JANNAT-MG FF-UPDATED PT 01 PG 01

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prachi sinha

@geetsmile

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

gr8 start diii..soo maan is lil naughty..nd geet apne bhai ki angel

waiting for next

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cutestar12

@cutestar12

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Nice ud cont soon. 😊

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maaneetmaahi

@maaneetmaahi

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Loved the CS
will read the part 1 later

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

interesting
wow geets brother sure is possessive for her
and on the other side we have maan who is afraid of his dad
well i guess this should be fun
even if its slow we will give it our full attention
but me sad that do sapne will be finishing soon😭
that was the first of your stories i read even before the jeevan sangini one
oh well guess all good things must come to an end huh unfortunately

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Dona

@Donnaa

Trailblazer

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

congrats for new story

lovely cs

nnice prologue

awesome update...

possessive brother

loved it...

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Tahitien-moon

@Tahitien-moon

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Wonderful

Golden Teddy Bear graphic

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Tyro

@Tyro

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Congrats on the new FF...

nice start...

continue soon...

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Sahiba

@sahibasharma

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

hey congrats for ur new ff...its good to see maan SINGH KHURANA as maan BHARDWAJ...hehe...something diff...and am sure u gonna rock this one too like ur other ffs...

first part is too good...geet and her bro share a cute relation but he is highly possessive bout her...i hope that doesnt create any prob btw maaneet...hehhe...

thanks for the pm...:) u said it will be in slow pace...no probs...update as per ur convenience but still i cant resist my temptation so i wud say plss update sooon...!!! lols...

keep it up!!!!!