ArHi SS - P.E.R.F.E.C.T.I.O.N (Thd2 Link-Pg1) - Page 14

Originally posted by: rockingchamp

wow what a prologue 2 ...both of the epitome of perfect figures in there own way is thinking what the world has to say abt there perfect life ...this gonna change tere beleif or whatever they thot of being perfect and they would take a step towards marriage which would again be a perfect husband and wife duo for the world bur for themselves they would be strangers...i wonder whether they would marry for the sake of the world so they could be perfct epitome for this world...wow i loved dis ss ...chote and chutki great pet names u decided for them actually we love chutki...thnx for the pm the prologue was lovely...
Love u tk care ...
Keep smilin...
God bless...

Originally posted by: emistry

Interesting.. even the essence and optimum of perfection have families to deal with!!!

Like the touch of reality you brought in there! I am still excited to see where this story does!

Originally posted by: _disha_

Two prologues done!!!😊

Bring on the 1st chapter now !😳

For Arnav Perfection is supremacy and for Khushi its completion !

Both believe in Perfection but meaning of the same word for each are poles apart !

Originally posted by: rulama

Both the prologues were good and complemented one another. Now I am able to grasp what you are going to base your story on!

Its a good concept!

She who is a perfectionist and accomplished is traditional in outlook

He who is a perfectionist and accomplished doesn't care about tradition. He sets the rules and expects the rest to toe in line!

If you follow it you are with him. If not have mercy! its fireworks in full!

These two are destined to meet and their family is pressurizing them to settle down.

Will the two meet through the family or by themselves???

Lets see what happens when these two meet!

Waiting for your update dear.

I was waiting for more info to comment!

Originally posted by: bhaktiii

Perfectly imperfect?!!
I loved this trailer!

Originally posted by: MamiaRahman

this prologue2 make me more eager for the next update...

Originally posted by: ..SankiMedhz..

Okay...you know what? It was like the first prologue was the magazine article, and the second prologue was the reaction of Arnav and Khushi to their respective parts. I may be off base here, but that's what I thought. :)

The thoughts of what someone had said to them were so similar, in the fact that it questioned the integrity of either of them.

Looking forward to reading more :)

Originally posted by: Kritianya

thanks for the note
i thought u will clear about the article in some coming updates
vaise just read both the prologes again
just wanna give u a suggestion plz can u change miss India to any other title like miss bollywood or some thing like that bcoz i have seen that usually they participate in miss India & then afterwards enter bollywood not the other way round(except our dear lavanya aka sana who participated last year in miss India competetion & was in top 5 contestents) or of u like u can also change the year like 6 years or somethimg which can give u a benefit of crowning her as miss universe also(which she is in my eyes as i luv her a lot) there is one more reason also bcoz many bwood actress took part in miss India competetion also but as judges u can also make her that
vaise it was just my suggestions as i feel vry out of the place while reading that...there is one more reason as i m having very high expectations from this story after our belovd ipkknd left us in mid way so its just i want it to be perfect
Sry if u feel offended but plz do pm me ur views about the comment
& plz dont hesitate to give me pieace of ur mind or anything if u feel bad plz let me know about ur views
thanks once again for the clarification
plz update part1 soon
& that 2 a long 1

Originally posted by: shivanisaur

I loved this 2nd prologue! It was amazing..
The first prologue was about the degree of perfection of the lives of Arnav and Khushi in the eyes of the public. Whereas this prologue was more personal because a description of someone can make you know what a person is like but it is only when they start coming to life that you truly understand and bond with them. In this prologue you showed that although their lives are perfect they need a partner to fully complete it's perfectness..
It was a lovely update!

I can't wait for it to actually start!!

Originally posted by: saarah96

ooh didnt realise that prologue one is the articlee
ooh so they are perfect but not exactly as they arent married
so they need each other to be completely perfect
wonder how they will meet
will they see each other article and decide to meet each other