KR FF-Forging Bonds - Page 5

Originally posted by: aroma.arsha

haye la j to chaloo hotey hi khatam ho gya main
to coffee ka mug bhar k layi thi but coffee ey pehley chappy khatam ho gya galat baat hey
but wow concept it is
m just wanting to read this more nd more
to wait mat karwana please
jaldi update karna
kyuki nhi to study pey focus nahi kar paugi
haye vesey kriya drunk buri trha sey
rey so swet ha help her
main shrrabi main sharaabi haha
mujey j song yaad a ra tha
but superb i just love it
so m waiting jaldi update karna please please please
AROMA DEVIL FROM DEVIL ROCKERZZZ

Originally posted by: nature2

amazing start...
Jst luvd it.,poor gal😭

update soon

Originally posted by: anjee_007

another fab work of urs...

new n interesting concept...

loved the start..

feelng really bad for kriya...

let see wat happen next...

plz update the next part soon...

thnx 4 the pm...

Originally posted by: mEgical_arsha

Truely Loved it !!!

Fantastic one Pasto darls =D

Do continue soon and PM me ^_^

Originally posted by: puja_arsha

Nyc ... Luvd d frst chappy... Its all an emotional stuff... Mazaa aaega padhne mai... Bt a question-hw did kria turn up to be a wh**e??? Her pain ws clearly visible... Waitng fr nxt chappy...:)

Originally posted by: yogini64

Hats off to u upi 👏
tu itna achha kaise likh leti h
kriya's father was such a creep . . . Monster 😡
ohh . . . She lost her mom in a tender age 😭
vo bhi uske dad ki hi vajah se 🤬
& here she is . . . . A pros*itute by profession 😔
she's so devastated that she can't keep a count of the drinks she gulped 😒
luckily, a nice guy helped her . . . Rey (issi ka to intezaar tha humein 😆 )
well,, we don't mind agar clothes ussi ne change kia ho to 😉
he seems such a nice guy
Vo to hoga hi rey jo hai 😎

Originally posted by: Pihu.k11

U kno,one thing which I really lik abt ur writings is u always choose some deep concepts!!
N u always work brilliantly on dem.. Here u showed d state of a person,who lost evrythng at a vry young age.. Lost evrythn brutally.. Hr dad in front of her tried for icatin wid her mom.. Evn tried to force himslf on hr n her mom lost her ownself so as to save her daughter n giv a beautiful life to him...
Yep,d dark hour started buh its gonna end soon.. As d thing o rathr d person who wud gv meanin to hr n hr life hS jus entered !!!

Loved it.. Waitin fr d nxt part :)
Update soon !

Originally posted by: sadiyaswaron

Awesome start
Poor kria felt bad for her.
Looking forward to next part

Originally posted by: lovely7010

Awesome start
loved it

Originally posted by: arjuhiswaron007

Great Concept!😃