||~Something About You~||#4 *COMPLETED*

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Hibernated

Posted: 12 years ago

#421

Ahhh wonderful. Are they finally going on a date? About time I reckon.

So glad she decided to be with him.

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LyssaPie

@LyssaPie

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#422

Totally understand Khushi's reason for just accepting what Arnav wants...

Arnav actually asked her out on a date 😲😲

Loved the Update!!

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seshatree

@seshatree

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#423

ha..finally he popped the question...

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panck

@panck

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#424

Thanks for the PM

Just caught up with the story – my you have been super prolific.

Chapter 30 : I loved the portrayal of her anguish at being orphaned and devastating effect the revelation has caused. Rohan in his support of her really stood tall.

Chapter 31: Her "numb restraint" was certainly expected. She is going to try and be a "perfect" child now. I really like this Arnav – his understanding of what she is going through is profound. Loved how he got her to "react".

Chapter 32: Shashi and Garima are certainly special people. Khushi knows that she is loved and is starting to move on. So touching So poignant yet beautifully simple

Chapter 33: Khushi admits Arnav helped her move on and knows he CAN help her to heal. And in helping her – he heals a little too. Finally an acknowledgement that she means "more".

Chapter 34: Khushi has grown up, accepted that she loves Arnav on his terms not hers AND he finally asks her out on a date….

What a beautiful progression of the tale I loved going through the emotions that have been brilliantly written.

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Anamika100

@Anamika100

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#425

This was the best chapter yet. I love the raw emotions that even the people feeling them do not understand and find overwhelming. Now this story is really living up to its promise.

I love Khushi's exploration of what long term commitment, belonging and forever has always meant to her and how it has changed now that she has found out her past. This is so earth shattering that the old Khushi is now morphing into an adult. Wow the sheer strength and guts of this girl...love her.

I also like how the old Arnav is now exploring how and why he set out on his path which is supposed to be devoid of attachment and love and how Khushi is disrupting it all.

Looking forward to more...