihu.k11

@Pihu.k11

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#27

U kno,one thing which I really lik abt ur writings is u always choose some deep concepts!!
N u always work brilliantly on dem.. Here u showed d state of a person,who lost evrythng at a vry young age.. Lost evrythn brutally.. Hr dad in front of her tried for icatin wid her mom.. Evn tried to force himslf on hr n her mom lost her ownself so as to save her daughter n giv a beautiful life to him...
Yep,d dark hour started buh its gonna end soon.. As d thing o rathr d person who wud gv meanin to hr n hr life hS jus entered !!!

Loved it.. Waitin fr d nxt part :)
Update soon !

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Puja

@puja_arsha

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#28

Nyc ... Luvd d frst chappy... Its all an emotional stuff... Mazaa aaega padhne mai... Bt a question-hw did kria turn up to be a wh**e??? Her pain ws clearly visible... Waitng fr nxt chappy...:)