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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey friend...
i just came across ur FF...its an amazing concept...
the way u described the emotions anjali, khushi and arnav went through...a beautiful and Fab way...i was so touched with every update...especially whenever arnav sarcastically remarked khushi about her parents...they left her alone right...arnav and anjali have each other but she is all alone...i was really touched...
An Impeccable approach...a very interesting story...would be grateful if u'll please please add me up in ur buddy list n gimme a chance to be part of this FF's journey too...
they..arnav and khushi share a past n m so intrigued to know what happened that they separated and are so rude to each other now...
the flashback where they remember the time spent together...where she remember her parents...where he remember his parents...loved them a lot...So who is this Jaan???
thanks for sharing ur story with us :)


hatts off to ur effort😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: BarunSara

Di in my part dis ws an emotional update.. It ws jus superb! U hve wrtnd dwn evry emotions in a perfct manner. Realy luv dis stry so im waitn eagerly fr d nxt part!
Til dn kp smilin Tc



I will deferentially keep smiling after reading this.
Im shocked and overwhelm that you found it emotional so thank you sooo much for liking my writing.
i won't let you wait to long for my next update 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: jahnvi.luvs.ASR

hey friend...

i just came across ur FF...its an amazing concept...
the way u described the emotions anjali, khushi and arnav went through...a beautiful and Fab way...i was so touched with every update...especially whenever arnav sarcastically remarked khushi about her parents...they left her alone right...arnav and anjali have each other but she is all alone...i was really touched...
An Impeccable approach...a very interesting story...would be grateful if u'll please please add me up in ur buddy list n gimme a chance to be part of this FF's journey too...
they..arnav and khushi share a past n m so intrigued to know what happened that they separated and are so rude to each other now...
the flashback where they remember the time spent together...where she remember her parents...where he remember his parents...loved them a lot...So who is this Jaan???
thanks for sharing ur story with us :)


hatts off to ur effort😊


thank you sooo much im happy to know ppl are understanding there emotions. I love the part when Arnav sarcastic makes fun of khushi.
the flash backs will continue and will bring out there past. im touched that u reli enjoyed the story and hope you like the next updates.

'jaan' ur going to tell me who that is urself soon 😉

and thank you Again for liking the story
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Posted: 12 years ago
#24
So di im waitn fr d nxt part n stp sayn thank u 2 me u realy desrve dis comments. :) :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: BarunSara

So di im waitn fr d nxt part n stp sayn thank u 2 me u realy desrve dis comments. :) :)


sorry im addicted to the words 'sorry' and 'thank you' apparently my friends and family say i say it unnecessarily but thats just me. So you probable will see it alot, but i most likely won't say sorry if im at fault. 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Loved the way u portrayed the bro-sis bond :)
What Mr.Raizada said to Arnav is so true...mere physical presence is not enough, sharing n caring r very essential.
W8t 4 nxt,thnx 4 pm.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: babyhumz


thank you sooo much im happy to know ppl are understanding there emotions. I love the part when Arnav sarcastic makes fun of khushi.
the flash backs will continue and will bring out there past. im touched that u reli enjoyed the story and hope you like the next updates.

'jaan' ur going to tell me who that is urself soon 😉

and thank you Again for liking the story



hey no prob at all...m glad that i found it soon n now will be able to part of something this good...so if u dont mind can i share ur story with a friend of mine????

u deserve it gal😉
m just waiting for the day when u'll reveal more about their love😉😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hope you will find rest of the story interesting to.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: mdeshpande

Loved the way u portrayed the bro-sis bond :)

What Mr.Raizada said to Arnav is so true...mere physical presence is not enough, sharing n caring r very essential.
W8t 4 nxt,thnx 4 pm.



you welcome im more than happy to PM all the readers.
wow i like that you liked that bit... i love how everyone has there own bit that they like the best. thank you for tell me how you felt about that bit

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Posted: 12 years ago
#30
Just came across this ff..wow its beautiful
Great concept..would love to read it further.

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