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thanks for the note
i thought u will clear about the article in some coming updates
vaise just read both the prologes again
just wanna give u a suggestion plz can u change miss India to any other title like miss bollywood or some thing like that bcoz i have seen that usually they participate in miss India & then afterwards enter bollywood not the other way round(except our dear lavanya aka sana who participated last year in miss India competetion & was in top 5 contestents) or of u like u can also change the year like 6 years or somethimg which can give u a benefit of crowning her as miss universe also(which she is in my eyes as i luv her a lot) there is one more reason also bcoz many bwood actress took part in miss India competetion also but as judges u can also make her that
vaise it was just my suggestions as i feel vry out of the place while reading that...there is one more reason as i m having very high expectations from this story after our belovd ipkknd left us in mid way so its just i want it to be perfect
Sry if u feel offended but plz do pm me ur views about the comment
& plz dont hesitate to give me pieace of ur mind or anything if u feel bad plz let me know about ur views
thanks once again for the clarification
plz update part1 soon
& that 2 a long 1

have gone thro' both prologues now. making connections THNX to ur note ;)) good u pointed it out. now 4 the chp.1. plzzz.

interesting prologue...waiting for the update...

woah now that is interesting. Are the new goal to achieve perfection the other perfectionist?

Ohhh! That makes more sense! So khushi and arnav were reading the prologue one as an article!

I loved this 2nd prologue! It was amazing..
The first prologue was about the degree of perfection of the lives of Arnav and Khushi in the eyes of the public. Whereas this prologue was more personal because a description of someone can make you know what a person is like but it is only when they start coming to life that you truly understand and bond with them. In this prologue you showed that although their lives are perfect they need a partner to fully complete it's perfectness..
It was a lovely update!

I can't wait for it to actually start!!

Great 2nd prologue!
So they both are looking for a life partner and think their life isnt perfect yet cause they dont have a wife or husband.
Update soon.


Edited...
Oh now I get it. Didn't realize it before.
Thanks for the note.

2nd prologue is also nice

waiting for updt